Confessing to The Night: LAST PART completed- pg 23 (manveer finally!) - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
jst read the part4 as well mst say it was brilliant 👏 u write so well manyata feelings explained so well awesome u can feel the pain manyatas going thru... aww uday didnt go... finally manveer in front of each other u stopped at such a point cant wait plz update soon n pm me as well when u do u say nxt will b last part aww it was so good n u write so well continue if u could i would loved to read it but only if u can...
take care n keep rocking 😊 looking forward to nxt update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Inkpen4877

Oh this was so beautifully well written! I am looking forward to the next part!!!


Thank you!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: princessnia

Itz awesome yaar.loved it.Cont soon.


Thank you nia..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ashukapoor007

Great upadte dear! Ty 4 d pm & update soon😃


Thanks..will do! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -JEHAN-

wowww...again...awesome!!and who is this guy!!!i hope UV..oh man who is this guy??plz continue soon...can't wait to raed the next part...


Thank you..!!
Lol..its a manveer ss..who else can he be? :p
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

Oh man seriously Payal...like seriously
how the hell do you do it?? I am seriously SPEECHLESS!
the update starts and i can feel Manyata's depression..then when she saw him,..i actually smiled and got happy with her..it was just her imagination..i frowned
and then the end...BRILLIANT but at the same time its torture caz i want to read more soo badly!! seriously continue as soon as you can..this is honestly one of the best pieces of writing i ever read..and i really mean it wen i say that!
also i understand that sometimes its hard to continue but really u have such amazing writing skills and it really feels like writing is just in-born in you so all i'll say is that even when ur depressed..use ur writing to free your mind and cheer urself up! and i agree..sometimes i have nothing planned out but when i sit down to write..ManVeer flows through so easily!
again amazing update adn please continue as soon as u can make time!


Awww Ranjana...thank youuu...!!! There is no limit to how happy you just made me!! I'm still grinning like a child who has been given her favourite chocolate..!! I'm so so glad you liked my work! And right, the next time I'm feeling down, I'll grab a pen. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: CharmingAngel7

jst read the part4 as well mst say it was brilliant👏 u write so well manyata feelings explained so well awesome u can feel the pain manyatas going thru... aww uday didnt go... finally manveer in front of each other u stopped at such a point cant wait plz update soon n pm me as well when u do u say nxt will b last part aww it was so good n u write so well continue if u could i would loved to read it but only if u can...
take care n keep rocking 😊 looking forward to nxt update


Awww thank you Angel..! So glad you liked it..and lol, sorry for the cliffhanger! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing work girl!!!👏 Now from the comments I guess ur name is Payal right? correct me if I'm wrong.

U have done a marvelous job with bringing out Manyatas emotions👏. the way u have played with her guilt for rejecting Uday and her want for Uday is just outstanding, I have read all the parts for like 10 times now. I could actually see what manyata was going through while reading the parts. I usually love Uday centric OS, FF. But this was just a masterpiece. Loved ur work, continue soon girl!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
pain pain nd pain ,...
That is the only thing surrounding manyatas life..
Her childish behaviour and her stubborn attitude bought nothing to her than pain..

Oh u r an awesome writer dear

Cont soon :)

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