Confessing to The Night: LAST PART completed- pg 23 (manveer finally!) - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
My apologies to all. This was supposed to be up long back but I was kinda low these days so just didnt feel like continuing this anymore. Something in me told it was unfair and I went through all the comments I recieved. And I'd have to be inhuman to quit this ss after going through 'em all! So determined, I sat with the pen and I still cant believe how fast it flowed down to my copy! God, manveer is so easy to write. I've never been so obsessed with any couple! I really dunno what I'll do if the show ends! Brings me near to tears everytime I think bout it.
Anyway that was too much of my blabbering! Here's the next part. Oh and I'd like to mention this whole plot came to my mind when I was listening to Life After You by Chris Daughtry. So I couldnt do the injustice of not including it here.
CONFESSING TO THE NIGHT

(Part four)
With a million feelings lacerating her heart like showering pieces of glass, her shaky foot touched the cold, dark road stretching out eternally before her. As she hesitated with the next step, she turned behind to look at the palace whose gate she was standing at-her home, that sheltered every insignificant details of her life, the house that woke up to his smiling face and retired to sleep with it. But all that remained of it now was a traumatising memoir of the only blissful and carefree moments her life had fetched her, the moments that could never be relived-the moments she had shared with him. Her heart clenched further at the thought. She had nothing left of her to live at the place that ceaselessly reminded her of him. She could not live with the thought of feeling him, yet being out of reach from him. The feelings of her breaking heart seemed to choke her. She took a few more steps hastily, wishing to be away from anything that declared its connection to him. The freezing wind bit at her skin as she stood in the middle of the dark, deserted road, every living creature engulfed by slumber at the passive hour of midnight. The faint moonlight was all she had to guide her legs.
Drawings a deep breath she trudged forward, her pace gradually increasing until she found herself running under the roof of the dark, starless night. She wanted to be like the wind gushing round her, carefree and directionless. Silent tears escaped her eyes, unhindered.
Ten miles from town and I just broke down
Spittin' out smoke on the side of the road
I'm out here alone just tryin' to get home
To tell you I was wrong but you already know
Believe me I wont stop at nothin'
To see you so I've started runnin'
All that I'm after is a life full of laughter
As long as I'm laughin' with you
I'm thinkin' that all that still matters is love ever after
After the life we've been through
'Cause I know there's no life after you.

She wiped the hot streak of tears burning her cheeks. One chance is what she yearned for. 'Was it such big a demand?' she threw at the darkness hemming her in. Its silence echoed the reply her heart supplied readily. Yes, it was a big demand. Too big to be fulfilled. She shut her eyes, coming to a halt as more tears tried to make their way out.
"Princess-"
It was a soft appeal, barely audible but seemed to holler in her ears nonetheless. Her eyes jerked open and her breathing hitched as she sie took in the person standing before her. That same build, those same hair, that same face. It was him. His eyes were dazzling against the dark like a sparkling pool, his flawless face seemed to be carved out of rare marble, set ablaze by the irradiance of the moon. His lips curved to form a smile, setting a rush of hormones through her body. She felt a weight being lifted off her heart as she finally saw the look on his face that she hankered after. Her nerves sent hasty impulses throughout her body making her plod towards him. Words died in her mouth as she stood bemused, her eyes drinking every inch of his god-like face.
Smiling fron ear to ear amidst her tears, she lifted her hand up to touch his face anticipating the surge of electricity through her skin. But none came. A slight panic made its way upto her as she raised the other hand to hug him. All she grabbed was air. She stared in shock as the figure before her kept fading before disappearing into thin air. She felt the last left shred of life being snatched away. She could not believe her mind could play such a ruthless trick with her. She sagged down unable to decipher what to do. Helplessness and misery closed in upon her pushing her to a cramped hole, leaving her to suffocate. No more tears oozed out of her eyes. She was drained. She looked up at the moon only to feel its brightness mock her, laugh at her dark, dismal life. She rose up, determined to be away from the fateful place her mind chose to hallucinate.-to be continued in the next post.
Sorry! I know that was short but I've to rush for my tuitions right now. I'll continue once I return home!
Edited by Grenade - 13 years ago
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...continued
A seemingly eternal span of running succeeded in making her muscles pay. Her legs throbbed painfully, her chest heaving with each strenous breath going in her lungs, her heart putting in twice its usual effort to keep her mechanism from crashing. But that wasnt meant to stop her. Instead it made her feel somewhat better as her exhaustion helped lift a fraction of the pain that infected her heart. That was enough to instil a whit of energy in her aching legs as she started running with an increased intensity. The dense woods spreading on from the edge of the road gradually shrunk to bushes which further made way for grassy stretches of land.
She slowed down as she saw from a distance a slumped figure on a bench lit by a dim lamp-post. She stopped a few feet from the hunched figure burying his face in his palms with his elbows resting on his knees. As she wondered whose life was as messed up as hers, forcing him out of his home at such an hour of the night, she noticed a briefcase resting beside his foot.
An invisible force held her immobilized at her spot. Something about his painfully arched back compelled her to stay and urged her to see his face. As if on cue, his head rose and turned back, his eyes searching until they found hers. Her eyes widened in stupefaction as they gazed into those same dark, bottomless ones yet again. His eyes narrowed to focus at her amidst the dark before producing an exact replica of the shock in her eyes as recognition spread through them.
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Though I intended this update to be the last part of this ss, I just couldnt bring myself to end it yet. I just kept on writing and writing and writing and its impossible to fit it all into a single chapter. So y'all have to bear with me through another chapter for the end..! This update is just the result of all your lovely comments! Nothing can be more encouraging!
So,
LIKE!
COMMENT!
LOMMENT!! Lol
Edited by Grenade - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOww...dii...AWESOME...loved it sooo much...add me to ur pm list plzzz...!!!!
👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Its awesome.
please do continue soon!

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Posted: 13 years ago
just one word WOWWW...
continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
they say good things come to those who wait..i waited n my wait was rewarded:) you r finally back wit an amazing update...if possible pls write d next one soon dear:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was too good poor M 😭 please PM 4rm nxt part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AKlover-16

WOww...dii...AWESOME...loved it sooo much...add me to ur pm list plzzz...!!!!

👏👏


Thanks a lot sissy...okay, will do. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: wendy25

Its awesome.
please do continue soon!



Thank you sooo much!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -JEHAN-

just one word WOWWW...

continue soon plz...


Thank you so much Jehan...!!

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