Confessing to The Night: LAST PART completed- pg 23 (manveer finally!) - Page 10

first of all stop saying u r boring us...m saying fr the last time u r not and never will...hw cn u say tht??...u just write so beautifully...i loved ur update ❤️...it was such a sad one...even though i prefer happy manveer updates always...bt i love sad ones as well especially wen the emotions in them are potrayed so well as in this one...it makes me feel fr her so much which rarely happens u see when m watching the show...and u know my heart just sunk when i read these lines: 😭
"Manyata" she heard his faint voice through the death grip she had on her phone. "Take care". The call disconnected.

Originally posted by: akshi_t

first of all stop saying u r boring us...m saying fr the last time u r not and never will...hw cn u say tht??...u just write so beautifully...i loved ur update ❤️...it was such a sad one...even though i prefer happy manveer updates always...bt i love sad ones as well especially wen the emotions in them are potrayed so well as in this one...it makes me feel fr her so much which rarely happens u see when m watching the show...and u know my heart just sunk when i read these lines:😭
"Manyata" she heard his faint voice through the death grip she had on her phone. "Take care". The call disconnected.

She closed her eyes giving in to the pain that awaited her. People bend hell and heaven to confess their love in the most special way. She did not even get the chance. She did not want to open her eyes anymore, did not want to let a breath in her lungs, did not want a pulse to throb. Because there is no point in making an existence when the very hope and reason one had been counting on dies.

again u wrote a lovely update...sooo hoping UV comes back in the last part...i don't want it to be a sad ending...so eager fr it...update soon when u get free!!!😊

My heart just melted reading your comment..thank you sooo much! And dont worry, I hate sad endings too. So, no way am I gonna put myself through the pain of writing a sad ending! :)
And once again, Thank you!!

wow...

Originally posted by: princessaaliya

wow...

that was simply brilliant!

loved it to bits and pieces!

the way you describe emotions is simply wonderful..waiting for more!

Awww...thank you sooo much! :)

r u srs ur gvin sumthin wonderful,elegant,beautidul d name torture...i thouroughly enjoyed all of them...it was beautiful...filled with emotions...u deserve a 👏...it was very good...

Originally posted by: Grenade

Thank you so much Jehan..lol I thought it was boring without enough of udayveer..just manyata and her feelings.! But thank you for liking it inspite of it..! :)

Originally posted by: ilvuday

r u srs ur gvin sumthin wonderful,elegant,beautidul d name torture...i thouroughly enjoyed all of them...it was beautiful...filled with emotions...u deserve a👏...it was very good...

Thank you so much!! :)

Originally posted by: -JEHAN-

i love uday aloottt...but in a way it was about uday...right she was crying for his love...so how can u say that it was boring and without udayveer...this chapter was about manyata's feeling about UDAY...so indirectly..it was about uday...and as idesperately wanna see these kinda scene in show too...i hope i really hope we get some intense scenes from M side too like these...really wanna see her crying for his love feeling guilty cursing herself for doing what she is did and is doing with our prince...and she will soon...i hope so...😳

u know what i again read it...and u know what right now i am crying...😭seriously...u wrote her emotions so amazingly perfect that icouldn't stop my self...and i am crying...tears are still rolling down my cheeks...i can feel how much pain she issuffering from...😳

amazing...👏👏👏...loved it...update soon...waiting for the next chapter...

Awww jehan..I'm sorry to make you cry..but I cant explain how special you just made me feel..!! I had never imagined something like this..that someone could actually feel so much from my writing..! Thank you Jehan thank you so much! And I too like everyone pray that Manyata undergoes the much awaited change of heart. Hope remorse hits her soon!

Pliz cont soon.dying for ur update...

@Surya.Ravi Thanks... :)
@princessnia Yes dear I will..just waiting for my exams to get over..two more to go..!!