manveer :an eternal love story (ch 31-pg 92)ended - Page 46

Originally posted by: ashukapoor007

Jazzy read ur 23 Updates! 0MG y wrote dem soo beautifully finally Manyata is aware ov her feelings! Pls pm me wen u update & yeah continue soon 😃

Originally posted by: imkool

hey jazzy,,,,hi dear😃

this update is just amazing yaar...i completely loved it...😛

gosh nw manyta is aware of her feelings fr uday...wow...now next chapter is gonna be interesting...plz update next part soon.😛

Chapter 24

It was morning time, manyata got up and smilingly welcome the sunrays with a new hope.

She sat and saw the new rays of light in the form of a hope, uday hadnt picked her phone last night.

M:so yuvraj udayveer singh apni princess se naraz hain. But hum bhi rajkumari manyata kumari hain. Hum tumhe mana kar hi rahenge, hann nahi toh.

She smiled at her own thoughts

M:uday humme pata hai humne tumhe bohot hurt kiya hain, but dusra mauka toh bhagwan ko bhi milta hai na, aur phir tum bhi toh humse pyaar karte ho. Hum tumhe jyada der naraz nahi hone denge, ye humara wada hai manyata ka apne uday se, haan nahi toh.

She got ready and freashened up, when she got out there was a huge smile on her face

"ahem ahem"

She turned "maa aap"

K:kyu hum apni beti se milne nahi aa sakte.

M:of course maa

K:waise kya baat hain aap ka chehra aaj kuch jyada hi khil raha hai

M:nahi toh maa, aisa kuch nahi hai.

Komal smilingly took her to the mirror and stood beside her

K: yakin na aaye toh khud ko aapni aankho se dekh lijiye.

M:waise maa chehra toh extra glow kar raha hai

K:aur iski wajah hai uday, haina?

M:maa aap.

K:beta humne aapko janam diya hai, jab aap choti thi na aur bol bhi nahi paati thi tab aap ki khamoshi se bhi hum pata laga lete the ki aap ko kya pareshani hai. Aur ab kya aapki khushi ka andaza bhi nahi laga sakte hum.

M:haan maa aap toh sab kuch janti hain.

K:aur ye bhi ke ab humari beti ko uday pasand hai.

M:maa par meine usse naraz kar diya.

K:nahi beta, hum uday ko bachpan se jante hai. Uday khud se naraz ho sakte hain par aap se kabhi nahi. Jab aap humse dur hui thi na tab ek uday hi the jin hone aap ke laute ki ummed ko barkaraar rakha tha. Humhe aaj bhi wo din yaad hai jab bachpan mein aap uday ki plastic ki talwaar se chot aayi thi.

While saying this tears flowed from her eyes. Manyata wiped it

M: aur phir?

K:phir kya chot bhale hi aap ko lagi thi par dard uday ko hua tha, beta aapse jyada uday roye the uss din. Wo chot toh bhar gayi, uska nishaan aapke kande par aaj bhi hai par uss ke saath uday ke dil par aaj bhi uss jakham(wound) ke nishaan hai. Aapke jaane ke baad uday ne jaise apne dil ke charo taraf ek dewaar si khadi kar di thi.

M:maa ab wo dewaar hum todenge.

Komal felt very proud at manyata, she blessed her and left the room.

M:so uday be ready I m coming.

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After some hours,In jaigarh mansion

Uday finished his works and was heading to his room when his phone ranged

Uday:hello?

M:awaaz na pehchaane ka natak accha kar leto ho.

Uday:kya chahiye tummhe?

M:maafi.

Uday:bekaar ke kaamon ke liye waqt nahi hai hai humare paas.

M:aur hona bhi nahi chahiye,humare saath date par chaloge?

Now this was a shock for him,but he regained his self.

Uday:humare paas waqt nahi hai

M:toh waqt nikalo na.

Uday:manyata, hum abhi meeting mein hain

M:ghar mein kaunsi meeting hai tumhari huh? Aur wo bhi hall mein,

Uday looked around

M:(in flirty voice)waise iss brown t-shirt mein kaafi handsome lag rahe ho,haan nahi toh

He again looked his side way

M:mudo..(turn)

Uday:what?

M:arrey baba piche ghumo

He turned around

Manyata was standing there giggling. She came to him with a flirty smile on her face.

M:ek yuvraaj ko jhoot bolana sobha nahi deta.

Uday:what do u want now?

M:forgive me.

Uday:forgiven happy!!

M:ye kaisi forgiveness hai

Uday:atleast tumhe ye ehsaas toh hua ke galti tumahari bhi thi.

M:humari koi galti nahi thi.

Uday:g8 toh maafi kis baat ki. Tumhare hisaab se saari galti meri hai haina.

M:humne tumse jo kuch bhi kaha maafi uske liye maangi,(flirts with him) jo hua uske liye nahi.

Uday stares at her in amazement.

M:waise tumahri jo bhi meeting hai usse khatam karo, do ghante baad humme gateway par milna ok.hum tumhare wait karenge.

Uday:hum nahi aayenge

M:(caressing his face)tum jaroor aaoge

She smiles and leaving when again..

Uday:manyata hum nahi aayenge samjhi tum!

M:(without turning)hum phir bhi tumhare intezaar karenge uday.

She left. He was drumstruck by her behaviour.

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J was in her room humbing music when vijay bhai entered.

Vb:wow j bhai,

She turned to look

Vb:kya baat hai jaggat aaya nahi aur tum abhi se hi khush

J:c'mon vijay bhai, wo abhi nahi aayega

Vb: let him live his life peacefully

J:(rolls her eyes)vijay bhai!!

Vb:just joking!! Waise ab humare dono bhai pyaar ke panchi ho chuke hai.

J:matlab?... ek min jiji…

Vb:hmm.. m bhai gayi hai uday se apne pyaar ka ijhaar karne

J:wow!! Vijay bhai so exciting.

Vb:ek aur exciting news de.

J:hmm.

Vb:tumhara romeo niche intejaar kar raha hai.

J:wat? Apne ab tak nahi bataya…OMG hum thik toh lag rahe hain na

Vb:take a chill pill j bhai.. now c'mon.

They moves downstair together

But j didn't notice jagat, she got disheartened.

J:jaggat toh nahi hai, humme niche nahi jaana

Vb:arrey ruko na j bhai

J:kaha na nahi, mood nahi hai kisise bhi baat karne ka.

She turned to move back when heard him

"humse bhi nahi"

She looked at him

He was standing there.

J run to him and hugged him tightly.

J:toh humare saath mazak kiya jaa raha tha.

Jaggat:ab agar mazak nahi karte toh tumhare itne changed expression kaise dekhne milte.

J:stop it now.jaggat tumhe pata hai..(cutting her in between)

Jaggat:humme pata hai ke tumhari jiji mil gayi hain

J:how do u.. oh yes of course vijay bhai must have spilled the beans out.

They out laughed and shared some talks

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Manyata was desperately waiting for uday at the decided venue

M:bade attitude ke saath kaha tha na, ke tum jaroor aaoge, ab dekha nahi aaya na ab tak.

She paced here and there

M:kaha tha usne nahi aayega but but tum bhi bilkul buddhu ho, keh diya fir bhi wait karungi. Ab kya yaha bhajan karu akeli haan nahi toh.

Till then she saw a stall of golgappe(pani puri)

M:golgappe!! ..kya karu bohot bhook bhi lagi hai. Haayye rabba kya karu. Jab tak ye uday nahi aa jata ek plate golgappe mein kya burai hai.

When she was moving towards the stall the gaurds walked with her. She off sent the guards and headed to the stall

M:bhaiya ji ek plate golgappe laga na, ek dum thike aur chatpate, thik hai.

She took the plate and picked it up and put that puri in her wide opened mouth.

M:aur tikha..

When someone interrupted "itna thikha nahi khate"

M:(without noticing)arrey golgppe khane ka asli maza tab aata hai jab aankho se paani nikale, bhaiya ji aur thikha…

She picked the puri when that person holded her hands "kaha na itna thikha nahi khate"
m:oye chod mera haath….

When she looked at the person she gulped down

M:uday… tum kab aaye.

Uday:tabhi jab tum aise pagalpann kar rahi thi.

M:haww…ye pagalpann nahi hai, ye toh golgappe hain(said in a childish manner)

Uday saw her innocent face and laughed really hard.

Uday:oh god!! Princess…

M:princess.. matlab tumne humme maaf kar diya

Uday:hum tumse naraz hi kab the

M:toh itna cold behave kyu kiya?

Uday:tumne bhi toh aisa hi kiya tha

M:hmm. Toh hisaab barabar

Uday:abhi nahi

M:kyu?

Uday:tumne kaha tha humare saath date par chalogi, so ready?

They both headed to the car,manyata sent the gaurds back

M:(whispered in his ears)humare bich guards ka kya kaam.

Uday saw in her eyes, he drove the car

They reached the place as directed by manyata.

It was a very beautiful open garden with a white gazebo.

This was the first time uday was mesmerized by both the beauty. One beside him smiling and other in front of him.

They walked till the gazebo.

It was dawning and they both saw the sunset at that point as the place was really opened.

They had their lunch and had much talks. There were two wine glasses at front of them

Uday:interesting princess!!

M:have it first

They both had their share.

They really enjoyed a lot and was leaving when manyata held uday's hand

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Maya picked her phone "kaam ho gaya"

"yes maam, usne sahi glass piya hai"

Maya "good"

She hang the phone and said to herself "manyata ab hum dekhte hain tum kaise bachti ho"

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Uday:kya hua princess any problem

Then he looked her wine glass and sighed,her glass was not empty. She only had one gulp of it.

Uday:lagta hai princess ko wine pasand hi nahi aayi

M:wine nahi tumhari formalities pasand nahi aayi.

Uday:hum samjhe nahi princess

M:uday just be normal with me

Uday:hum normal hi hain,..

M:uday plzz…

Uday:princess

M:uday let me complete

Manyata stood in front of him. She tooh his hand in hers and stared in his deep eyes.

M:uday hum tumse koi bade bade vaade nahi kar akti, sach kahoon toh hum khud nahi jaanti ke hum un vaadon ko nibha payenge bhi ke nahi. Kal jo bhi humne tumse kaha wo baatein wo kadve shabd ek teer ki tarah humare dil mein mein lage hain. Humme apni inn kash ma kash ka jawaab tab nahi pata tha

Uday(staring in her eyes)aur ab?

M:ab hum samjh chuke hain, uday hum bas itna jaante hain ki hum tumse bohot pyaar karte. I love u love u a lot.

There were tears in her eyes, uday slowwly wiped her tears when she hugged him tightly.

Uday too hugged her back.

They lived this moment

After sometime they broke apart.

Uday :"kya baat hai princess humme nahi pata tha humari princess itni romantic bhi ho sakti hai"

M:yuvraj udayveer singh abhi tak tumhe humare bare mein pata hi kya hai.

Uday:toh baat nahi abhi pata kar lete hain, waise bhi dur dur tak yahaan koi nahi hai. Sirf tum aur hum.

M:uday humme tumhare intensions kuch theek nahi lag rahe hain, humme ghar chalna chahiye.

Uday holded her by her waist "aise kaise princess, abhi toh humme apne pyaar ka izhaar karna baaki hai"

He cupped her face "I love u princess more than my life."

Manyata smiled but soon she felt dizzy.

Uday:princess kya hua

M:uday wo.. kuch thik nahi lag raha.

Uday:humme lagta hai ab hum dono ko chalna chahiye.

He took her to the car when she twisted her legs and was about to fall when he catch hold of her

Uday:sambhal kar princess!!

M:hum thik hain

But she was not,her head was spinning.

He drove to rajmahal.

As they entered the mahal gates. They both got off from the cars when manyata fall down at the ground

Uday:PRINCESS….

Uday rushed to her and so all the guards

He lifted her face in his palm and was shocked to see her condition

She was unconscious, her face become pale and blood was oozing out of her mouth..

Uday:princess…

So friends how was this, hope u all liked it

I tried my level best to write it and I know there was not much manveer in this part also but will be there much in upcoming parts

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