SS I was wrong (MANVEER) chp 16 pg 30 end of SS

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Mahibeejay

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

So sweet part loved it...thanks dear for updating...waiting for next one!!! 👏

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

its okay tanvi...we will wait till monday...

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sonia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

ohhh datss luvly but too short...write da next part soon...

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SaHillover101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Loved the update!!! Now I'll hafta wait til Monday to see what happens next!! Plzzz do continue sooner if u can!!:)

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princess_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: AKlover101
Loved the update!!! Now I'll hafta wait til Monday to see what happens next!! Plzzz do continue sooner if u can!!:)

Thanks fizza... :)

Will try...!!

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princess_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Part 13

He wrapped his arms around her waist.. And gently brougth her closer to him... She was no less... She wrapped her arms around his neck.. Both of them were smilling like a fool...

Manyata: Hey... (whispering)

Uday: Hey princess...

Manyata: So you missed me...?

Uday: Na I was busy with Sasha... (naughtily)

Manyata: Hahahahaha Udayveer you think ki mein iss ghatia majak (joke) mein phas jayungi...?

Uday: Ha you got me this time( laughing)

Both of them were enjoying each others company,...

Uday: So excited for tomorrow...?

Manyata: Ofcourse I am...

Uday: Hona bhi chahiye kal humari SHAADI jo ho rahi hai... (smilling)

Manyata: You know what Uday... I am so delighted to have you...

Uday: Me too manyata Me too...

The duo smilled at each other... Leaning inside... to Kiss each other... Just then they heard a voice...

Manyata seperated... She was freaking out... While Uday went behind one of the trees in the garden.. Manyata picked the duaptta which she had brought... And wrapped it around her face...

It was Vijay bhai...

Vijay bhai: Dhanno yaar please manjao na... (eyes closed and walking as if he is drunk)

Manyata: (giggled a bit)

Vijay bhai: Dhanno... Nahi please please Basanti kaki (aunt) ko mat bulao.. Please...

Uday came in to the picture... Looking at Vijay bhai.. And then at Manyata... Confused...

Uday: Yeh kya hai...? (whispering) (so that Vijay bhai would not get distracted)

Manyata: Uday... Vijay bhai neend mein chal rahe hain... (laughing)

Uday: Kya...? Isse pehele ki Dhanno humpar atttack kar... Hum yahan se chalte hain...

Uday gave Manyata a sweet kiss on her cheeks and waved and went out of the gates...

While Manyata grabbed her phone out of her pocket... and recorded Vijay bhai's banter...

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She could not sleep the whole night... Due to excitement...She glanced at the clock... It was 7:30 am... She woke up with a smile... And went inside her bathroom...

She litteraly danced in the shower... She started singing...

" Mehendi laga ke rakhna doli saja ke rakhna lene tujhe au gauri ayenge tere sajna.."

Just when Vijay bhai enterred the room... He could hear a song... He realised it was his M bhai who was singing... And laughed... He stood outside her door...

Vijay bhai: Ohooo M bhai shaadi ki itni jaldi...?

Manyata: Shut up vijay bhai (shouting from inside)

Manyata came out of the bathroom... she was wearing a beautiful Anarkali... It was Pink in colour... With a tint of sky blue in it... And her hair were loose... Even Vijay bhai was stunned at her beauty... This was the first time he was seeing her without make up... With VB's eyes wide open and mouth wide open too...

Manyata: Vijay bhai... Don't worry hum Dhanno nahi hai.. Hum appko chod ke nahi jayenge...

Vijay bhai : Yeh Dhanno kaun hai M bhai...?

Manyata : Lo app ko toh dhanno se shaadi karni thi na...?

She showed VB the video she made last night... The look on VB's face was a treat to watch... She was laughing so hard that water welled up in her eyes...

Vijay bhai: M bhai humein yeh phone dedo... (trying to snatch the phone..)

Manyata : In your dreams Vijay bhai...

She ran out of her room...Laughing and running down the stairs... And Vijay bhai behind her... Runnig through the hallway... Laughing Laughing and laughing... And vijay bhai was almost crying...

She was still running... When she realised she bumped into someone...

Sorry for the extremly short update... I apologize...

But yea This will be something merely different now...

Manyata will have a past...

To know more please stay tuned...

And dont hit me with Eggs... Please...

Tanvi... :)

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SaHillover101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Loved the update!! Plzzz do continue soon!!:)

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princess_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: AKlover101
Loved the update!! Plzzz do continue soon!!:)

Thanks Fizza... And thanks for not throwing Eggs on me...!!

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sonia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

really superb...but very short...specially da kiss...hahahha

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princess_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

#160

Part 14

She recieved the shock of her life... Her past was standing in front of her.. Yes Ryan, it was Ryan... She felt a current go through her body... she felt that she's lost.. She she she fainted...

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She woke up in her warm bed... Her mind giving her signals that someone's holding her hand.. But due to the moisture in her eyes.. she could not see the person.. but she knew this much... It was a man... And his hand's touch felt familiar... Finally rubbing her eyes... She saw it was Uday..

Manyata: Uday tum yahan...? Dadisahab ne tumhe dekh liya toh..?

Uday: Princess hum yahan Dadi sahab se permission lekar ayye hain.. Yeh sab chodo.. Tell me how r you feeling now..?

Manyata: I'm feeling fine Uday...

Just when she hugged him... They both heard a knock on the door.. They broke apart.. And Uday went to open the door.. He opened the door and he came again...

Uday:Hey buddy.. How are you..?

Ryan: I'm fine UV... Btw may I come in..?

Uday: Sure dude... Come have a seat..

Ryan had a bouquet in his hands..Manyata did not want to see his face... It was horrible.. (he is good looking lekin for M he is horrible) Uday and Ryan both sat opposite each other on the plush leather sofa in her room.. while she lying half on her bed...

She immidiately compared both the mans... Ryan was pale and looking as if he has got up from his sleep right now.. While Uday looked angelic... In the Navy blue T-shirt he was wearing.. She smiled at Uday..

Ryan: Uday may I talk to her..?

Uday: Sure Ryan...

Ryan got up from the sofa.. and started walking toward Manyata.. She felt scared...

Ryan: Hey princess Manyata.. this is for you...(handing her the bouquet)

Manyata: Thanks...

Ryan: Get well soon...

That's all he could say.. He stood up.. and smiled at Uday.. And left while Uday was wondering something..

Manyata: Do you know him Uday...?(suspiciously)

Uday: That should be my question...

Manyata: Yes Uday...

Uday: But how..?

Manyata told him her and Ryan's story.. She was crying by now... Just when Uday hugged her and said

Uday: Hey no problem princess.. Just stop thinking about him.. And tell me should we postpone the marriage..? I don't think you will be able to make it up today..

Manyata: No Uday.. We are getting married today.. That's final...

Uday: OK... Ok my tantrum queen.. I'll go tell Dadi sahab..

Manyata: Fine...

The meetings of her and Ryan played in her mind... She recalled only one thing.. That gave her pain... And then she recalled Uday telling her "I LOVE YOU"

Flash back...Manyata at age 13

She was wearing her kurta and salwar... Just then a man with simple pant and shirt... Caught hold of her hand... and smiled at her.. She too smiled... And happily walked with him.. Yes Ryan was her first crush... She had been dating him.. though it was a Chawl love story... But it felt good... She felt happy and warm in his arms...

But when her story changed...

OK so here we end...

Manyata has 3 guys in her life while 2 are gone..

I know it seems boring but you will find out..

Ur comments matter to me alot

Tanvi:)