SS I was wrong (MANVEER) chp 16 pg 30 end of SS

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snowdream

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

That was so beautifull...pls update soon

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vaishali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

wow dear it was just superb part plz update soon dear

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princess_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Part 12Today was a celebration day at the Jaigadh palace... It was Yuvraaj Udayveer's haldi ceremony...

(UV's POV)

Unnati came running into Uday's room... But then she stopped... at the door... Shocked to see me...Uday: Kya hua choti...?Unnati: Dada you look stunning...(excitedly..)Uday was wearing a white colour kurta pajam... (shervani but not the heavy one) and Unnati was wearing a white dress with a red lace... Uday: Thanks Choti...(smiling)Unnati: Agar Manyata aapko aaj dekhti na toh faint hee hojati...Uday started blushing... His face turning red... Unnati noticed that and stopped teasing him... They both came down... Uday sat on the chair and all the ladies started putting haldi... ******In the meantime at the Devgadh palace... Manyata was pacing here and there in her room... Waiting for the haldi water to come from Uday's house... Just when Komal arrived...Komal: Manyata beta humne Maharaj Giriraj se baat ki hai... Haldi kuch hee der mein aajayigi...Manyata: Accha very good... Accha batao mein kaisi lag rahi hu... (flaunting her dress)Manyata was wearing a sweet RED colour lehenga... As it was Uday's choice... She asked her mom about it excitedly..Komal: App toh bilkul pari lag rahi hain... Chaliye ab bum neeche jate hai humein kuch kaam hai... ******The haldi ceremony was now over at the Jaigadh palace... Uday moved upstairs when his sister told him...Unnati: Dada aapko pata hai jo paani se apko nehelaya gaya hai na wohi paani Bhabhi bhi use karegi... Is'nt that cool...?Uday: Yea choti... ********A maid from Uday's home came inside the main entrance... Holding a big bowl in her hand... Decorated with laces,net clothes etc etc... Manyata jumped excitedly as her haldi ceremony was going to start... They took the water from the maid and everyone started playing holi with the haldi.. (as VB stated) The same rituals took place...Everything was going on well... *****Manyata was now in her room... Resting... It was a hectic day... Just then she thought of calling Uday... That surely would make up her mood... She dialed his number... And he pucked the callUday: Hey princess... Manyata: Hiii Uday... Aaj tumhari haldi kaisi huyi..?Uday: Bahut acchi huyi... Jo bhi auratein humein haldi laga rahi thi unke chere ka noor dekhna chahiye tha tumhe(mischiveously)Manyata: Accha bacchu toh yeh baat hai... Tum toh ruke mein kaise un auraton ka bharta banati hu.. Haan nahi toh..Uday:hey wifey... Lets meet na.. .Hum toh tumhe dekhne ke liye tarse jaa rahe hain... (pleading tone)Manyata: Chal halkat vede... Dadisahab ko pata chalgaya na toh tujhe chodengi nahi...Uday: Hayee kisi ko kuch pata nahi chalega... Aaj raatko 12 'o' clock ko... In your garden... *******Manyata glanced at the clock.. it was 12 now... Time to go... She quitely took a dupatta and wrapped it around her head.. So that nobody recognizes her... She was walking through the passage... Slowly slowly... In pin drop silence... just then she bumped into someone... It was Vijay bhai... He mumuredVijay bhai: Dhanno yeh kya kar rahi ho... Humse shaadi karlo hum gay nahi hai...Manyata realised Vijay bhai was sleep walking... She controlled herself from laughing and went away... She quitely reached the garden... And saw him standing there...He was smirking... She reached near him... And he caught her in his arms... To be continued... Hope you like it..Ur comments matter to me alot...Tanvi:)

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snowdream

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

oh it ended so soon...it was amazing ...pls continue soon

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Sakura24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

THat Vijay bhai part was awesome!!!
And so was the haldi function
I'm really excited to see what happens next
Please update soon!!!

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princess_T

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: Cham42195
THat Vijay bhai part was awesome!!!
And so was the haldi function
I'm really excited to see what happens next
Please update soon!!!

Thanks Cham...!!!

will update 2morrow...

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princess_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: Fantasyangel
plzzz conthinue chooon...

I'll update 2morrow...!!

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Anny

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

Hey princess it was too beautifull but too short,update soon

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princess_T

@princess_T

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: annysyed
Hey princess it was too beautifull but too short,update soon

Thanxx Anny...

U can call me Tanvi...:)

And i'll update next part soon...

Sorry for the short update...:(

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princess_T

@princess_T

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#150

NOTE

oopss I completely forgot 2morrow is Saturday... Inspector MOM will be at home... Sorry but now I'll update on MONDAY...Sorry for saying " I'll update 2morrow" to everyone... Im sorry i completely forgot SATURDAY yaani Khatra... Moms gonna be at home...SorryTANVI :)

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