SS I was wrong (MANVEER) chp 16 pg 30 end of SS

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hey guyzz this is my first os.. so really hope u guyzz like it
I was Wrong...
(M's POV)
I was shocked to see, all the chawl people,amma and Akash's mother all of them were insulting me and yelling at me. Just then I heard a voice.Yes, it was Uday he had come here to rescue me.
Uday: thats it. You people claim to be Manyata's family, and now when ur beloved son is dead u are insulting her. If u wanna know about Akash then talk to me because according to u I am his murderes right?
Manyata: Stay out of this Uday..
Uday: Just because u hate me and I hate u that does not mean I will permit anyone to insult my Fiance
Manyata : but... Uday
Uday : yaa Mrs Verma (to akash's mother) U want to know about Akash no? then listen I just invited ur sone to fight with me I never even thought to kill him.It was just an accident. And if he is a GOOd person then why the hell did he come and fight with me ?
Akash's Mother :What proof do you have ?
Uday: here (he handed a cellphone to her)
Just then I peeped in to see the video.Akash's mother was shocked to hear harsh words from Akash's mouth for Uday and she even agreed the fact that it was an accident. Without feeling any kind of sympathy for them I left the place before anyone could speak to me.
Manyata : Jaisingh car nikaliye humein ab chalna chahiye
Jaisingh: Ji your highness
After I left I saw even Udays car leaving.
( In the car ) ( M's POV)
I felt something strange.I looked at the ring Uday gave me this morning and I thought of wearing it in the correct finger.But then I stopped and thought the person who gave me this wring will fix it in the right place.
Manyata: I was wrong Uday.You still love me and I love you too
hope you guyzz like it 😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thankyou so much😊😃
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Originally posted by: annysyed

Nyc part and cont soon:)

I will deffinately continue😊
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I hope this will happen...plz plz for god sake aisa hi hona chahi ye

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wow...nice start...
if its happent in the serial it will joss...love on the air...
continue soon...whn it will update pm me to infrom...


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thankyou all ⭐️⭐️⭐️ even i hope this happens in the serial😳😳😳
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Really nice!! Do continue soon!!:)
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Wow this is really nice...plzzz do continue soon and do add me in ur pm list😳
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lovely this is superb,i wanna know what happens when uday n manyata meet in the mahal after the incident :)
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👏 nice start. i hope this happens in serial too .and plz pm me for upcoming updates😃

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