SS I was wrong (MANVEER) chp 16 pg 30 end of SS - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi02

Sweet update...Tanvi. The SS is getting interesting. But it was short. You know how much we loue manveer. So...please try to update a little long. Love this part. Continue soon...

Thanks Archi... Hehehehe Greedy for ManVeer...?😉
Will try😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice one...but I felt it's too short...but thanks for update dear...waiting for next part please update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Amibaiju

Nice one...but I felt it's too short...but thanks for update dear...waiting for next part please update soon...

Thanks...!! I'll try...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey tanvi nyc part...but itz too short ,update next part fast
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: annysyed

Hey tanvi nyc part...but itz too short ,update next part fast

thanks anny...!!
I doubt about updating it tomorrow... My moms making some plans... Soo 80% I will update but 20% I doubt...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏👏it was a very very good👍🏼all the best for further updates
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzthakur

👏👏it was a very very good👍🏼all the best for further updates

Thanxx alot...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update!! Do continue soon!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 16He smiled listening to those girls... His charm will always be there he thought...He was waiting for his princess... Today was the day when he would be hers forever and she would be his forever..Smiling like a kid... and twinkiling eyes...Gazing at the staircase... He looked as if a child was asking for candy... Komal: Kya hua Uday beta...? Manyata aati hogi just chill(teasingly)Uday: Yes.. (blushing)The pandit ordered Komal to get her daughter down. As the shubh mahurat's time was passing. Komal went upstairs... and went inside Manyata's room..Komal smiled at Manyata and went near her...Komal: Beta you look beautiful... Manyata: Thanks maa...Suddenly a tear rolled down from Komal's eyes.. But her lips.. Carved in the most charming smile ever... Manyata saw the tear.. And wiped it..Manyata: Why are you crying Maan..?Komal: beta you will leave this mahal and go to Uday's mahal.. We will miss you alot...(crying)Manyata: Maa it's not that I'm leaving the world.. I will come and meet you whenever I want.. And I'm sure Uday won't have any objection in that... So please stop crying... (sweetly)Komal: Now c'mon let's go it's time to go down.,.. ******Uday's eyes did'nt blink once... He saw her coming down those stairs.. Smiling and blushing... She looked like an angel... An angel who fulfilled Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh... An angel who would always surprise him... He smiled like a fool... As soon as Manyata came down and sat next to him in the mandap...He saidUday:You look beautiful princess... (whispering) **********All the vidhi's and rituals took place... He put sindoor,mangalsutra etc etc. It was now time to take her home... His home... ************They both looked at each other... Smiling... The night of their wedding.. He mischiviousely smirked... And surprise surprise she did the same... Landing in each others arms... Holding hands... looking at each other as if they were kids... ************She came out of the washroom... Drying her hair... She smiled at him... Who was making childish noises... the rays of the sun were coming on his face... and he was twisting and turning on the bed... She smiled at his childish antics... And started stroking his hair... She smiled and kissed his forehead and whispered...Manyata: Hey prince time to get up... Uday: Not until I get a nice kiss...He naughtily pointed towards his left cheek... And smirked... Manyata went closer..and closer and closer...And shoutedManyata: Get up ok... (and ran away out of her room)He smiled and got up from his bed... ********On the breakfast table... Every one sat on their usual seats... Dad on the grand seat Unnati on dad's left side and Uday on the right...She sat next to Uday... And greeted everyone... Breakfast went smoothly.. It was same as the Devgadh palace... but when she heard Uday on the phone...Uday: Hey, Ryan.. we need to talk...Ryan: About what...?Uday: You'll know when I tell you... Smart a**Manyata could only hear what Uday said... she was wondering what Uday had to do with Ryan...? Manyata: Uday... How do you know Ryan...?Uday: He's my PA princess... More than a PA he is my friend...Manyata: What..? (shocked)Uday: Princess I know you've had a past with Ryan.. So what..? I mean and he is coming here to apologize.. He's changed princess..With this he came near her and placed a kiss on her forehead.. And she smiled... *******Ryan had come to the palace... Uday asked him to apologize to her... And Ryan agreed... They both called Manyata down.. And she came and stood infront of Ryan... Ryan: Bhab- I mean Rajkumari Manyata I'm really sorry for what I did...Manyata: Not so easily Ryan... Ryan: Look I'm really really sorry...Manyata: How can I believe...?Ryan bent down on his knees and he caught his ears.. And again said SORRY..
Manyata: It's ok... (finally giving up)
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Manyata was in his arms... Smiling... While he was busy gazing at her...
Uday: So are you happy...?
Manyata: Na I'm sad... Ofcourse I'm happy... We both are now husband and wife...
Uday: The love story of a Prince and Princess...
Manyata: Has finally become a happily ever after...
So this was the end of my SS...
Hope u liked it...
Ur comments matter to me alot...
Tanvi:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
I was shocked!!
It's ending too soon!!
Ohhh I want moreee!!!
Anyways a rocking update
Loved the ending
So they're finally happily ever after
Wonderful
That was brilliant but still I can't believe this was the ending

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