SS I was wrong (MANVEER) chp 16 pg 30 end of SS

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princess_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: annysyed
Nyc update babes ,update fast

Thanx Anny...

As u know its a daily SS will update 2morrow...

Only Saturday sunday I have chutti...😉

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Anny

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Ok sweety byt y too short updates

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princess_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: annysyed
Ok sweety byt y too short updates

I got no Answer Anny... 😭😭

I try my best...

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Mahibeejay

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

It's getting more & more interesting!!!!please update soon dear...

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sonia

@sirjee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

really sweet...specially da hugg n concerned 4 manyata is really sweet...

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princess_T

@princess_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

Part 15She felt a pang in her heart... When she saw Ryan with his dad... she actually did'nt see but hear...She heard the conversation Ryan was having with his dad...Ryan: Hey Dad my plans working out.. That junglee billi Moniya will soon come into my hands... And then we will play out our real plan...(evil way)Dad: Great son.. As soon as this girl MONIYA comes into your jhassa we will get her... We will make her feel the pain...Ryan: But before that we will tell her where she belongs...Ryan and his dad both laugh at this... When Moniya stood at the door... weeping softly... Just when she wiped her tears...Moniya: No, I will fight... Not emotionally.. but mentally... She went inside in a casual manner.. And smilled at Ryan and his dad... And just when her soft palms gave a tight slap on his right cheek...Moniya: Kyu Ryan you wanted me to feel the pain right..? Here (she gave him another slap)R Dad: Hey girl don't try that.. Moniya: Oh please... You have no shame Uncle... I know you both were planning something... Ryan: Moniya how can I plan anything against you... I love you..Moniya : Shut up Ryan... I hate the fact that I had been dating you... I hate you... And never come back to my life... Manyata in the present...Remembering the worst memory of her life... she had been so stubborn that time... She smiled when she saw Uday and her picture hung up on the wall... She knew that he would never cheat her like the other two men did... Manyata at age 15She was now living in a different chawl.. With her Baba Murari... He was her angel... When Ryan had left her.. And she was alone... (tht M used to stay alone) Murari was the one who accepted her as his daughter... And there was an unique bond between the so called FATHER and DAUGHTER... Manyata in the present...Someone smacked her out of her chain of thoughts... It was Unnati... who was here to make her ready...Manyata : Unnu.. (smiling)Unnati : bhabhi c'mon you need to get ready... Manyata: Ok ok... *********While on the other hand Uday called Ryan...Due to some bussiness problem... He knew it was his wedding day... but the problem needed to be finished as soon as possible...Uday: Ryan please handle the Metro group of hotels they're affecting our empire...Ryan: Sure Uday... BTW how's bhabhi now...?Uday: Who...?Ryan: Princess Manyata you idiot...Uday: Don't ever call her Bhabhi she will eat you alive...(laughing)Ryan was Uday's PA.. but at the same time both were very good friends... they shared a bond... And after hearing Manyata's story.. Uday did not feel to talk to Ryan about this.. He would sort it out.. But after the marriage.. *****Manyata looked breathtakingly beautiful... In the sea blue colour lehenga... Her hair tied in a fancy bunch... And light make-up...Unatti and Manyata both smiled at each other...Manyata: Great job Sis-in-law...Unatti: Thanks Bhabhi...

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The Barat had arrived...Ds,Komal,Brijraj and other relatives... did pooja and Uday entered inside.. wearing a cream colour shervani and a red sehera... He looked handsome... Some girls muttered"PRINCESS MANYATA IS SO LUCKY TO HAVE HIM"...So here you reach the end...so my gutter mind... ewwwhope u like it..Ur comments matter to me alot..Tanvi:)

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Swinipriya

@Hawa.Hawai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Nice one sweetheart.cont soon n yeah u r such a good writer ok.

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sonia

@sirjee

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#168

how cute...but very short...hope to read next part soon...

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princess_T

@princess_T

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: sirjee
how cute...but very short...hope to read next part soon...

thanks... The next part 80% will be up tomorrow... 20% doubt hai...

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@ITV_Loverr

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#170

Sweet update...Tanvi. The SS is getting interesting. But it was short. You know how much we loue manveer. So...please try to update a little long. Love this part. Continue soon...

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