SS I was wrong (MANVEER) chp 16 pg 30 end of SS - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: wendy25

nice one, continue soon,👏

akash dude barge in here also😲

Thanxx Wendy...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -JEHAN-

LOVED IT...ahhh...that was awesome.,...

Thanksss😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice one dear...please update soon...can't wait for akash's reactions!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was awesome👏.continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: snowdream

it was awesome👏.continue soon dear

Thankyew...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 11Akash: Moniya woh saare vade jo tumne mujhse kiye the unka ka kya haan...? (sad tone)(M's POV)I should have sorted that letter matter before only... Well in the meantime Akash was advancing towards me... Slowly steadily... Just when I thought he would touch me... Which I obviously not wanted... Uday came between me and Akash... He's my shield, more than a shield he is mine... Uday: dont dare to touch her...Manyata: Uday...Akash comes closer and raises his hand to puch Uday but Uday catches his hand...Uday: Akash woh galti phirse mat karna uska anjam accha nahi hoga... Aur vaise bhi ab tum kuch bhi nahikar sakte kyuki Manyata aur humari shaadi hone wali hai jaldhee...Akash looks stunned and looks at Manyata and Manyata gives him a-yes-it-is-true look... Akash steadily tells ManyataAkash : Tum iss bar toh bach gayi warna mein tumhe con kar leta...Manyata: Yeh tum kya keh rahe ho Akash...?Akash: Mein ek CONMAN hu Moniya...With this anger boils inside Manyata as well as Uday... Manyata steps forward and gives Uday an assured look... And BOOM places a big tight slap on Akash's face...Manyata: Dobara agar kisi ko Con karne ki koshish bhi ki na tumne toh hum tumhe chodenge nahi...Uday was now not gonna remain quite... There was a part of him.. That wanted to beat Akash once again... But he was the Yuvraj of Jaigadh and he never repeats his mistakes... He caught Manyata's hand and started walking... Manyata: Uday hum kahan jaa rahe hai Pent house toh uss taraf hai...Uday: Manyata hum ghar wapas jaa rahe hai... Its high time now... Sorry Manyata lekin we have to...Manyata : thik hai lekin humara saman...?Uday: hum ghar pahuch ke kisi se mangwa lenge...
She looked at him... He was looking as if he'll murder anyone... But she knew how to handle that... A kiss would deffinately work...
Manyata: Uday... Remember the first time we met...?
He looked at her...Surprised... How can she be so normal...? As if nothing happend...? But I recalled that day... And could not help myself but laugh...
Manyata: What makes you laugh...?
Uday: How can you be so sweet...?
Manyata: you did'nt answer my question...?
Uday: Princess that question does not matter... What matters is that the sweetness in you... Turned Akash... He revealed his true colours because of your sweetness...
Manyata: does Akash matter between us humph... (nose sprouting)
Uday: Nah hes just a pathetic past...
With this he comes closer... They were on the cruise... The moon was full and beautiful... And most beautiful was the couple standing nose to nose in between... The perfect moment... They both kissed each other...
*****
Few days passed after the trip and the so called Akash fiasco... Everyone in the family knew about it... And after a few days was the big day of my life... And as per the traditions I had'nt met Uday for almost a week... Ugghh this sucks I thought... In order to divert my mind... I called up Unnati...
Manyata: Unnu yaar whats up..?
Unnati : Im fine bhabhi... but yea sort of getting bored...
Manyata: Let's go shopping in the mall... Vaise bhi My dress for the haldi ceremony is yet to be decided...
Unnati: Perfect... Meet you at the City mall... 7 would be fine..?
Manyata: Perfect... (and excitedly cuts the call)
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Manyata is waiting for Unnati at the mall... Just then she arrived... They both went in various shops but none of the lehengas were good... Just then Manyata saw a shop...
Manyata: Let's go in this shop...
Unnati : Ok
They both entered the shop and were shown various lehengas... Manyata liked 2-3 of them and tried them out... Unnati clicked all the pictures of Manyata in lehengas and sent it to Uday... As he had told her to do so...
Just then Unnati left her mobile on the table of the store... Manyata notices that and went to see her phone... There was a text fro Uday... Hmmm lets give it a try... She read it...
TEXT:
Pick the red one choti... :)
Manyata turned red... Blushing like a tomato... And smiling like a fool...
They both shopped till they dropped and atlast the girls were back home...
*****
Today was a celebration day at the jaigadh palace... It was Udays haldi ceremony...
So u reached the end my dearies...
Hope u like it...
Ur comments matter to me alot...
Tanvi :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow
I like the way they proceed
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update 😊
Awww Uday's text was sooo cute 😍
And Akash a conman? Hahaha 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ Cham... He he thankyou...@ Anny Thanksss@Fia... Yeah Conman LOL 😆
😆😆 And thankss
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Posted: 13 years ago
Perfect and well written dear...keep writing and keep updating too...thanks for this lovely part... 👏

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