SS I was wrong (MANVEER) chp 16 pg 30 end of SS - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update!! Do continue soon!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Cham42195

Wow
I lost my breath while reading
It was amazing
Wonderful
Update soon

Awww Cham... Thanku sooo much 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
i loved it...countinue soon dear...precap seems interesting...
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Hey Tanvi, i haven't read d other parts of ur story,but loved this part..it kinda reminded of bella-edward's honeymoon in breaking dawn:)continue soon:)
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Originally posted by: Chamakchallo30

Hey Tanvi, i haven't read d other parts of ur story,but loved this part..it kinda reminded of bella-edward's honeymoon in breaking dawn:)continue soon:)

That was the thing...!! yea i got inspired 4rm that only...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey nice one.cont soon.precap sound so interesting.pliz pm me if u can.
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Posted: 13 years ago
woahhh...its sooo beautiful plus romantic...hope uday dont get hurt nor dose manyata...n if uday gets hurt...still not soo much...n manyata take care of him...
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Part 9(M's POV)It was morning time... I had alot of work to do... I had to organize a romantic date... What should I do..? Ahhh the shopping galleria..(theres a shopping place on the island so that all needs are handled). I jumped out of my bed.. Ran to the washroom... After sometime I just went to his rrom to check where he is.. There he was still sleeping... Good I'll get to do my work in a peaceful way...(UV's POV)I woke up... when I heard the door close... Im sure it was Manyata.. Obviously there is no one else on this island ecxept for us and the shopping galleria employees. But...Gosh I think I over reacted yesterday... Well but seeing Manyata Im sure she is upto something... (smirking)( M's POV)Ha.. here the shopping galleria is.. I saw a board PARTY ARTICLES... Im sure I'll get something here.. I ran inside...Manyata: Hey I need some Roses red ones,some wine..Shopkeeper: Which wine ma'm?Manyata: The best red wine in this store... And I need ur help...Shopkeeper: Sure ma'm we are here to help you. Tell me in what way..?Manyata: Well I need to organize a sort of Party at Banquets...(there is everything on the island..)Shopkeeper: Sure ma'm everything will be arranged..(M's POV)
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He was there in his room standing at the balcony... his arms crossed around his chest and boy he looked Hot even from behind...(in this way Manyata and Myself both can drool over UV :P) I kept my hand on his shoulder... And he turned around...
Manyata: Uday take this and if you love me even a tiny miny bit.. You will come with me...(while handing him a bag)
Without uttering a word he went out of the room.. Dont panic he took the bag... His gestures told me that he is ready to come...
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He came out of his room wearing that TUX that I had given him in that bag...He looked every inch of a prince...
(UV's POV)
Woahh am I in my senses...? Manyata is wearing an evening gown...? Yeah wait she is... she looked beautiful in that White colour flairy gown... Im marrying the right PRINCESS...
She placed her hand in mine... And I...Well I was lost in her...
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There was a blindfold around my eyes... She put it... god knows what she has planned... The moment she opened my blindfold... I saw a big SORRY written on the wall... And the whole place was RED... Red roses.red balloons... Awww she is a darling...
Manyata: Im sorry Uday... (she was on her knees)
I ran upto her... And gently placed my hands on her shoulders and said
Uday: princess it was'nt your mistake... I was the one who took Jehs name...
Manyata: You like all this...?
Uday: Ofcourse... humein nahi pata tha ki tum itni romantic ho...
She kept her hands on my cheeks... ran her fingers through my hair...And I did the same... We were lost in each other... I leaned in to kiss her... She closed her eyes... and our lips met...
PRECAP: The same one...
So you reached the end of part 9
hope u like it...
Sorry if I wasted ur time...
Ur comments matter to me alot..
Tanvi:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update!! Do continue soon!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AKlover101

Loved the update!! Do continue soon!!:)

Thanks Fizza...😃 I'll update the next part 2morrow...

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