SS I was wrong (MANVEER) chp 16 pg 30 end of SS - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
waooo really nyc...but again...very short...n no manveer romance also...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww...really sweet...but very short...plus very less manveer romance...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sirjee

waooo really nyc...but again...very short...n no manveer romance also...

Next 1 will pakka have ManVeer romance... And i'll try to make it a little longer...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey nice one yaar.cont soon sweetheart.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sirjee

awww...really sweet...but very short...plus very less manveer romance...

Im sorry for that... But next part I promise you... It will have ManVeer romance...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Swini01

Hey nice one yaar.cont soon sweetheart.

Thanxx Swini...😃 U continue urs 2 haan...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: princess_T

Im sorry for that... But next part I promise you... It will have ManVeer romance...!!!

thnxxx n sorry 4 double commetns...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey nice one sweety.cont soon n pm me if u can.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 10(M's POV)We were lost in the kiss... I broke apart as I was going out of breathe... I smiled at him.. And went near the table where I had kept wine... I poured some wine in the glasses... Just then he wrapped his arms around my waist and rested his chin on my shoulder... It felt as if I was in heaven...Uday: You know Manyata I feel like the luckiest Prince...Manyata: Why..? (turning around to face him)Uday: Im lucky to have you thats why...Manyata : Uday I just love you so much...Uday: I love you too princess... Manyata: Shall we...? (while offering him her hand to dance..)(UV's POV)OMG... We danced to the tune so lost in each other... It felt great... When I looked into her eyes... I always could see PRIDE... The pride that forces me to keep her in the best way... and protect her in the best way...
(M's POV)He is the reason... I live I live for him... And I didn't want to loose him... He is mine...Just then we realised that the song was over...I looked at my watch... The sun oops I forgot we have to wathc it set...Manyata: Uday the sun will soon set... Lets go and watch na..Uday: Sure princess... (While keeping his hand on my waist)(M's POV)We walked upstairs... On the terrace area... Sometimes Royal parties were held in open terraces too... Anyways... We sat down on the bench... He kept his arm on my shoulder... And I rested my head on his shoulder... Manyata: Uday promise me you will never leave me...(seriouse tone)Uday: I promise you princess I'll never leave you never ever...We enjoyed the sunset and now there was silence... not the awkward one.. But the one in which we both cherished our memories... He was stroking my hair... And I wrapped my arm around him...Just then... A voice said...Voice: Yeh hindi film ka romantic scene... Ahhh I hate it...We both turned to see who it was...It was It was AKASH...Akash: Udayveer tujhe kya laga tu mujhe Khaai se gira dega toh kya mein apne sacche pyaar ko bhul jayunga...?Uday: Apni aawaz dheemi rakho samjhe... Aur wait a second tumne abhi abhi kya kaha saccha pyaar...? Manyata: Akash please yahan se chale jao... Uday: Stay out of it Princess...Just then he removed a PISTOL out of his back pocket and pointed it at Uday...I jumped in the middle... I was now the Monkey between Uday and AkashManyata: Akash... (screaming)Uday kept his hand on my shoulder and signaled me not to come in between...Akash: Moniya ko mere havale karde Udayveer agar nahi kia toh mein tujhe goli mar dunga...Uday: Hahahahahaha Akash tum ek Yuvraaj ko goli maroge..? In your dreams buddy... (He slowly walked toward Akash and took the pistol...)
Uday: Yeh pistol locked hai... Pehel pistol chalana seekhlena phir humein goli marna OK...
Akash was now burning in anger.. When I caught Udays hand...
Manyata: Akash tum wapas kaise aaye...?
Akash : Moniya mein wahan se gira hee nahi tha... Mein wahan se bach nikla lekin tim yeh Udayveer ke sath kya kar rahi ho..?
Manyata: Pehele toh mera naam MANYATA hai aur duusri baat 3rd insaan toh tum the Akash.. Uday aur humari sagai toh bachpan mein hee hogayi thi... Tum sirf humara bachpana the Akash...
So u reached the end of part 9
I hope u like it...
Sorry if I wasted ur time...
Ur comments matter to me alot...
Tanvi :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one, continue soon,👏
akash dude barge in here also😲

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