SS I was wrong (MANVEER) chp 16 pg 30 end of SS - Page 9

Created

Last reply

Replies

197

Views

51.4k

Users

39

Likes

491

Frequent Posters

-JEHAN- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#81
i loved it...update soon...😳
akshi_t thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#82
it was sooo short...i want more 😔...y don't M just tell UV??...uff 😕...anyways it was a really cute update 😳...plzzz update soon...and try to make it longer if u cn 😍
Edited by akshi_t - 13 years ago
princess_T thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: akshi_t

it was sooo short...i want more 😔...y don't M just tell UV??...uff 😕...anyways it was a really cute update 😳...plzzz update soon...and try to make it longer if u cn 😍

Dont worry Uv will find out about that..!! Afterall he is Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh..!!
adventure_gurl thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#84
no problem yaar, update was awesome!
princess_T thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Thankyou so much guys...!!! I luv reading all your comments..!! Thanxx for all your appreciation..!!!
sirjee thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#86
waooo reallly nyc...sorry couldnt comment b4...but read all of dem together n dey r waooo...
princess_T thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: sirjee

waooo reallly nyc...sorry couldnt comment b4...but read all of dem together n dey r waooo...

Thankyouuu ssooo much..!!😃
princess_T thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Part 7(M's POV)We were driving driving and driving finnaly we stopped at a place. It was a dockyard.. Hmm Dockyard..?? Hundred questions were popping in my head.. But I aked Uday. While he was busy removing our luggageManyata: Hum kahan jaa rahe hai Uday.?Uday: Ohoo Princess humne kaha na yeh ek surprise hai..Manyata: Lekin...Before I could say anything else, he caught my hand and we stepped into 1 of the Cruises... A cruise impressive.. It was not to big and not to small.. He took me to the deck and saidUday: Soo you like it..?Manyata: I love it..Uday: Abhi toh sirf shuruwat huyi hai princess agge agge dekho hota hai kya... (smirking)I was feeling so damn sleepy I went into our cabin and slept... *****Everything was blur around me.. My head was resting on someones laps.. Obviously that was Uday... The moment I opened my eyes he smiled at me..Uday: Good night princessManyata: Good night..?Uday: Yaa bahar dekho abhi raat hai subah nahi.. tum bhi na aise odd time pe soo(sleep) gayi..Manyata: Accha woh sab chodo mujhe batao hum yeh kahan aaye hai..?Uday: Princess yeh ek Island hai.. Its called MANVEER... aur kya tumhe pata hai MANVEER ka matlab..?Manyata: Obviously pata hai Manyata ka MAN aur Udayveer ka VEER haina.?Uday: YOu got it right.. Tum jaanti ho Daadi sahab ne humare roke (Engagement) ki khushi mein yeh Island kharida tha.. Aur isse yeh naam diya..Manyata: Wow chalo na yahan ghumte hain..Uday: Itni raatko..?Manyata: Haan toh kya hua lets go please please... (almost begging)Uday: thikhe tum yeh pehen kar chalogi...? Manyata: Chal Halkat Vede mein yeh nahi kuch aur pehenungi wait i'll go change..(UV's POV)God knows what was going on in her mind.. What is she gonna wear..? Anyways let me also go change.. I slid into a short knee length Cargo pant.. And a white T-shirt. Just then I heard the bathroom door open... There she was standing in a pink top.. and a pair of shorts... Uday: Ohoo Princess.. Anarkali woh bhi itni Hot.. Not bad huh..Manyata: You like it..?? Uday: Haan I love it now lets go...(M's POV) Im glad he liked it.. Now are the most precious three days of my life till now.. After marriage will be my honeymoon also.. LOL.. We went outside our Pent house and WOW the beach..It was beautiful clean water and almost White sand... I caught his hand and we started walking... Uday: Soo howzz ManVeer looking in the night..?Manyata: Its beautiful Uday...Lets sit here na.. Uday: Ok fine comeWe sat on the sand.. Haa it felt like I was in heaven yeaa on an island called ManVeer with my Man in his arms.. What else can I ask for..? We were having a great time looking into each others eyes... Soon he rested his head on my laps and fell asleep.. He looked Angelic while sleeping.. I was stroking his hair.. And smiliing Manyata : I love you Uday... Uday: I love you too PrincessManyata: Ahh your awake..? Uday: yea
*******
It was morning and we both were lying on the beach.. It felt soo good... I woke up and whispered in his ear.
Manyata: Uday get up subah hogayi hai
Uday:Arre yaar..
He woke up and smiled at me.. I did the same.. Just then I heard a voice.. Hummphh It was my stomach.. It was growling...
Manyata: Uday mujhe bahut bhuk lag rahi hai chalo Pent house chalte hain aur kuch khaate hain..
Uday: Your wish my command princess
****
We reached the Pent house kitchen and I started searching for food items.. Just then he wrapped his arms around me and rested his head on my shoulder...
Manyata: chodo Uday let me cook..
Uday: Today I will cook Princess...
Soo hope you guyzz like it..
Sorry if i wasted your time..
do hit like
Asmimelody thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#89
nice story dear :) please continue soon :)
princess_T thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Asmimelody

nice story dear :) please continue soon :)

Thankyou soo much..!!

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".