SS I was wrong (MANVEER) chp 16 pg 30 end of SS - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: annysyed

Hm nyc update and cont soon

'Thankyou so much..!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice. Pls continue and update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shals9

Very nice. Pls continue and update soon

Thanxx Shals..😆😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice i loved it...MANVEER THAT WAS SOOO SWEET...😍PLZ PM ME WHEN U UPDATE PLZZZ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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waooo sooo cute...uday will cook...i just luv kitchen romance...hope in next part we have lot of kitchen romance...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved it!!!! Plzzz continue soon!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Plz plz plz update!
M a silent reader usually
bt was very eager 4 d nxt part!
Ur n osum writer!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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NOTE:
HEY guyzz sorry but the next update will be on next Sunday or Monday..😭😭 The reason is Im going out of town soo Sorry...😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 8Uday: today I'll cook princess...Manyata: Are u serious..? I mean tumhe cooking aati hai..?Uday: Ofcourse aati hai sweetheart..! Just wait n watch...
(M's POV)
Hmmm interesting my hubby knows how to cook...I went in the kitchen and saw him cooking.. He was cutting chillies for the omlete.. Speedy he was... Just then his hand ahh it was bleeding..I ran upto him...
Manyata: Uday dhyan se karna chahiye na...See your bleeding..(in a worried way and she started kissing his hand)
Uday: Agar humein itni special treatment milegi toh hum roz hee apna haat katenge...
Manyata: Shut up.. You fool itna jor se koi chillies katt ta hai..? (she stopped and went to bring the first aid...)
(UV's POV)
My wifey cares for me soo much..!! Aww..She started dressing my hand in a very gentle manner... She was busy in that and I was busy looking at her... She is angelic...
Uday: Chalo ab bas hogaya go out and sit humein apna kaam karne do...
Manyata: Are you sure ki tum abhi cook kar loge..?
Uday: Im sure now go...
(M's POV)
Now i was getting restless...My stomach was growling...Hmmm that aroma of omletes yummy... Theyre coming coming... Ahhh Im so excited to eat those...!!
Uday: Here are your omletes...(placing the plate on the table)
Manyata: They smell yummy..
(M's POV)
I started eating... They tasted yum... I took a bite and the onther one I gave it to him..We both were feeding each other.. Now I know my life is gonna be Amazing with my husband...!!
*****
Days passed everyday we used to roam everyday... We were having a great time..the best part was his Romance... LOL
Today was the 2nd last day of this trip...I knew that but still I asked him
Manyata: Uday hum yahan se kab jaa rahe hai..?
Uday: Parso(Day after tomorrow)
Manyata: Kya hum thode aur din ruksakte hai please...? (pleading almost..:P)
Uday: Manyata 2 weeks mein humari shaadi hai...
Manyata: Kuchhi dino ki toh baat hai Uday pleaseee
Uday: Princess tum jaanti ho jab Jeh humare saath shaadi karne wali thi na woh toh paagal hogayi thi aur ek tum ho jo Shaadi ke liye bilkul bhi excitedd nahi ho.. huh...
Manyata: What the hell.. tumhe Jeh se shaadi karni hai toh jaao yahan se dont talk to me haan nahi toh..(angrily almost pushing him out of her room)
Uday: Arre humne aisa kab kaha..?
Manyata: Just go bade aye EXCITED... Huh get out mujhe tumse baat nahi karni...(and she pushed him out of her room) (ok so they both stay in different room because they are still not married)
(M's POV)
What does he think of himself... Jeh se shaadi karni hai usse...Huh
(UV's POV) (in his room)
What the hell...? Hum toh sirf example de rahe thhe ugghh ajj hum uske room mein nahi jaayenge(he everyday used to go to her room to admire her)
(M's POV)
It was night time I was on my bed...Waiting for him to come... (M knows about it) Where is he..? Why he has not come till now..? Is he angry with me..? Maybe yaa oh know I need to do something...
I gently opened the door of his room... He was there sleeping... Well actually not.. It was clearly seen that he knew that Im over here...
Manyata: Uday I know your awake..
Uday:Tell me what happend..? ( getting up)
Manyata: Are you angry with me..?
Uday: No No Im very happy( sarcastically..)
Manyata: Im sorry...
Uday: Nah this time not so easily...(while going down again to sleep)
(M's POV)
Fine so he wants me to do something romantic...!! ab dekho Uday mein tumhe kaise pattati hu LOL...
Precap: Some one holding a gun in his hand and pointing it at UDAY...
So here part 8 endss..
hope u like it...
Sorry if I wasted ur time..
Ur comments matter to me alot...
Tanvi..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow
I lost my breath while reading
It was amazing
Wonderful
Update soon

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