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Posted: 13 years ago
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aesome part...cant wait till the wedding...update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Another nice part.. Thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice hey kindly pm me wenevr u update
Edited by manveerlover - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Salut Somia3!!!!!!!Je m'appelle Navya.I know some French but not that much!Anyways please PM me on the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART SIX

THE LETTER SAY:

I hope your happy today. You betrayed me. You will pay for it. Your broken my heart for that Udayveer! How dare you. I never let you married Uday until I lived. I will have you back. I known you did this because your family force you to. I will free you and we will be happy. Manyata your mine.

baAkash

Manyata was crying. Komal give birjraj the letter and went to manyata and tried to clam her down.

Komal: stop crying manyata beta. We will let nothing happen to you . It will all be all right.

And took manyata to her room.J and Virjay Bhai went along.

Uday was bursting with angry and grab the gun in the living room wall and head out with it.

Dadisa, birjraj,girjraj and unnati tried very hard to stop him but won't able too.

Uday: I am going to kill him.

He got in the car and drove off

Birjraj and Girjraj head behind him. They tried to call him but he won't pick up.

Maharaj Girjraj: I hope uday doesn't do anything reckless.

Maharaj Birjraj: won't worry. He's asmart boy. ( in Birjraj's mind: but is he today)

Uday and they car both reach akash' house and they walk in the building and knock on akash's apartment but no one answered. They ask the neighbors if they know where akash is but the only thing people said was that they left this morning.

Maharaj Birjraj: uday beat come on we should go home. Dadisa must be worry.

Maharaj Girjraj: we will get him. Don't worry manytat will only marry you.

They walk out of the building and into the cars and drove back to the mahal.

Dadisa: uday beta are you ok. What happen?

Maharaj Birjraj: maa saab akash's family let town this morning and no one know where.

Maharaj Girjraj: Don't worry anything will happen to manyata.

Uday: dadisa , can I see manyata.

Dadisa: of course u can. She yours.

Uday walking to manyata's room and knock.

Komal: come in

Uday: how is manyata?

J: jiji won't stop crying.

VirJay Bhai: but she finally fall asleep.

Komal: uday beta did you fin him?

Uday: no aunty but he will pay for all our tears.

Komal: uday you can sit here.

Komal , J and vijay bhai walked out and into the living room.

Uday walk to the side of bed and sit down. Tears were still come out of manyata's eyes. He wiped them and said ' manyata don't worr. I won't let anyone touch you. Your mine and always will be. Manyata I love you." Manyata was still asleep.

IN THE LIVING ROOM

Dadisa: what do you do now?

Maharaj Birjraj; how dare he do this to my daughter. When I find him. I am going to kill him.

Komal: clam down maharaj.

Maharaj Birjraj: how komal? Look what did to manyata

Maharaj Girjraj: who with manyata. Anyways.

J: uday.

Maharaj Girjraj: I think we should watch manyata 24/7. She should not be left alone at anytime.

Dadisa: your ight maharaj girjraj. Komal will stay with manyata today.

Uday: no, I will.

They all turn around to see when the answer come from and saw uday and manyata standing hind them.

J: jiji won't you sleeping.

Manyata: yes but I wake up.

Dadisa: uday beta, you can't stay all night. You need your sleep.

Manyata: dadisa is right.go home. I will be alright.

Manyata: I am sorry for all the problems I caused. Did know akash wouldn't do this.

Dadisa: it not your fault. You did know. Stop crying.

Uday: don't princess. Everything will be fine. I don't need sleep. I am stilling right here with you ok.

Unnati: dada go home and get some sleep. I will stay with manyata today.

Uday: finally but princess if you need anything call me.

Manyata nodded.

Maharaj Birjraj: grijraj and uday. Go home and get some sleep. It been a long day. We will fit it out in the morning.

Maharaj Girjraj: may we take our leaves maa saab.

Uday took dadisa,birjrai and komal'blessing and whispered good night princesss.

They left the mahal and got into the car and drove off.

Uday: we have to find akash.

Maharaj Girjraj: yes uday will.

Maharaj Girjraj; uday I see something different in you today. You are falling in love with manyata. You never get this mad and take reckless decisions like today.

Uday: no dad. I just don't want to have any problems in getting her wealth.

Maharaj Girjraj: no uady. You want her. I can see it your eyes.

Uday: dad doesn't it matter. Even if I want her.

Maharaj Girjraj: yes beta because love changed everything.

They reach the hotel. Maharaj Girjay get out and walk into the hotel but uday still in the car thinking.

BACK AT THE MAHAL.

Manyata, J, Unnati and Virjay Bhai are sitting down on manyata's bed. Trying to comfort her but nothing works.

Unnati: no why would you think that?

Manyata: because I caused so many problems from the day I got here. Uday and my family both have to go together so must because of me. It would be better if was never found and uday would have married J and everyone would be happy.

J: no jiji. You are the best thing that happens to both families. You will be a queen like no other. You already are a wonderful princess.

Virjay bhai: manyata you shouldn't think like this. You are very important to us and J and Uday never love each other like you and uday do.

Unnati: stop thinking like that and go to sleep. You are very important to us and we love you.

J and Virjay bhai nodded.

Unnati : now go to sleep and I will be right next to you.

J and Virjay bhai left the room.

The next morning at the breakfast table.

Both families were having breakfast and manyata enter.

Everyone greeted her.

Dadisa: how was your sleep?

Manyata: ok. I am sorry I am late for breakafast.

Maharaj Birjraj: not a problem beta.

Komal: so what o you want to eat today?

Manyata: nothing

Komal: but why

Manyata: I don't feel like eating today.

Manyata was about to leave when uday grabbed her hand.

Uday: come sit down princess. You need to eat.

Manyata; but I don't want too.

Uday: but you have too.

Everyone just stared at the two as the argument as a old married couple. Unnati and J could't it help but laugh at them.

Uday; what's wrong why you are laughing. I am just feeding manyata. Is there something wrong with that?

Unnati ; no dada. Carry on.

Manyata: uday I can eat myself you know.

Uday: ok. Then eat.

Maharaj Birjraj: I think we should leave uday and manyata alone

Maharaj Girjraj: your right.

Manyata: no uncle I want to have breakfast with everyone.

Komal: are you sure manyata beta but I think uday wants to have breakfast with you.

Uday: no aunty. I love having breakfast with you.

After breakfast everyone was in the living talking about akash and the problems he caused. Manyata was in hern room with Virjay bhai. They were playing cards to get there mind of f akash.

Unnati: dada I want to talk you something and just not you but everyone. Manyata did not sleep all night was crying and blaming herself for everything. Me,J and Virjay bhai tired very hard to comfort her but nothing worked. Unnati and J told everyone what manyata said to them last night.

Komal burst into tears. Dadisa tried to comfort her but started to cry herself. Birjraj and J tried to comfort both of them but they wouldn't stop crying. Girjraj , Uday and unnati tried to help but nothing would stop them. Manyata the most important person in they life and they would do anything for her.

Uday: why would manyata think that way.

Unnati: dada I said the something to her last night but she still blamed her self.

Maharaj Birjraj: let all go to manyata and talk to her.

Everyone walk to manyata's room and enter. Manyata and Virjay bhai asked what happen? Why is everyone here?

Manyata: did akash do something again. And look down to the floor.

To be Continued


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i go to french school. English is my third language.

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i want to try to write something.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
thnks 4 the PM gal!!!😉
loved it yaar really amazingly written n very beautifully too!!!👏👏👏
plzzz do continue to write more gal cause i would love to read more babes!!😉😎
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
waooo..again dis akash nami parrani became threat...hahahha...yy cant he leave manveer alone...atleast in such cute post akash plz leave dem 4 eachother na...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Merci Beaucoup for the update .
You doing a relly good job seeing that English is your third language.
Please add me to your pm list .
Do update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
😃THAT WAS SIMPLY MINDBLOWING
I LOOOVED IT
awesome job
Please continue soon
Loved it
Thank you for PM😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Loved it , Awesome update ... continue soon !

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