OS: The last time Manyata (NOTE On PAGE 32)

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A day before the big day.

Manyata had decision to forget her past life and move on with her princess's life.
( J and Virjay are gone to goa with they friends. they not in the Os.)
Manyata was sit on her bed
whenKomalwalk in.

Komal:Manyatabeta are you ok?
Manyata: yes maa
Komal: are you ready for tomorrow?
Manyata: yes but a bit sacred
Komal: it just your engagement not your wedding beta
Manyata: maa i think everything is to fast. i just met my family and now i have to leave you guys behind and married and leave with Uday
i want to stay herewithyou more

Komal had tears rolled down her eyes while Manyata spoke

Manyata too wascrying

Suddenly there was aknockat the door.

Manyata and Komal turn to look who was at the door.

OfcourseManyata really had a idea to who it could be.

Stand at the door was Uday, Dadisa, Maharaj Giriraj and Maharaj Brijaj.


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Dadisa had tears in her eye

They had heard Manyata and Komal's conversation.

Dadisa:Manyatabeta why are you? your just get engaged. uday won't run off with you

Maharaj Brijraj: beta we are not going to get you marrieduntilyou say it. Now stop crying

Manyata: ok papa

Uday: what did you say? papa right

Manyata; yeah so. he is my dad. right.

Uday: yeah but you never called that

Manyata: but now i will.

Komal and Dadisa both hugged Manyata and then Manyata hugged her papa
Maharaj Brijraj had a proud look in his eyes.

Manyata: can i ask you guys something
Maharaj Brijraj: ofcoursebeta. what is it?
Manyata: why does someone always cry when i say something"

everyone start to laugh.

Unnati: Hi everyone what going on?
Maharaj Grijraj:Manyatacalled Brijraj " papa"
Unnati walk over to manyata and hug her.

Maharaj Grijraj; yourdaughteris final home. she going to make a wonderful daughter-in-law!
She is perfect for my son. even Unnati loves her.

Manyata: dadisa, maa and papa i want to ask you something.
Dadisa: what is it manyata
Maharai Brijraj: go on beta
Komal: speak Manyata
Manyata: i want to go akash and tell him my decision. if you allow it. plz
that going to married udayveer and become his queen and that he should forget me and move on.
Uday: of course you can and you know what i will take you and unnati willcometoo,
Uday: dadisa and uncle Brijraj manyata has ask for a simple REQUEST
and as her future husband. i allow.

Manyata look at him puzzled. why is he saying yes>
what is he up to now>

Komal: let her go. uday and unnati will be there will her. nothing will go wrong.
Maharaj Brijraj: are you sure uday beta. we should allow manyata to do this.
Dadisa: what if report get there and get the wrong idea
Uday i will take care of it. they will need in my hotel and in my pent house.
no one will know about it.

Maharaj Brijraj: ok but i hope nothing go wrong
Uday: can i take manaya?
Dadisa: yes beta but be verycareful. the media are watching our every move.

Uday: Manyata get ready. i am wait in thelyingroom. come on Choti.
Unnati: yes dada . Manyata get ready and come down.
Manyata nodded

Maharaj Brijraj: i want this to be the last time you meet that boy.
Manyata: it going to be papa. i now know that i am RajKumari Manyata and i can befriendwitheveryone. i know I have duties and responsibilities toward my family and kingdom,

as manyata finished her last sentence. Maharaj Brijraj nodded andsmiledand hug hisdaughter.

Komal: i will help you get ready.
everyone left.

Everyone were wait for manyata to come down.

Unnati: Dada r u should you want manyata to do this?
Uday: Choti manyata is going to be my wife and i will never say no to her.

Unnati smiled and hug him.

final manyata and komal enter the living room.
manyata look so beautiful.


( this is the dress . manyata was wearing,)

Manyata look simple but elegant ,

Dadisa: beta you look beautiful
manyata: well dadisa i do get my good looks from you.

shesmiledand hug manyata.

komal and brijrajexchanged look and smiledproudlyat theyfirstdaughter
<div>Unnati: you lookmind blowingtodayManyata. so pretty.
Manyata: thank Unnati.

manyata reach over and hug unnati

Maharaj Giriraj: Manyata beta youtrulylook like a princesstoday.
Manyata: thank u uncle
Uday:whatdoyou think Uday beta
Uday was stillstock and didn't answer. unnati whispered dada, dadtalkingto you.

Uday: yes dad and walk over to manyata andwhisperedyou lookbeautifulprincess
manyaya blushed and walk over to took everyone 's blessing

Uday: weshouldleave now.

manyata and unnati nodded,
uady took everyone blessing.

uday: are going to come with us to hotel.
Maharai Girjraj: no, maa saab has ask me to join them for dinner. so willreturnlater tonight, just pick me up when you drop off manyata .
Uday: ok bye

Uday , Manyata and Unnati walk out to the car. they got in the car and drove off. uday drove. while the unnati and manyata sit in the backseat.

Manyata: Uday can i ask you something.
Uday:whatis princess?
Manyata: how will akash get yo your pent house?
Unnati: she's right. how will he get there
Uday: don't worry. i already ask someone to bring him there.
He should already be there.

Manyata: one more thing. y did u say yes to me meeting akash. what your plan?
Unnati smiled

Uday: well princess your going to be my wife and i want you to me happy.
Unnati: dada, can we go to dinner, after manyata met akash, plz
i am hungry.
Manyata: you two can go to dinner and to go home after the meeting with akash.
Unnati : plz manyata. i want have dinner with bot of . plz plz.
manayta: fine but i want gohomeafter.
Uday: no worries princess. will drop you off. right away.

manyata know this night is not going to go easy as she imagined .

they finalreach uday's hotel.

<font color="#000066">To be Continued</font>
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Part two:

Manayata,Unnati and Uday got out of the car.

They entry the hotel. The guards lead then in.

Uday's manager was waiting for them.

Uday: Karan is he here? Media? (Karan is the manager's name)

Karan: no sir. They think that Rajkumari Manyata will be at the beach with u before your engagement Tomorrow.

Smiled at the manager and nodded to leave.

They got into the Uday's personal elevator which only leads to the pent house were the royal family of Jaighar lived in Mumbai.

Manyata ws sacred to see akash and did want to hurt him but she was royal and he was not her destination.

Final the elevator door open.

Akash was sit down on black leather sofa with two guards beside him

Uady ask the guards to leave.

As manyata walk in. Akash notice something different in her. Not only she was dressed like a princess but act like one too.

Akash: why have u called me here.Moniya. And why is uday here?

Uday smiled and sit down on the other side of the sofa. Unnati just stood behind him.

Manyata: akash, I need to tell you something.

Akash: what is it Moniya and walk over to hug her but she back away.

Akash: what wrong? You look worry. Did something happen? And move close to her but she back away.

Uday got up and walk to manyata and stood right next to her and whispered "just tell him"

Manyata: I have come here to talk you that my engagement is tomorrow.

Akash: I know you told that. It was to save your family from the media and to hide our relationship for now until your family was ready to saw the whole that you love me not uday.

Uday's face burst with anger and he just wants to beat him up but was stop by manyata.

Manyata: well akash I have decision to honour my family's decision and married uday. As she finish her sentence a tear rolled down her eyes. She was crying because she love akash but because she was hurt him. Manyata has realized two months ago that she really didn't love akash. It was just a crush and that she was fall in love with uday.

Akash: did you say love is something that only comes once in a life time and you need to fight for it. Then why have you decision to leave me. Did Uday force you into this?

As akash finish his sentence and grabbed uday's by his shirt. Uday was about to punch him. When manyata stop him.

Manyata: uday don't do anything.

Manyata: aksah how dare you touch my Fiance.

Manyata could not believe that she said that and that she called uday her fianc

Uday was stack to hear those words out of manyata' s mouth but

Akash: why are you Uday your fianc? I thought that you love me and a want to marry me. Moniya why have to change your mind.

Akash: is it because I am poor and he rich? Do you want a rich boy now moniya? Moniya way a have betrayed me. Didn't you hate uday.

Manyata: first of all my name is manyata not moniya and I am royal princess of Devgarh. I am not in love with you. I see you as a good friend nothing more.

Uday and unnati were special at manyata's words.

Manyata: I want you to forget me and move on and one thing no one is makes do and things. I am just grow up and take up my duties as a princess and future queen. I hope you understand.

Akash : but moniya I love you and grabbed her but she push him away.

Manyata: moniya is not my name. It is rajkumari manyata and I love someone else. Not you.

Uday: someone else. Who? Manyata tell me.

Manyata: can we talk about after I finish talk to akash.

Manyata: look akash I see you as good friend more

Akash now she was the truth because she looks into his eyes and told him that she did not love but someone else.

Manyata: it's better it you leave. And walk closer to uday.

Akash: I hope you know what you're doing Rajkumari Manyata. I hope he know you love him and that why you made this decision.

Uday look puzzled at akash and ask him to leave. Uady turn to Manyata

Uday: who your new crush?

Manyata : I just said that so he would believe that want him to move on.

Uday know she was lying but play along.

Uday: oh is that so. Can we go to dinner now

Manyata: of course. Come on unnati I am so hungry

To be Continued

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For ur third langueage ur english is not that bad just some errors here and there!

Loved the OS and the way uda said "Who ur new crush?"

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Thank for the comments
I will update tomorrow
I am happy you guys like my wOrk. I wa bored and start to write.
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