OS: The last time Manyata (NOTE On PAGE 32) - Page 3

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i accepted ur buddy request n thnks 4 sendin the PM..😉 loved it yaar!!😳
very beautifully written👏👏👏 but u should put lots of intense n hot scenes of Manveer in ur next OS okay yaar would love to read UV n Manyata's hot chemistry scenes...😉😳
i know i might be askin too much but cant help it would love to read some more OS jus on Manveer's love track!!😍
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OMG! Awesome OS!

Love it so far and when u do the double updates. That's fab!
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waooo awsum plzz keeep on writing n plzz pm me also...
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😳Hayeee😳
I lovedd it
Both parts were amazing
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i read the first part before.. but just read the last 3 parts right now... very nice OS.. really liked it n thanx for the add n pm.. plz continue wen u have time 😊

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awesome part...loved manyats dresses...update soon...thanx 4 the pm
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Nice update.. Finally getting engaged officially...

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I TRIED TO WRITE ROMANTIC THINGS BUT IT REALLY BAD.

FIVE PART

As manyata walked down. All the eyes were on her. She finally reach the stage. Where dadisa was waiting for her.

They hug and manyata took her blessing.

Dadisa: ladies and gentlemen. This my granddaughter Rajkumair Manyata. Today we have come here to have her officially engaged to Rajkumar Udayveer. Let us all bless them for the future. Uday beta come here.

Uday walked over to the stage. They exchanged ring s and took everyone blessings from both families.

The couple start the dance off.

Uday: shall we dance princess

Manyata: yes

Manyata match all of uday's moves.

Uday: I think the dance classes really work out for you.

Manyata: I had a good teacher. He was so sweet.

Uday pull manyata aside and asked.

Uday: manyata your dancing teacher was a boy?

Manyata: yes of course. Why do you ask?

Uday: dadisa said that it was a girl.

Manyata: well it was in the beginning but I didn't like her.

Uday: so that your new crush. You're dancing teacher.

Manyata was irritated with the questions and play along.

Manyata: yes so he cute and so sweet.

Uday boiled with jealous. He pull manyata closer and whispered princess, you are only mine. No matter how many boys you date and play with. At the end of it all, you will be with me.

Uday had cornered manyata into a wall and just got closer and closer. Until there was no distance in between them. It was like a body per body, a breath per breath and a heart per a heart. Manyata couldn't help herself from staring into his eyes.

Manyata: uday I think we should go back to the party. What if someone see us like this?

Uday: like what princess? We are not doing anything wrong. You are my to be wife and I want to spend time with you. You're my mine.

Manyata blushed and tried to hide her face but couldn't. Manyata just wanted to tell uday that her new crush was not a crush but the love of her life. She just wanted to say " I LOVE YOU UDAY" but fear the reaction she would get. Would he laugh or made funny of her. What would he say?

Manyata and uday were so closer that manyata was having hard time breathing. She just want to run away but could. Uday won't let her.

Uday: princess, why do you have that look in your eyes. Iam not going to eat you.

Then uday carefully placed a kiss on manyata's forehead and said "your mine and only mine"

As he finish his sentence. Unnati, J and Virjay Bhai had come out looking for them.

Virjay Bhai : Uday and manyta I see you can't keep your hand off each other.

Manyata and uday quickly separated. They tried so hard not to brush but couldn't help it.

J: jiji should we come back later?

Manyat: j

Unnati: dad , so I think we should we you married today.

Uday was brushing to hard that he couldn't even unnati in the eye.

Uday: choti, me and manyata were just talking.

Virjay Bhai: TALIKNG? ABOUT WAHT? YOU'RE HONEYMOON?

Manyata felt so embraced that she made a ran form it.

J: Uday I think jiji is starting to like you.

Virjay Bahi: come on girls, leave my brother-in-law alone. He needs his space.

Unnati: ok come. Let get back to the party before dadisa get mad at us for disappearing .

The four head back to party.

Komal: uday bta , where were you . manyata come back 15 minutes ago.

Unnati ,J,Virjay Bhai exchanged looks and look back at manyata.

Of course manyata was already there and sitting in between her father and her father-in-law. They were talking.

Unnati: dada was just get some fresh air.

Maharaj Brijraj: ok now that everyone here. I would like to say something.

He and uday' s dad walked up to the stage.

Maharaj Brijraj: everyone , today we are to bless my daughter and her future husband, we have decided that they wedding will take placed in eight months.

Everyone clapped. Both maharaj walked back to manyata and smiled and hugged her.

Maharaj Grijraj: are you happy now

Manyata: yes uncle Grijraj. Thank you so much

Everyone look at manyata and both maharaj puzzled.

They had dinner and finally all the quest were gone. Both family were sitting in the living room.

Dadisa: Brijraj and maharaj grijraj why didn't you pick the early date for the wedding? Like next month?

Uday jump out of his seat

Uday: what date?

Manyata and komal smiled at each other.

Manyata: relax uday. Well dadisa want our wedding to take place next month but I want to wait.

Uday turn his dad

Uday: dad did you know. He nodded why did you tell me?

Maharaj Grijraj: well you see, it was the first time my daughter-in-law ask me for something. How could I say no?

Unnati: dad I think dad can't wait to married manyata for 8 month.

Uday face was red as tomatoe.

J : uday , it only 8 months

Virjay Bahi: they wall just fly away so fast that you want realize it .

Manyata got up and walk to uday.

Manyata: uday you always say that if I want something. I just need to ask. Right.

Everyone look confused at each other.

Uday: of course manyata

Manyata: than I want to get married in 8 months not now. Ok So can you plz let me.

Uday: fine but only 8 months.

CRASHED!

Someone throw a rock with a letter attract to it. the windows was broken. Komal pick it up and started to read the letter

THE LETTER SAID:

DEAR MANYATA,

To be Continued

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sorry if there grammar and spelling mistake

i go to french school. English is my third language.

hope people like it

i want to try to write something




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