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Part Seven

The two families. They enter manyata's room. . Manyata and Virjay bhai asked what happen. Why is everyone here?

Manyata: did akash do something again. And look down to the floor.

Manyata: dadisa and maa why are you crying?

Maharaj Brijraj: what did you tell unnati last night?

Manyata look at unnati confused like never happened at last night but she knows what her father was talking about but didn't want to answer.

Manyata: nothing papa.

Uday: nothing princess? Then why did you tell unnati that you think that since you come back the family has more problems.

Komal and dadisa start to cry hard as uday finish his sentence.

Maharaj Griraj: why would you think that manyata beta?

Manyata turn to the window and stared out at the sky.

Manyata: Griraj uncle it not that I blame myself but a fact that I am the problem. You see after I come into your lives there have been more problems with anything I do. Good or bad. When I was missing everyone thought that was a good daughter and respectable daughter of this family but since I returned. Peoples think that I am here from the money and power in my name or here because my family forces me. I really want to be the rajkumari that dadisa wants be to be but no matter what I try. It always goes wrong. I some think it would be best if i die. Then uday can marry J and you all can live happily ever after and everyone would be happy. I know I shouldn't be saying this but I can't feel like that. I do love all of you with my life but…( tears were round down manyata's face like a river.)

Now everyone had tears in they eyes and didn't know what to say .

Dadisa walk to manyata and turn her round and said

Dadisa: Mnayata you the best thing that happen to both families and you will make a better queen than anyone in this family and don't even say that it would have been better if you die because if you die that me and komal will too because you are our life. (they and said that they love each other)

Manyata walked to komal and wiped her tear and said

Manyata: stop crying because you look more beautiful when you smile and hugged her.

Maharaj Brijraj; manyata beta. I never say this to you but you are my daughter and not a problem. In fact if the accident 16 years ago never happens then you would never have been taken away from us. It all my fault. I am not a good father to both my daughter.

Manyata: papa you are the best father a daughter can ask for. I would want you as my father in all my lives. Plus Maharaj don't cry.

Manyata stood up and said

Manyata: I thought royal are very strong and never saw they emotions. Plus what would the media say if they saw Devgarh and Jaigarth families crying. And if you don't stop crying I will run away.( manyata was smiling and had tear s rounding down her cheek as well

Uday: princess that no fair. First you make us cry with your speech and than you talk us that we need to be more strong.

J; jiji uday right this time. You are blackmailing us now.

Vijay Bhai: you get us all emotional and expert us not to cry. No fair jiji.

Unnati: manyata I argee with dada too.

Manyata: well you see you guys have been Rajwada your whole life and you should not saw your feeling. It a sign of weakness like uday says. And for the blackmailing part. J you taught me that.

Uday: I did say that but some it ok princess.

J; that true I did saw you haw to blackmail but do you know what you taught us?

Uday,Unnati,J and Virjay Bhai: how to feel emotions.

Maharaj Grijraj: that true manyata. We always took decision with our head but now we think with our head and hearts. You just like my wife. She never fit in the royal life but accepts all her duties and completes them. She always thought with her heart and that why I love her to much. She was not like the rajkumaris her age. Her heart was as pure as yours. She was beautiful from the inside and outside. She wanted the best for everyone. I see her in you. When you marry my son. I am not going to take as my daughter-in-law but my daughter. Your not just the daughter of the devgarh family but also the Jaidarh family.

Komal; you are the daughter that every mother wants but I have. You my life and anything would have to you I would die. You the eye of the family. I love you more than anything. Your are the gift that god give me and never want lose you. You're not the problem but the smile on my face.

J: you are one in a million. I love you so much.

Unnati: manyata you are my best friend and I love. I have many friend but for you I would throw all of them away.

Vijay Bhai: manyata jiji I wish that you were my real sister because I would be the prond brother to have you as a sister. Anyone would be.

Dadisa: manyata do you see what we see in you now. not a rajkumari but manyata the daughter of both families. You are our smile and life. So don't even think that way.

Uday: now it my turn. I want to do this mush more romance but I think this is the best time. ( uday toward manyata) manyata do you know why I want to marry you not for your monay and power but I want you. You make me different and make me feel different. I am Rajkumar Yuvaraj Udayveer Singh and I love you Rajkumari Manyata of Devgardh.( he got on his knee) Rajkumari Manyata will you marry me. Plz

To be Continued


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aww that was so emotional and beautiful and perfectly written and so sweet loved how everyone told her how she makes them feel and uday is so sweet he went down on his knees and proposed loved it thanks for the pm
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Thanks for the Pm! This part was FABULOUS(as usual).

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