OS: The last time Manyata (NOTE On PAGE 32) - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
the uday manyata part was actually romantic.. good job... thanx for the pm n plz continue wen u have time.. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Somia3

Manyata was irritated with the questions and play along.

Manyata: yes so he cute and so sweet.

Uday boiled with jealous. He pull manyata closer and whispered princess, you are only mine. No matter how many boys you date and play with. At the end of it all, you will be with me.

Uday had cornered manyata into a wall and just got closer and closer. Until there was no distance in between them. It was like a body per body, a breath per breath and a heart per a heart. Manyata couldn't help herself from staring into his eyes.

Manyata: uday I think we should go back to the party. What if someone see us like this?

Uday: like what princess? We are not doing anything wrong. You are my to be wife and I want to spend time with you. You're my mine.

Manyata blushed and tried to hide her face but couldn't. Manyata just wanted to tell uday that her new crush was not a crush but the love of her life. She just wanted to say " I LOVE YOU UDAY" but fear the reaction she would get. Would he laugh or made funny of her. What would he say?

Manyata and uday were so closer that manyata was having hard time breathing. She just want to run away but could. Uday won't let her.

Uday: princess, why do you have that look in your eyes. Iam not going to eat you.

Then uday carefully placed a kiss on manyata's forehead and said "your mine and only mine"

As he finish his sentence. Unnati, J and Virjay Bhai had come out looking for them.

Virjay Bhai : Uday and manyta I see you can't keep your hand off each other.

Manyata and uday quickly separated. They tried so hard not to brush but couldn't help it.

firstly thnks 4 the PM!!😉
secondly loved it yaar couldnt stop smiling like crazy through the whole OS 😳 but mostly was smilin n blushin through the quoted scenes above i mean the Manveer scenes were jus tooo cute hot n intense😍 jus loved it really well done amazing n beautiful writing too good yaar!!👏👏👏
really plzzz do continue writing dont stop on my watch 😆 cause i would love to read more!!!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
😳😃😛That was beautiful
I loveeed it
it was sooo cute
i was smiling throughout the scene
lOOOVED ManVeer
Canttt wait for the next part
Pleaseee contiinue soon
Thank oyu so much for PM😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
itz really nyc...n dont worry dont say sorry atleast u attempt na...many of us dont even dare to attempt also...n plzz keep on writin such gr88 piece of romantic posts on our manveer...n da romantic postion was really cute...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
the romantic part between the two was very sweet love how uday got so jealous and and manyata change the wedding date she want uday to love her thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
awsome! U r good gal! Neva underestimate urself or u will end up like me *wink*
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
nice...really good going...continue soon..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
That was so adorable! Great job:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
thank for all the great comment s
i will update today
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Just caught up with your os...
its so beautifully written👏...
really loved it...
plz add me into your pm list ..whenever you update..😊

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