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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it gal!!!😳 plzz do continue to write more cause i would love to read more...😳😉
u really did an amazing job writing well thoughted n beautiful as well as romantic too really very well done..👏👏👏
therefore do continue to write more n if u can plzzz do PM me when u update ok gal!!!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved every part of it
toh i did have a feeling that manyata might do some drama there
but this was awesome
eagerly waiting for more
do continue asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART THREE

Uday: so who's your new crush?

Manyata : I just said that so he would believe me and move on.

Uday know she was lying but play along

Uday: oh is that so. Can we go to dinner now?

Manyata: of course. Come on unnati I am so hungry.

They decided to go to the restaurant in the hotel. They walk toward the elevator when akash was still waiting for the door to open.

The door open and they all entry. Uday stay closer to manyata so akash would try anything. Manyata felt that she should have told Akash that she love uday now but couldn't because uday was there. She felt sorry for akash. Akash really love her. Manyata could feel uday's breath on her and got all her sense run up side down. She never felt this for anyone except for him. She just wants to get out of there!

Manyata: uday why is this elevator not opening? I want to get out of here.

Uday: relax princess; he won't touch you with me here. Just relax and grabbed her hand and pull her closer. There was no distance between them now.

Unnati just smiled as she watches her friend manyata and dada.

Akash was burst with jealousy. He thought to himself. She never let him get that closer to her. Manyata just brushed. She felt happy to be so closer to him.

Akash whispered as the elevator door open "get a room!" and walk out and out the hotel.

As the doors open Manyata back off and pull unnati out of the elevator to the lobby.

Uday got out and lead the girls to the restaurant.

They had dinner and talk about the upcoming engagement.

Manyata,unnati got out the restaurant and waited for uday to come out.

Uday come out and told Unnati to go to bed and get some sleep before the big day.

Unnati hug Manyata

Unnati: be ready tomorrow at 10. I will pick you and J up.

Manyata: but why?

Unnati: Because we are going to the salon to get you ready for your engagement

Manyata: fine.

They said they goodbye and uday and manyata walk toward the doors with five guards behind them.

Someone had leaked that the royal couple were having dinner at Uday's hotel. Manyata got scared and stop in the way.

Uday: what wrong princess? Why did you stop?

Manyata: the media

Uday; don't worry I will be right next to you. and brought her closer to him.

Hand in hand they walk out of the hotel. the media went wild and clicked picture none stop. Manyata just smiled. Manyata whispered are they always like this?

Uday smiled and nodded. They reach the car and both sat inside and ask the driver to drive off.

Manyata: but why? We are just people.

Uday: we are not just people. We are royal. We have to follow the rules and obey our parents. We are not free like them.

Manyata look at uday and tear. Is he the same person who always told me to act like princess and not ordinary girl. There was something different about him as he spoke today. He was uday not prince udayveer. Just uday.

Uday look over at manyata and saw the tear and reach over to wipes them.

Uday: manyata why are you crying now. For akash or your mew crush?

Manyata; no, there something in my eyes.

Uday: who is your new crush? You can tell me? I won't tell anyone as long as it a crush.

Manyata: there is no crush. I only aid that so akash would believe me. Trust me. Plus I am a one man woman unlike you. so who your girlfriend this wee uday. Sasha?

As manyata finish saying that they have reach the raj mahal.

Manyata got out of the car and run into the mahal. Thank the god the media didn't reach the mahal.

Uday still surprise at manyata's language and didn't realized that they had reach the mahal he got out the car and start to walk in.

IN THE MAHAL.

Manyata got in and was greet by J and Virjay bhai.( j and virjay bhai are nice in my os )

Shritama Mukherjee And Mark Farokh Parakh

THEY JUST GOT BACK FROM GOA.

J: we heard that you have accepted your duties as Rajkumari Manyata.

Manyata: yes J. I have.

J: but jiji what about Akash?

Virjay Bahi: what about him? You love him? Right

Manyata: No I don;t love him and he is history.

Uday walk in. Manyata hug her sister and brother and went into the living room to inform her family that she has returned home.

J and Virjay Bhai exchanged and look at uday.

J: how did she turn into a princess so fast? What did you do uday?

Virjay Bhai: how did you get her to dress like a princess?

Uday: it not me. She decided this.

They three enter the living room.

Dadisa: did you and manyata have a good time?

Uday: yes dadisa.

Manyata ask to go to bed and wished everyone "good night"

Manyata walked to her room. Everyone surprise at manyata's new behaviours.

Maharaj Brijraj: i am so happy today. We finally got Manyata

J: yes dad jiji has finally return

Everyone smiled at each other and watched manyata walked to her room.

Maharaj Grijraj: uday beta we should leave. We should all get some rest. We have a big day tomorrow.

Uady and Maharai Grijraj said they good bye and exited the mahal.

Dadisa order everyone to bed.

THE NEXT MORINING" THE BIG DAY"

To be Continued

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sorry if there grammar and spelling mistake

i go to french school. English is my third language.

hope people like it

i want to try to write something

Edited by Somia3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
ye i m the first one to comment loved itt
bt please please in ur next part show uday and manyata alone and have sum lovey dovey talk
pm me wen u write again

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one.. I luvd it.. Keep up the good wrk..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
awesome loved it she feel he is doing his duty and she is in love with him poor idiot akash love the update thanks for the pm hope uday finds out who her crush is so cute

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was really nicely n beautifully written!!👏👏👏

loved the romantic scene between Manyata n UV 😳 in the elevator tht was sooo intense loved it 😳 n thnks 4 the PM gal!!😉
do continue to write more cause i would love to read more...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART FOUR

THE NEXT MORINING" THE BIG DAY"

Manyata wake up and get ready for breakfast and walk down the dining area.

(This what manyata wore today)

Manyata: good morning everyone!

Dadisa: good morning beta

Komal: come sit right here, next to me.

Mahararj Brijrai: did you sleep well manyata beta

Manyata: yes papa

J and virjay bhai enter and greeted everyone.

J: jiji when is unnati get here

Manyata: at 10.

Virjay bhai: why is unnati coming here at 10?

Manyata and J: we are to the salon. To get ready for today.

The at uday's hotel.

Uday , unnati and maharaj Grijraj were have breakfast but uday wasn't eating anything. He was lost in his thoughts.

Unnati: dada why are you not eating?

Uday: I just don't feel like it.

Unnati: dad I think dada is bit nervous for his engagement. Should we cancel it and wait a bit more.

Maharaj Grijraj: why not. Manyata wants more time with her family anyways.

Uday look at his with a blank on his face

Uday: no dad. I am so ready for the engagement. Plus I am Rajkumar Yuvraj Udayveer Singh of Jaighar. I am not sacred of anything.( But even uady was just bit scared today. )Choti should get going. Manyata and J are waiting

Unnati: yes dada , bye dad, bye dada

BACK TO THE MAHAL

Manyata and J were sit in the living waiting for unnati. Finally unnati. They said they byes to the family and left for the salon

Unnati drove and j and manyata sat in the back.

They reach the salon and went in.

BACK TO THE MAHAL

At the mahal all the arrangement were finish and dadisa had over everyone to get ready. J and manyata had got back from the salon and were in they rooms. Get ready. At 6 uday and his family would get here.

At 5:30

All the guests had started to come.

Finally and uday and his family were here. Dadisa and komal did the aarti and invited them in.

( this is what uday was wearing)

Uday and Maharaj Grijraj down with Maharaj Brijraj and talk about random topics. Uday was not paying a tension. His eyes was scanning the house. To just get one look at manyata but ,she was still in her room get ready.

IN MANYATA ROOM.

Unnati and J were help her get ready.

Manyata: unnati and J, is it too late? The girl exchanged looks and look at manyata.

Unnati: late for what?

Manyata: to stop the engagement

Unnati: manyata I know you sacred but everything will be all right. Ok. Now smile

J: jiji you are going to knock the stock off everyone today. You look like angle. You look so hot and sexy today.

Unnati: dada in for it today.

( this is what for manyata will wear)

Unnati and J head down because manyata was to make her entry alone.

Unnati: dadisa she ready.

Dadisa: great. Call her down.

All the light were turn off except one that forced on the stairs. The song "Tu Hi Haqeeqat" play while manyata made her solo entry.

Everyone eyes on her.

She walked slow but with grace.

To be Continued

if you like

plz press the like button

sorry if there grammar and spelling mistake

i go to french school. English is my third language.

hope people like it

i want to try to write something


precap:

UDAY: will you dance with me manyata?

Edited by Somia3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THANK FOR ALL THE COOMENTS

I HOPE YOU LIKE ALL FOUR PARTS
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
awesome loved it uday is nervous and so is mayanta that so cute hope everything goes ok thanks for the pm

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