Poor daya 😳
please continue soon 😊
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Thnksssssssssssssss so much Ika......😳...😳 I had to shed gallons of tears when i wrote the episode......... made the atmosphere sad by playing sad songs & tunes................... ...Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer
Beautiful part...and very emotional 😠😠😠I feel like crying so much 😠ðŸ˜
Poor daya 😳
please continue soon 😊
yeah , I will try to post the next as soon as possible,o.k?😃
Thankssssssssssssssssss once again for your sincere comment
loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee🤗 suchi
OOOOOOOOGOOOOOOOOD!!!! U have made me flying in the sky,....Thankssssssssssssssssssss friend........ all of you are enjoying this story soooooooooooooomuch that is my greatest, biggest prize. U all are excellent buddies...... u all are my courage & inspiration to write more and experiment with my idea more....... Thanksssssssssss sooooooooooooooooooooo much freindOMGGGG suchi its sooo emotionalllll
i felt my heart breaking in half...poor dayaaa
suchi ur soooo briliiant yaar...GET THIS STORY PUBLISHED PLZZZZZ...i'll give u link for that
everything is soo realistic n imaginable in ur story...
every lil thing has a certain meaning n ending
luvvvv it...totally mind blowinggggg
continue soonnn plzzzz
waise its soo good to c ACP finally crying after he's done soo much to daya
loooooooooooooooooooooove🤗u all very much....
suchi🤗
Originally posted by: suchi_dev2006
Thnksssssssssssssss so much Ika......😳...😳 I had to shed gallons of tears when i wrote the episode......... made the atmosphere sad by playing sad songs & tunes................... ...
yeah , I will try to post the next as soon as possible,o.k?😃
Thankssssssssssssssssss once again for your sincere comment
loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee🤗 suchi
koshish to karti hun yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar par.... ye dil ka aag bujhte hi nahin................kisi jal se ye thori bujhegaðŸ˜ðŸ˜....lagta hain pichhle janam me main uska koyi to thi............marne ka darr hain nehi kyuki.......main...to usi din hi mar gayi......... jisdin .......use.... dekha tha......ek paddy field me.......😳Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer
Gallons of tears?😲 haila suchi, please control warna badh ajayegi😆😉
and I agree with daisy, you should get it published..main toh 1 day se bol rahi hon😃
love you🤗🤗
wow..yaaaaaaaar aise mat kaho....barna main to post hi nehi karungi...aur tum CID ko bulaogi...aur woh(😳😳) ayega....aur...main...faint...ho jaungi.........aur........😆😆😆suchi plzzz continue karo yaar
warna i'll send the CID to ur house...phir jail mai beth kar likhna parre ga😛 😛
so u better continue soon jaanu
Promise to post very soon, if possible then today I am going to post, o.k? lekin pher to CID nehi ayegaðŸ˜ðŸ˜
PART XII
Daya was eating the juice of pomegranate and gazing out of the window to see the ineffable beauty of the nature.just outside the window, there was a garden ablazed with flowers,the redolence of those flowers was wafted along by the breeze & he was snifflling to take it to his heart.Beside the garden there was pasture now full of thick grasses & wild scrubbs...all were buffeted by the cold breeze & beside the pasture there was a small lake, ripples were spreading as the breeze was blowing off, & rifted cloudlets were playing in the lap of clear azure sky... there....there......far.....away........somewhere the deep indigo had been reconciled with the dark green pasture....the sublime scenery was making him to get enthralled......eventually he became a little bit nostalgic to think about his childhood days he spent here. The pasture was much more cleaned in those days and they used to play there,tickled with one another,scuffled with one another and then again came closer with stark innocense,Daya smiled by himself thinking about the sprightliness of those days & suddenly he got back his sense to hear his name----Daya. Father came with a calm & serene smile
Daya: ha father....
Father: kaise mehsus kar rahe ho? achchha na?
Daya: ha father, ab main bilkul thik hun. he smiled very obsequiously.
Father came closer & kept his hand upon Daya's head & said--- my child,ab se tum yaha pe hi rahoge, hamare sath... aur ...
Daya was a bit surprised and told--- lekin father....mujhe jaldi Mumbai wapas jana hain, kab tak aise aram karte rahunga,bina kam se achchha nehi lag raha hain father.....
father: kam se kam ek hafte tak tum rest loge, tumhara Dr. ne hi mujhe ye kaha, samjhe ?
Daya smiled with a little coyness and then asked---lekin father, main yaha pe aya kaise? mujhe to kuchh yaad nehi hain........
father: Dr.salunkhe ji mujhe phone karke bataya ke tumhara tabiyat bohot kharap hain, turant main ambulence leke chala gaya tumhare ghar me aur ...tumhe leke aya, Daya .... kya halat huya tha tumhara!!!! It's all the grace of Almighty that He saved my child.
Daya sighed and asked--- waha pe Dr.Salunkhe the kya father?
Father: Dr.Salunkhe kya! shayad pura CID team hi tha,ACP Pradyuman......aur...
---aur woh log..... mujhe chhor... diya? a weeny huff he couldn't hide in his voice.
Father: to kya karega? tum par mera haq kuchh kam hain kya? ha? he came very closer to Daya and embraced him like a father did with his child.Daya nodded his head & to get coddled by the father his swelled pain came as tears to his eyes--arrey ye kya my child? tum ro rahe ho? he passed his hands gently over Daya's face & wiped his eyes out---hamesha yaad rakhoge....ke...hum....koyi bhi akela hain ...nehi.....God is always with us,hum sab unhi ka hi to santan hain....hum rote hain, to unhe bhi dard hota hain.... ha.... father was trying to quiten Daya by his warm yet calm preach.
A boy came ouside the door and tapped.---father
Father: ha pratul
Pratul: father, office me koyi aapse milne ke liye aye hain...
Father: ha chalo..
Father again turned towards Daya & ruffled his hairs with his affcetion-- Daya, main araha hun, tum bilkul rona nehi, ha mere bachche?
Daya gave him a childish titter & answered--- nehi father,aap fikar maat kijiye,main thik hu.
Daya stared with smile at the way Father had gone & then noticed that his cell was blinking again & again:"Tarika calling".He didn't receive it & after sometimes switched the cell off & eventually lots of questions were wandering through his mind----kyu phone kar rahi hai woh? kya woh musibat me hain? ....woh to hain hi..... lekin......
--Daya.Father again came with a smile & then told-----Mumbai se ACP Pradyuman aye hain Daya, kya main unhe andar bheju?
Daya got up from the bed with hurry & said-- father, main chalta hun unke pass, he was tingling with excitement.
father: nehi Daya, tum baitho, main unhe andar bhej deta hu, thik hain?
Daya sat like an obedient child and within a minutes ACP came..but.. not with his famous noisy stumping walk but by a very slow steady walk, he came infront of Daya.Daya was craving to see him--sir,........kaise hain aap?
A tinge of guilt,a stab of penitence ACP couldn't wipe off from his face, he remained silent for a few moments & then very gently told--- main achchha hu Daya, tum kaise ho?
Daya smiled very cloyly & answered--main bilkul thik hu sir.
ACP:(with more gentle voice) to pher yaha pe kyu baithe ho Daya? chalo, main aaj tumhe bureau me le jane ke liye aaya hun.
Daya was affected by a subtle peace & tranquility....but....didn't reflect it upon his face---lekin sir.....father...
father: yes, ACP sir,bohot saal baad Daya ko paye hain hum,kam se kam ek hafta.... use yaha pe rakhna chahta hun........of course agar aap use chhutti de to...
ACP became very thoughtful and told father---usdin aapne zabardosti hamare pas se ise le ake bohot achchha kiya tha..... father,humne to..... ye sabeet kar diya ke.... aur .... aap jaise khayal to koyi bhi nehi rakh sakte hain.
father smiled lightly and said--- ye aap ka modesty hain,aap ko Daya bohot shradhdha karte hain, he admires you next to his heart. Anyway,aap log baat kijiye, main office me hun.Father went on his way with a nice smile.
ACP felt the moisture within his eyes,the words of father were haunting him---"he admires you next to his heart".He very slowly spunned towards Daya and sat there,his face was filled with morbid glumness & contrition & now he clasped Daya's one hand & said-- Daya...... agar kisi bhi tarha se.... maine tumhe dukh pauchaya...... to..pher....mujhe..
Daya yelled out---nehi sir,kabhi nehi, aap aise sar mat jhukaiye sir, ye ....Daya's voice choked with emotion---ye humara sar bhi jhuka dete hain sir....bohot...bohot shar mindegi .. mehsus hote hain...sir...please aap..
tears were brimming over ACP's eyes---tumhe bohot data ...Daya
Daya lowered his eyes & cowering at the floor he sputtered---datenge sir.... aap nehi datenge.....to...kaun...
ACP now held Daya next to his chest & his voice was throbbing with emotion---galat samajhkar....dat...liya...Daya felt secure & warm within ACP's arms and his pent up torments were melting in ACP's care & love.Every filth,misunderstanding wiped off with the tears and now ACP got back his sense, he left Daya & quickly moped his eyes down---to Daya,ye aram karne ka time nehi hai, samjhe??? Daya was surprised to see his sir with again a normal voice & attitude---sir ...aap
ACP: nehi nehi, tumhe ek hafte se zada kisi bhi haal me chhutti nehi milega, chalo, bohot so liya tumne, aab letne ka time khatam aur kam karne ka time shuru, samjhe?
Daya smiled very bashfully and answered---yes sir.
ACP gave a loud chortle this time...Daya couldn't recall the last day he noticed ACP sir to laugh like this.Then ACP kept his hand upon Daya's head & told-- aapna khyal rakhna ha...aur bukhar to nehi aye?
Daya was abashed to get so much care & affection--nehi sir..
ACP: thik hain, to tum aram karo...saat din se zada nehi...aur main,ab ...he was about to go but Daya called him---sir...
ACP spunned again towards him--ha Daya, kuchh kahoge?
Daya was silent for a couple of minutes & then with lowered eyes he was hesitant---nehi sir....rehne dijiye........
ACP: kya baat hain Daya? bolona....
Daya: sir...woh........he couldn't
ACP smiled wryly & then told him very slowly-----Tarika ki suspension order ko head quarter se wapas liya gaya hain.....woh bekasoor sabeet ho gayi,now he kept his eyes again upon Daya
Daya: ....aur sir...muskan???...sir...woh jhut..kyu boli sir....
ACP: Daya,tumhare tabiyet abhi thik nehi hain....to bureau me wapas chalo....pher...sab..kuchh...khud hi pata chal jayega,o.k?
Daya again was abashed --o.k sir
ACP rumpled his hairs & went out of the room with a satiated & satisfied smile.
Daya now came to nearer the window & saw the the different hue of the dusk,the tints of the rainbow in the sky,the flocks of the birds and the huffy puffy clouds everything he was watching minutely and for some minutes he consigned everything in supplication---Tarika,I'm so happy today,tumhe to bekasoor sabeet hona hi tha,.......zarur tum bhi khush ho, agar tum khush rahogi....chahe woh is duniya ki kisi kon me kyu na ho.....main khush rahunga.....aur......ho...sake..to.....is....bad............ . naseeb.....ko....bhul..jana...main....tumhe....kuchh...bhi.. nehi....de...paya.....
----uncle.Daya was jolted to hear a soothing croon, as he turned himself he saw a tiny tot was standing at the door,her hairs were curly,eyes were blue,face was suffused with glutinous chocolates,she scuttled into the room with her weeny bare foots and tossed her head upwards to stare at Daya. Suddenly a brisk of gale started to blow within his heart, he came & stooped down to face the child & then cooed--- kaun ho tum?
---dhumu.A spontaneous answer he heard from the baby.The baby was concentrating on her chocolates which made her face like a sharp thorn & which made her more sweet,now Daya wanted to confirm---dhumu,tum
---dhumu nehiiiiiiiiii ...the baby protested with the stark energy within her.
Daya was enjoying so much, he could understand the pure & profound innocense of the child was swamping his heart.
--to pher? he tried to chaff with the child
---dhumu.the baby answered again though no difference he could find in the name of the baby.
--tum pulich ho?
Daya made his face thoughtful a little while & then told--tumhe kya lagta hain?
The baby didn't answer Daya but again asked him----batto ko jo lakchhachh pakalke le jate hain tum unko pakalte ho? Daya now couldn't remain silent he just burst into peal of laughter, his face was sparkling with subtle glee & delight.He just pulled the baby within his lap & kissed on her cheeks & said--- ha pakarta hu, kyu....tum aise kisiko dekha kya? The baby was busy to finish the chocolate & said--- ha.
--achchha? kaha? tumne dekha use? Daya was cajoling her to say some words.
--yaha pe,ek..ek...aya tha.she answered without giving much attention to Daya.
---hmm, kaise dikhta tha woh? tumhe to kuchh nehi kaha? Daya became a freind of the baby
---ganda tha, bale bale akhe phal phal ke dikh laha tha.
Daya was thinking minutely this time as this baby forced her to think .......&...he muttered by himself---ganja,bare bare akhe phar phar ke....now he understood that..the baby was mentioning about...... ACP pradyuman. Daya again burst into a loud chortle....but the baby was unperturbed & she was licking her weeny-teeny fingers not to waste even just one particle of the chocolate.
---arrey jhumu, to tum idhar ho? aur hum tumhe...Father came into the room.
Daya smiled & said--father...ye bohot sweet hain,.......
Father also smiled and said--- ha... , tum bhi aise the......both were silent for few moments and then father told--- chalo, jhumu, tumhari teacher abhi akar tumko dhunne lagenge, "dancing dancing play" class chal raha hai, chalo,he then took Jhumu in his lap from Daya and was about to go. & jhumu was yelling --nehi,main talika aunty ki pat daungi,thol do, talika..
Daya was smiling his heart out to see stubborn Jhumu.....but suddenly..........he stopped... a strange feeling was tingling within him...a mixture of excitement,anxiety,craving,pain,delight....he couldn't define it within himself...........someone's pure puckish grin was coming into his mind....he awakened as someone was tapping at the door.....he turned his face....none other than ...Tarika was standing there ..............
[To be continued]
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