Create Scenes (UPDATED NEW pg6) - Page 11

hmmmmmmm 😳 yes, friends, both of your guess is right.
sorry for being late, here is the next part.

OMG suchi...i reeleeeeee enjoyed readin dat part
i jus luvv how sanulkhe got the right conclusion to each saboot...luvedddd it
Tarika is such a sweetheart...omg after wat happened to her she still seemed to be soo understanding and forgiver..WOw
suchi yaar i luv the vocab. u use in both eng. n hindi...its simply mind blowing....
i still didnt undertand y abhi wuz behaving so rudely and bossy esp. with devyana earlier in the other epi.
i hope thingz get settle there as well...
i wonder where daya is...i m soo in a suspence rite now cant wait to find out!!!
i luv how u actually leave the ending veryyyyyy suspenceful
i have feeling dis story is gona end soon...but plzzz make it a never-ending one...
i hv lootsss more to say...will cum bak to dis
bye for now
n once again ur brilliantttt suchi
Daisy!!

Originally posted by: Daisy!!

OMG suchi...i reeleeeeee enjoyed readin dat part
i jus luvv how sanulkhe got the right conclusion to each saboot...luvedddd it
Tarika is such a sweetheart...omg after wat happened to her she still seemed to be soo understanding and forgiver..WOw
suchi yaar i luv the vocab. u use in both eng. n hindi...its simply mind blowing....
i still didnt undertand y abhi wuz behaving so rudely and bossy esp. with devyana earlier in the other epi.
i hope thingz get settle there as well...
i wonder where daya is...i m soo in a suspence rite now cant wait to find out!!!
i luv how u actually leave the ending veryyyyyy suspenceful
i have feeling dis story is gona end soon...but plzzz make it a never-ending one...
i hv lootsss more to say...will cum bak to dis
bye for now
n once again ur brilliantttt suchi
Daisy!!

thanksssssssssssssssssssssssssss yaaaaaaaaaaaarr once again encouraging me, which everytime gives me the enthusiasm to work more hard. I really feels sad for Abhi, he's in a condition where anyone could beahve like this....he's totally confused..abt.what is right or wrong & again Daya's sadness made him very sad😭, but.. as he couldn't express it straightway,thus it burst out like that, as devyana tapped the door of his heart,he is disturbed....but.... couldn't find any way how in such a condition he would able to... so all confusion made him like this...barna andar se woh bohot soft hai........anyway u really made my day good, now I's writing the 12th episode,and very soon will post the next, o.k? bye for now but will sign up very very soon.

love suchi

Wow... That was brilliant 👏 👏 👏
you are a very good writer!!!
Keep up the good work 👏

Originally posted by: payal_r

Wow... That was brilliant 👏 👏 👏
you are a very good writer!!!
Keep up the good work 👏

Thankssssssssssssss very much payal for encouraging me, I will definitely work hard in future and tha's because all of u are enjoying this story so much...... once again a biiiiiiiig thanks to u for your comments

love suchi😳

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer

wow Suchi, absulotely marvellous... 👏 👏 👏 I felt the emotions in me 😳 😭..aww Tarika is sweetheart 😃 but where is Daya? missing him 😳 😳 😃
continue soon 😃

thankssssssssssssssssssssssss ika once again, me too missing him, dekhte hain kaha gaya hai woh😆😆, surely will continue soon, I can understand how much tension i am giving to all of u to create suspense abt. Darling❤️ Daya, surely will post very soon, till then all of you, take care buddies

love &n bsp; suchi🤗

Originally posted by: Daisy!!

suchi plzz continue soon

yess, Daisy, Iam here now to continue..... here is the next part.

PART XI

ACP quickly called Abhijeet---ha Abhijeet,kya Daya bureau me aya hain?
Abhijeet: nehi,sir woh to abhi tak... nehi aye,aur ... sir maine use phone

karne ka bhi koshish kiya tha to ...woh phone utha nehi raha hai sir.....
ACP: My God....Abhijeet.... he paused with a sombre glumness
Abhijeet: kya huya sir, Daya thik to haina? now Abhijeet couldn't repress his

anxiety anymore.
ACP was intensely perturbed & restless---Abhijeet, tum ek kam karo, abhi tum

Daya ke ghar jao, hum log bhi arahe hain, aur dekho....he stopped with much

anxiety.
--kya dekhu sir??? Abhijeet too was very anxious.
--Abhijeet please, ACP shouted , sawal mat puchho, aur jao, jaldi jao,
Abhijeet: yes sir.
Abhijeet was in haste & ran out of the bureau to reach at Daya's House.
Here at CID headqarters everyone was shocked & worried for Daya
Dr.Salunkhe: kya baat hain ACP saab,Daya...
ACP: salunkhe,pehli baar ACP Pradyuman se itni bari galati ho gaya,
Salunkhe:(being very restless) ab aap pehli maat bujhaiye ACP saab, Daya ka

kya huya hain?
Tarika was rasping in anxiety--sir, woh bureau me aye kya? abhijeet ne kya

bataya sir???
acp was in hurry--chalo dekhte hain,they were scooting towards the residence

of Daya but.... each & everyone was stricken with tremendous worry & fright.
They reached at destination after half an hour & rushed to the door of the

house. Abhijeet also reached by then , he came to them & told--- sir, main

kabse bell de raha hu, koyi bhi nehi khol raha hai, mujhe lagta hai Daya ghar

pe hain nehi
Muskan: sir, kayi woh beech pe to nehi hain? Kalamb beech pe?
Abhijeet: ha sir ho sakte hain.... jab uska man kharap hote hain, tab

woh..... Abhijeet couldn't continue , a clod of agony strangled his voice.
ACP was thinking something very deeply & then asked--Muskan tumhe kaise pata

hai ke woh kalamb beech pe....
Muskan: sir, main baad me bataungi, pehle hume waha pe jana chaiye
Tarika started to sob---sir,woh thik to haina? maine use bohot dard pauchayi

sir....... .. mujhe.....
Abhijeet kept his hand upon Tarika's head & tried to console her--- Tarika,

samhal lo aapne aapko, please. But he didn't know that Tarika was

inconsolable, she was shoving the door hastily & yelling--Daya, kaha ho tum?

...... please darwaza kholo,please, meri baat suno,Daya......
Everyone was stunned to see Tarika's desperate cravings for Daya and stared

at her with silent sympathy.
---Daya,mujhse galti ho gaya hai, dekho sab aye hain, ACP sir, Salunkhe sir,

Abhijeet, Muskan sab tumhara intezar.... she burst into tears
Muskan came closer & held Tarika within her arms, tears brimming over her

eyes too--- kuchh bhi nehi hoga Daya sir ko,woh bilkul thik thak rahega,
meanwhile Abhijeet too was dashing the door with much force and said with

excitement---sir,darwaza andar se band hai, iska matlab Daya andar hi..... he

couldn't say anymore suspecting about the worst.
--nehiiii, aisa ho nehi sakta, woh .....Tarika yelled with the utmost emotion

which was renting the air.
ACP: Abhijeet, darwaza tor do,
Abhijeet; yes sir,
Abhijeet was trying very hard to break the door down, but it was taking time,

and every second was becoming hard to endure for them. Finally the door was

broken & they rushed inside----Daya.... Daya..... ACP was screaming but his

voice was much mild this time.
---Daya sir,Muskan was running gustily towards a room
Abhijeet & Dr.salunkhe entered into the bedroom &.................Dr.

Salunkhe screamed---ACP saab idhar aiye bedroom me.
Daya laid up in the bed unconciously,his one hand was flopped through the bed

side awkwardly, a glass had been splintered into pieces over the floor & the

jug was too laid on the floor,probably he scrabbled for some water but

couldn't.... but the glass was broken into pieces.
Abhijeet: My God, Daya..... Daya.... . as he touched him he understood that

Daya was down with very high fever.His one palm was over his chest grasping a

photograph.
ACP rushed to the bedroom & after watching Daya he sighed with profound

agony--- oh no,kitna bhala bura kaha use,.......bechara...
Dr. Salunkhe didn't leave ACP, but he jeered at him--- wah ACP saab, aap ko

bhi kisike liye dukh hote hain? ajeeb hain
ACP very mildly said-- salunkhe, ..... woh Daya hain, jisdin se CID me join

kiya usidin se woh...... he stopped and winced in pain.
Salunkhe: achchha!!!!!, jab yehi baat maine aapko bataya tha tab kya huya

tha?????
Abhijeet was becoming restive at a time and pleaded---sir, please kya aap log

is waqt jhagar rahe hain, sir, Daya behosh hain,bukhar charte charte woh

behosh ho gaye hain.... hum kya kare sir, kkuchh to ....kkuchh to karna hi

parega sir, he was stammering in nervousness.Tarika was blubbering very badly

as well Muskan---sir, please kuchh kijiye sir, daya sir ko bacha lijiye,
Dr.salunkhe took Daya's hand and checked the pulse---my God, pulse to bohot

zada hain, abhi injection dena parega aur saline bhi, Dr.Tarika, abhi

injection ready kijiye, mere bag me ek hain, aur Muskan, tum ....kisi medical

shop se saline mangva lo, jaldi karo.
Tarika was sniffling profusely & wasn't in a condition to do anything, Muskan

wiped her eyes out and started to call for medical shop.
Now Dr.salunkhe gave a loud reprimand to Tarika---Dr.tarika,tum ek Dr.ho,aise

rone se Daya nehi bachega,to jaldi karo,
---Kya!!!!! ACP & Abhijeet was shocked !!!!
---Salunkhe, ye itna serious hain???? woh......ACP was scared.
Salunkhe: Haaaaaaaaaa ACP saab,Toxic shock syndrome ki waja se ye huya

hain,agar jaldi bukhar ko kam nehi kiya jayega to pher.......
ACP shouted---- to pher kya salunkhe!!!
Salunkhe: to pher woh comma me bhi ja sakte hain
A thunderbolt came by Salunkhe's statement, Tarika came gustily to ready the

injection but she wasn't being able to.... how could she???? only Daya's

smiling face was coming infront of her...... jal gaya andar se woh, humne use

jala diya,jis waqt use mera sabse zada zarurat tha us waqt use apno se

........dur dhakel diya......aur ....ek suna..... andhera raho me........

phir....... se.... phir se use akela chhor diya.....woh.... to mujhse .....

kabhi....... kuchh bhi nehi manga tha.....Tarika was trying hard but again &

again her eyes were becoming blurred.....
Muskan called for saline and then went beside a window & stared at the

sky,daylight was ebbing away & the sky was so gloomy!!!!!---kya woh bhi dukhi

hain???? woh bhi mehsus kar sakte hain Daya sir ke dard ko????? aur mere diya

huya zahar se woh jalke rakh ho gaya, lekin............. kisiko samajhne tak

nehi diya.............akele pi gaya puri zahar ko.........tears swamped her

eyes & cheeks.
Abhijeet came into a corner of the room & lamented by himself---kash.....kash

ekbar main use ye kehta ke Daya main tumhare sath hu, tumpe mera pura bharosa

hain..... to... shayad..... shayad... aaj woh...
and ACP!!!!!! He had to face the most hard situation....couldn't be emotional

too much infront of subordinates......but he was smouldering with

repentance,every day, every moment he pelt Daya again & again with his scoff,

scathing rage..... everytime he fulfilled his despair & dissatisfection by

belittle & insulting Daya......but he!!!!!,everything endured with obsequious

obedience.to think about Daya's rueful face even ACP couldn't resist himself,

tears came even in the eyes of ACP Pradyuman...but he wiped it surreptitously

& then noticed the photograph---kiska photo hain ye?
He took very gently the photograph under the tight grasp of Daya and looked

into it----ye to Daya ka parents hain......bechara.....kitna dard huya...hoga

usko.......
Salunkhe:ha ACP saab, aur aisa zabardast shock ki waja se nervous system ka

cells distorted or dislocated ho jate hain, aur as a result patient dyslexic

ho jate hain.
ACP:(with a frown) woh kya hain???
Dr.Salunkhe: woh ye hai ACP saab ke patient likhna parna sab bhul jate hain,

yaha tak aapna naam bhi yaad.....
---Please Salunkhe saaab... chup kijiye.... Abhijeet shrieked out
--aur... kaise.... kaise.... use ....woh thik ho sakte hain woh

bataiye......Abhijeet was panting heavily.
Tarika meanwhile kept a curb on her spouting tears & asked Dr.Salunkhe---sir,

kya aap CC0.50 injection de rahe hain?
Dr.Salunkhe: ha
Tarika: lekin sir, ye injection to bohot strong hain, aur .....
Salunkhe: aur koyi chara nehi hain Dr.Tarika,zada der wait karenge to

hemorrhage bhi ho sakte hain......lijiye ,injection lagaiye.....
Tarika: siiir main!!!!!
Salunkhe: ha aap, aap hi lagaienge
Tarika was shivering---sir..... main nehi laga sakti .....sir.... mera hath

kap rahe hain....
Salunkhe: Dr.Tarika,Daya ke liye aapni jaan to aap dao pe rakh diya...us head

quarter me.... aur use bachane ka jab muharat aya to..
---sir main laga rahi hu, she strengthened herself within a moment & then

pushed the injection into Daya's upper arm & suddenly a glimpse of thought

came into her mind---- zada tar criminals ko pakarte pakarte ye bahe to thak

gaye hai,... ye tumhe thanks dena chahte hain......Daya ne kaha tha, aur

aaj.... wohi bahome...
---Dr.tarika , aap saline dene ka bandobast kijiye aur Abhijeet ek ambulence

bulake rakho, agar is injection ka asar hoga to pher andhe ghante ke andar hi

hoga.... barna ...
Abhijeet: Barna???
Salunkhe: Barna use hospital me le jana parega,
ACP:(with much worry & disgust) to pher salunkhe, abhi kyu hum use hospital

me nehi leke gaye?
Salunkhe: woh isliye ACP saab ke hospital me bohot processing ke baad

treatment shuru hoga jisme der ho sakte hain, mere khayal se....... is

injection se ...asar hona chaiye....
ACP: (with a little relief) hoga na salunkhe?? yaar main tumse wada karta

hun, agar tum..... (with a sad & rueful voice) Daya ko thik kar dete

ho.......to kabhi main tumhare sath mu nehi laraunga...
Salunkhe: ACP saab,ab mujhse mu laraye ya nehi, tana de ya nehi, mujhe phark

nehi parta hain , lekin Daya ko to....... thik hona hi hain...........for a

little while he became emotional & thoughtful, but regain his conciousness

soon and said---- Abhijeet, tum jake paani leke aao, iske sar me paani dalte

hain,
now ACP was became a little more restive---tum Daya ko leke experiment kar

rahe ho!!!! agar use kuchhh huya na...... he Snarled at Salunkhe without

finishing his words.
---wah ACP saab,uska ye haal aap hi ne kiya... aur use kuchh .....
---Salunkhe!!!!! ACP shouted.--Kuchh nehi hona chaiye useeeeeee, samjhe

tum..... kuchh bhi nehi hona chaiye........ (with a very sad & low voice) use

kuchh bhi nehi ho sakta hain.
Abhijeet came with water & Dr. Salunkhe ordered---Tarika, chalo, sar ko

achchhi tarha se thande paani se dho dalo, aur dhote raho.... bar bar.......
Tarika came closer to Daya and again looked into Daya's unconcious face &

said within herself-----kaha khoye huye ho tum?......aise soye huye ho ek

bachche ki tarha...... jaise...... kuchh ....maloom nehi hain...... agar kahi

jana............hain... tumhe.....Tarika closed her eyes.....to mujhe bhi le

chalo.......wada karti hun.... Daya...... isbar ...... hath nehi

chhorungi......she evetually started to ruffle his straying & rugged

hairs----nehi uthoge!!......itna abhimaan huya hain tumhe..........ekbaar

pass ake to dekho.......sirf ekbar ....Daya... she was stroking Daya's

forhead &..---Dr.Tarika
----yes sir, she came back into the reality,
---Sar pe paani daliye, jaldi.
Tarika started to pour cold waters upon Daya's head again & again & sprinkled

some water upon his face.......as time was passing by everyone was getting

restless......................but....Daya ...... started to writhe &

moan......

ahhh.....koyi........koyi.............koyi...bhi......ahh..k oyi....
---Daya... Daya.... ACP just ran beside the bed
----koyi ..........bhi............
Abhijeet sat beside Daya & clenched his palm within his own---Daya, kkuchh

nehi hoga tumhe...... dekho.... akhe kholo.... main..hu...Abhijeet, his voice

choked by pain, eyes were blurred with tears.
---ahhh......koyi...........koyi......bhi.......pass........ now his moan

converted into low groan.....mere

......mere....pass......pas......mat.....ana.........main... ....main.......
....sab...sabka......sirf......aaa
ACP: Chup karo Daya.... tumhe kuchh bhi kehna nehi hoga Daya, sab maloom par

gaya hain mujhe.ACP took the gogggles to cover his eyes even in the shabby

evening.
---koyi.......bhii....pas..nehi....ana.....Daya was gasping for

breath---luk....luksan ......ho....jate.....hai......
---aisa maat kaho Daya,now Abhijeet became extreme emotional
---ta...tarika....tarika...........kabhi.....nehi....ana.... .pas.......nehi..

.....
Tarika sat there still in utter shock.
Now ACP burst--Salunkhe, tumne to kaha na injection ka asar hoga, to phe.r.
Salunkhe: ha to huya na asar, woh behosh tha, use hosh agaya hain, lekin pura

nehi, abhi bhi semi concious hain,bukhar ko utarne dijiye......
ACP: aur kitna der me....
Salunkhe: ahista ACP saab, aap to ek bachche ki tarha besabr ho rahe

hain,.... thora sa to dheeraj rakhna hi parega..
Abhijeet: sir,woh shayad bohot pyase hain, thora sa paani dena chaiye.....
ha.....pyase hai woh....lekin kuchh bhi nehi mangega phir bhi......
---aaaaaaaaa.....chale jao........sab......log.......maine.....

maine......maine ....hi....mere......parents..........ka.....bad.......Daya

was breathing heavily........bad...naseeb.....bankar.....aya...aya.....tha ..
ACP was being extremely perturbed----please, salunkhe, use chup karvao,

mujhe.......ACP stopped to swallow a clod of pain.....mujhse aur dikhai nehi

deta....
Muskan gritted her teeth with pain & kept riveted with the window, she

couldn't turn back to see what was happening behind & sometimes was staring

at the sky to pray for Daya.
Abhijeet too was panting in glutted agony---Tarika, tum paani pilao Daya ko,

ye lo. Tarika was silent, but a devastating storm was blowing inside her,it

seemed that she was teetering on the brink of disaster...........which made

her like a stone
--Tarika, Tarika.......sun rahi ho? hath rakho tum apni Daya ke sar pe...

rakho hath, use kaho...... ke....... tum.... uske....sath ho....... pas...

ho..... bolo.... Tarika Abhijeet was pleading.
---use.....bohot...abhimaan huya hain.......Abhijeet.....Tarika now

spluttered within the

deep.ocean.....aur...iske..liye.....sirf...main...main....zi mmmedar hu..
now Muskan ran to Tarika & started to blubber helding one arm of

her----Tarika, kuchh to kaho Daya sir se.....
now ACP went nearer Daya & kept his one palm over his forhead,tears were

spilled down his cheeks, probably for the first time his subordinates saw him

to cry in this way---Daya,ACP pradyuman se galati ho gaya tha, utho Daya,
Tarika too kept one plam of Daya within her own &.................Daya opened

his eyes very slowly........but his glance was hazy, feverish & delerious.

[to be continued]