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Oh My God, Daisy u went speechless!! & I have gone speechless to read your comment, there's no need to say that from the bottom of your heart u have written this!!!!!!!, whatever u all gave me , thanks is really a very tiny word for this freind...... rather I would like to 🤗 🤗 🤗 you with my innermost love & affection.......it's all of ur encouragement for which I have written the story...& believe me I'm not trying to be an inch humble here...it's the truth....
yeah freind surely I will try to post another ...& I am even writing a new one......
but as far as this story is concerned, why r u sad??...u all r most welcome to write any scene after their marriage....mean afteeeeer their marriage whatever I havn't written here... 😆
love u tooooooooooooooooooooooo my sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet buddy, aur tumse ek cheeze mangungi......hamesha mere dost banke rehna.thik hain? 😳 write back veeeeeery soon.
looooooooooooots of love
suchi

Okie...u mind if I comment later?? I am honestly just speechless...I cant speak a word and my eyes are really gone wide and tears are flowing outta them...so I will definitely tell u later

Originally posted by: luna_lovegood

Okie...u mind if I comment later?? I am honestly just speechless...I cant speak a word and my eyes are really gone wide and tears are flowing outta them...so I will definitely tell u later

Shruti, Thanks a looooooooooooooooooooooooot yaar, U all my freinds are always allowed to comment any time about the story.It's made just for all of u.

take care

loooooooooooove suchi

Hey freinds ........bohot din se yaha pe koyi bhi scene nehi araha hain.....so I thought to write a scene......one fine evening whatever came in my mind I just wrote.......& now dare to post here................... it's a total fun.....please no one take it seriously.............. thanks all for giving me tremendous courage for which I'm able to think in a more clear & compact way.
Here is the scene

Hey Suchi..u are an amazing writer and whatever u write evn in sleep will be amazing! so rock on

Shanti Nagar, Maharaja Shashadhar Salunkhe ka nagri, aaj khushi me khilkar

utha hain.Hazaro rang se saza huya aasman, sarsarati hawa, hawa me phaili

huyi phoolo ka khushboo..sab kuchh jaise intezaar kar rahe hain shubh ghari

ka.....kyuki aaj Rajkumari Tarika ka swayambar hain...woh bhare swayambar

sabha me safalta prapt veer ki gale me mala dalke use apni bar rup swikar

karegi aur unhi ke sath apne sasural ki taraf ravana ho

jayegi....isliye..khushi ke sath sath kahi pe biday ki ek karun sur bhi baj

rahi hain...

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[Swayambar]
( Pap pay rayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy, pay pay pay pay pay pay pap pay

rayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyyyyyyy)
Maharaj Salunkheeeeeeeeeee....Maharani Tejaswiniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii......Yuvraj

viveeeeeeeeeek.....aur...Rajkumari Tarikaaaaaaaaaa...padhar rahe

haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaain.
Swayambar me aye huye sare ke sare Rajkumaro me Rajkumari ki taraf apna nazar

dala aur man hi man betab hote raha.......kab ayega woh

ghari.....jab...Rajkumari.....gale me barmala...dalegi?.....sabhi Raja,

Yuvraj ya pher Rajkumaro ne yehi sochte raha........
Maharaj Salunkhe ne apni singhasan pe tashrif rakha aur pher binamra hokar

sabko apne apne sthano par tashreef rakhne ke liye kaha....
Maharaj: dur durant se aye huye Maharaja yo, aur rajkumaro,.........main aap

sabhi logo ka bohot abhari hun........aaj aap logo ne mere suputri Rajkumari

Tarika ke swayambar me akar......mujhe dhanya kiya hain.....main puri

Shantinagar ki taraf se aap logo mera hardik pyar aur subechchha dena chahta

hun.
Sabha me upastheet sabhi logo ne apne apne sar jhukakar Maharaj ke

subhechchha ko swikar kiya..
Maharaj: aab main aap logo ko is swayambar ke riti aur niyomo ke bareme

abaheet kar dena chahunga...waha par shiv dhanush rakha huya hain..aap logo

ko woh uthake uska muh bandhna parega....aur pher....upar me....ek ghumta

huya panchhi hain...aur neeche pani me uska pratichhabi hain jinko dekh ke

aap logo ko uske aankh ko teer se biddha karna parega....jo sabse pehle ye

veerta pradarshan karega....woh mere suputri Rajkumari Tarika ko jeet

lega..to der kis baat ki? Shubh kam me der nehi hona chaiye.....chaliye...ek

ek karke...aap log shuruyat kijiye.....
Ek Rajkumar khare ho gaye. aur peechhe se dhwani utha---Rajkumar Veerta

padhar rahe haaaain..... woh aye.......par bohot koshish ke bawajood bhi

dhanoosh ko utha hi nehi paye...Vyarth manorath se woh wapas akar tashreef

rakha.
Is tarike se bohot sare Raja yo, aur Rajkumar o ne ate gaye aur

jategaye....Raja Vashist, Rajkumar Shashank, Rajkumar Dheeraj, Raja Navindra

Kumar, Rajkumar Gaurav,Raja Shashipal, Raja Khemprasad....par koyi bhi

safalta prapt nehi huye.....Maharaj Salunkhe aur Maharani Tejaswini ki akho

ki upar chinta ka rekha ye prakat huya...woh log chintagrast ho gaye ke agar

kisine.....ye dhanush ko uthane me hi....
woh byakul hokar kuchh pal ka birati manga...aur turant aapne kaksh me chale

gaye.....
Rajkumari Tarika ko Maharani Tejaswini apne mahal me leke gaye...Rajkumari ki

sakhiya bhi bohot chinteet the...ek akar use kaha---Priye...tere mann me kya

chal raha hain? bar to tujhe aaj hi chun na hain...magar..
Rajkumari ki andar koyi chanchalta, koyi chhatpatahat, koyi bhi shanka ya

pher dukh ka saya bhi nehi tha...woh bohot dheere se boli---mujhe maloom

tha...ke koyi bhi us dhanush ko utha nehi payega...unke elaba kaun use utha

sakta hain? wohi mera swami hain...kuldevta ki samne maine unhe usi din maang

liya tha ....jisdin...woh.....is Shantinagar me....pehli baar apna kadam

rakha tha..
sakhi Kaveri: magar hey priye, woh to bohot purani baat hain..tab to aap ek

bara sal ka balika the....
Purane us din ko yaad karke Rajkumari ki surat ek ajeeb si roshni me alokeet

ho gayi...woh un dino ke beech me kho gaye.....aur kehne lage---aur

woh......sola saal ka ek kishor......mohit nayan me woh kehne lagi----unke

akho me jhak ke dekhi.....to mujhe ...puri...duniya..dikhai di.....unka akho

me gehraiya tha...aur hotho pe mithi si muskan...jo.....jo....ek bara saal ki

balika ko .....chahat ka ehsaas dilaya.....chanda ki roshni ki tarha madhur

tha unka upastheeti, ........phulo ki khushboo ki tarha pavitra tha unka

saasein, aur.....aur...ugta huya suraj ki tarha....sundar tha....unka

haasi...woh....mere jeevan ka ek anat satya hain.......mujhe pura vishwas

hain....ke ...aaj shringar karke...ye jo mera mann mehek utha

hain...ye...unhi...ki.....mehek hain......Rajkumari Tarika apne aakh band kar

liya....aur us mehek ko paane ke liye....apna saasein...tez kiya....mujhe

vishwas hain......ke unka....ek.....Rajkumari sharmake murjha gayi...aur pher

kaha-----unka ek chhuyon se....mere jeevan ki sare dhul....chandan ban

jayega.......sapno me ...kitni baar...punya jhulan teethi me jhula me jhule

hain hum dono......
sakhi Kaveri Rajkumari ko satane ki koshish ki---aur priye.....aaj woh ek

chhabish saal ka yuvak hain.....
Rajkumari sharma gayi aur kahi---aise maat sata mujhe....main bhi to dekhna

chahti hun......kaisa ...kya..woh waise,,,hi......Rajkumari phir se sharma

gayi.
sakhi Lavanya: magar priyeeee, woh hain kaha? aur....aaj swayambar me woh

aye kyu nehi?
Rajkumari: woh ayega....mere vishwas se ayega woh....aur main agar

kisiko....ye barmala samarpan karungi....to.....sirf unhe........
Teesra Sakhi: magar....agar unki ane se pehle hi....kisine us dhanush se

panchhi ki aankh biddha kare to?
Rajkumari ye sunke byakul ho gayi...woh dheere se khirki ki pass

gayi......aur aasman ki taraf dekh ke prarthana karne lagi---hey

sarbadhipati, hey jagadhipati.....tumhe to sab kuchh abaheet hain.....tum to

jante ho....ke mere...pran nath ke darshan ke liye.....main....kitni byakul

hun.....Tumhe to ye bhi abagat hain sarbadhipati...ke......main aapne tan

mannn sab kuchh unko baar diya...to.kaise...kaise....aur kisike gale me...ye

mala dun?...tumhare pair meapne aapko saup kar main ye vinti karti hu

Bhagwan...ke. ya to tum unhe yaha par le aao....taki woh...yaha bhare

swayambar me...apna veerta pradarshan karke...mujhe.....jeete...ya

pher.....ya pher.....tum mujhe....aapni godh me le lo...Bhagwan...mere

saasein rukva do.....main aur...jeena nehi chahti hun.


Udhar Maharj ke kaksh me Maharaj bohot chinteet the...woh byakul ho kar apne

kaksh me apne mitra Susheelnagar ke Maharaj Raja Dhaneswar Veeradhipati ko

bulaye.....
Raja Dhaneswar: Kya huya mitra? itna ashant kyu ho?
maharaj salunkhe: ha...mitra...mujhe meri putri ke liye bari chinta ho raha

hain....mann me tarha tarha ka ashanka phail raha hain......
[Yuvraj Abhijeet ka Pravesh]
Yuvraj Abhijeet jo ki Maharaj Dhaneswar ke ek matra putra hain...woh bhi apne

peetashree aur nayi naveli dulhan Yuvrani Shruti ke sath yaha Shanti nagar me

aye huye hain.
Yuvraj Abhijeet: Maharaj ka aggya ho...to...main andar ayu....
Maharja salunkhe: arrey, aao, aao, Yuvraj....tum to mere putra saman ho.....
Yuvraj: Pranam ho Maharaj...agar apka aggya ho...to..main...Rajkumari ki

swayambar ke bareme kuchh kahu?
Maharaj Salunkhe: abashya putra, bolo kya kehna chahte ho?
Yuvraj: Maharaj, mera ek mira hain...jo ki bohot veer hain, susheel hain,

sundar hain aur Rajkumari ke upayukt hain.
Maharaj: ye to ati uttam hain..magar woh aye kyu nehi?
Yuvraj: woh apne hi bhai ke hath bandi the, unhi ke chhote bhai Yuvraj banne

ke liye..kuchh senao ko lekar unhe bandi kar liya tha....
maharaj Salunkhe: to pher?
Yuvraj: Maharaj.....unke chhote bhai ko aur un sena yo ko to woh khud hi

khatam kar sakta tha....magar....woh apne chhote bhai ko ....hath nehi

lagaiga.....isliye.......isliye...mujhe hi kuchh karna para....main...unlogo

ka kuchh sena...aur...susheelnagar ka kuchh senayo ko lekar unhe uddhar kiya

hain........
Maharaj Dhaneswar chakeet aur vismieet hogaya...woh rusht ho kar apne putra

ko puchha---itna kuchh ho gaya...aur tumne mujhe abagat nehi karvaya? ye

kaisa vavhyar hain yuvraj?
Yuvraj: Kshama chahta hun Peetashree...magar..mere....mitra ko main us halat

me dekhna.....mere liye asahaniya ho gaya tha...isliye main

thora....jaldbaazi ki thi...
Maharaj: magar yuvraj....
Yuvraj: Maharaj, agar apka aggya ho, to abhi, isi waqt main mere mitra ko

yaha par lane ka ayojan karunga...
Maharaj bara byast ho gaya aur utsuk hokar kaha---ha Yuvraj, mera pura aggya

hain...

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[Swayambar]

Phir se swayambar Shuru huyi......kuchh aur raja yo aur rajkumaro ne apne

apne bhagya pariksha kiya...Samrat sthairya,Rajkumar keshav,Raja

Abantipuram....par koyi bhi safalta prapt nehi huye.Thik isi waqt ek soumya

kanti, susheel, veer swayambar me pravesh kiya.....unka hulchul rajbangshiyo

ki tarha to tha....par unka malin beshbhusha waha par upastheet sabhi ke

dristi akarshan kiya, sabhi ne kehne laga---kya ye Rajkumar hain?beshbhusha

se to koyi brahman putra lag rahe hain...
Kumar dhanush ke pas aye.....aur pher Maharaj ka aggya lene ke liye unhe

pranam kiya. Maharaj ne unko sammati dete huye ashirbaad kiya.
Rajkumari Tarika betaab ho rahi thi...unhe apni premi ko pehchan ne me koyi

ghalti nehi huya tha.....
Kumar ne dhanush ka samne khare ho kar apne guruyo ko pranam kiya

aur...pher...dhanush ho hath lagaya.
Rajkumari Tarika ka dil zor zor se dharak raha tha...woh apne akhe band kar

liya....
Kumar dhanush ko pakra huya tha aur achanak ek hi dum me woh dhanush ko utha

liya....
Susheelnagar ki yuvrani Shruti jo Rajkumari Tarika ke pas baithi huyi thi,

woh Rajkumari ko kaha---Rajkumari, akhe kholo, dekho......woh dhanush ko utha

liya hain......
Maharaj aur Maharani bhi bohot utsuk ho gaya aur prarthana karne lage kumar

ka safalta ke liye....
Kumar apne dhanush ki muh bandhkar usme teer lautkaya....aur....pher....paani

ki taraf dekh kar teer chalaya......aur woh teer sidhe jakar upar ghumta huya

panchhi ki ankh biddha kar diya......
Maharaj aur Maharani anand se kheel utha.....aur Rajkumari .....sharm se apni

sar ko jhuka liya....
Chalro taraf se kumar ke liye jayadhwani dhwanit hone laga.
Rajkumari Tarika uthkar Kumar ke samne ayi aur....unke akho me jhak kar

dekhi......Kumar has raha tha......aur ye haasi ......Rajkumari ko dus saal

pehle ka yaad dilayi.......woh apni barmala Kumar ke gale me dal diya......
Charo taraf se harshdhwani hone laga. sabha me upastheet sabhi Raja yo ne

chillane laga--- ye humara apman hain....Ye Kumar Rajput hain nehi, kaise ye

Rajkumari ko jeet sakte hain? Rajkumari ko hum me se hi kisi ek ko chunna

parega....nehi ..to...unhe agni me jwala diya jayega......
Rajkumari darr gayi.....aur Kumar apne nayi dulhan ki raksha ke liye tyar ho

gaya.
Yuvraj Abhijeet ne sabko shant karne ki koshish kiya aur

kaha----dekhiye....aap log shant ho jaiye......ye koyi brahman kumar hain

nehi.....balki ye Kauvantipur ka honewala Yuvraj Daya hain.
Maharaj Salunkhe chakket ho gaye---kya kaha Yuvraj? Kauvantipur ke honewale

Yuvraj? Kauvantipur ka Raja to Maharaj Pradyumna hain, haina?
Yuvraj Abhijeet: jee ha Maharaj
Maharaj: to main kaise meri putri ko Kauvantipur bhejunga?
Maharaj Dhaneswar: kyu mitra.....isme aapko apatti kyu hain?
Maharaj salunkhe:: pichhle kuchh salo se Kauvantipur hamare sath dushmani

nibha rahe hain.....main hairan hun ye sochke ke waha pe meri putri ke sath

kya vavhyar kiya jayega.....
Rajkumar daya: Maharaj ka aggya ho to main kuchh keh sakta hun?
Maharaj: abashya.....
Rajkumar Daya: Rajkumari aab Kauvantipur ka bahu hain...main aapko bachan

deta hun Maharaj....ke..main Rajkumari Tarika ke sath koyi bhi anyay hone

nehi dunga.
Maharaj: magar tumhare peeta Maharaj Pradyumna? kya woh meri putri ko bahu ka

samman aur maryada pradan karega? aaj se kuchh char paanch saal pehle mere

saath unka kuchh anman huya tha.....aur tab se hi tumhare Kauvantipur mera

Shantinagar ke sath dushmani nibha rahe hain.
Rajkumar Daya: kshama kijiye Maharaj....par aapko shayad Kauvantipur ka

bartaman paristheeti ke bare me ...kuchh jankari nehi hain...... Maharaj

...atyanta dukh ke sath ye keh raha hun ke mere peetashree Maharaj Pradyumna

aur mere matashree Maharani Deepshikha...abhi bhi mere chhote bhai Yuvraj

Uday ke hath bandi hain........Kauvantipur ke raj karma sab Yuvraj Uday hi

chalate hain....aur...mitrata ya pher shatruta ye bhi unhi se hi tyar hote

hain.......
Maharaj salunkhe chinteet ho gaye ...aur pher kaha----ye to bohot ghambhir

baat hain.....to pher tumhe to Kauvantipur ke sath yuddha karke tumhare peeta

aur mata ko uddhar karna chaiye.......chinta maat karo....hey veer

kumar.....ab...ye tumhara sasural hain...aur hum...tumhare mitra hain.....hum

logo ko tum to sath me payogi hi....aur...humare mitra desho ko bhi

payoge....hum sab sath milke.....
Rajkumar Daya: Kshama kijiye Maharaj.....aap bohot dayalu hain.....par

main......main....mere chhote bhai ke khilaf...yuddha nehi karunga.....ha

mere peetashree aur matashree ko main abashay uddhar karunga.....par yuddha

se nehi.....
Sabhi ne vishmeet ho gaye , Maharaj ne puchha --to pher kaise?
Rajkumar Daya: Maharaj....Yuvraj Uday yehi chahte hain ke hum Kauvantipur se

chale jaye.....aur woh Maharaj ban sake.....agar main kahu ke main

Kauvantipur chhorkar hamesha ke liye ja raha hun ....to woh peetashree aur

matashree ko chhor dega.....magar.....magar.....main kauvantipur chhorkar ja

bhi nehi sakta tha....kyuki....mujhe yaha..shantinagar me ana

tha......Rajkumari se milne ke liye......anya tha....Yuvraj uday ne to

Rajkumari Tarika ko haran karne ka yogana bhi kiya tha.....main Tarika ki

sath hote huye itna bara anyay dekh nehi sakta tha......Rajkumari Tarika

Rajkumar Daya ki taraf dekha......aur mann hi mann socha--puja to main karti

hi hun tumhe......,pichhle dus saal ki har pal bas tumhare naam lekar

guzara....tumhare prati mere bhakti ko.....kya aise barate rahoge

Rajkumar?.....kahi main mar na jau.
Rajkumar Daya: aab jo mera lakshya safal ho gaya hain....aab main Kauvantipur

chhorke hamesha ke liye ja sakta hun.
Maharaj: par hey kumar, tum jayoge kaha?
Rajkumar Daya: dakshin ki aur...ek khanda bhumi hain.....waha par...ek chhota

sa prasad bhi hain....jaha par....Kauvantipur ke sena...kabhi pravesh nehi

kar payega.....
Maharaj phir se byast ho gaya aur apne suputra Yuvraj Vivek ko puchha---

Yuvraj Vivek, aap ko ye pata hain ke ye Shantinagar aap hi ka hain.....magar

apne behn ka is durdeen me kya tum....
Yuvraj Vivek: peetashree....mera kuchh bhi nehi hain...sab aap hi ka

hain....main mere behn Rajkumari Tarika aur jeejashree Rajkumar Daya ke liye

adhe Shantinagar chhor sakta hun Maharaj.
Maharj bohot praful ho gaye aur kaha---dekha kumar....aap.yaha pe hi ruk

sakte ho....
Rajkumar Daya: aapka udar mann mujhe mugdha kiya hain Maharaj....magar main

phir se kshama chahta hun, main yaha pe ruk nehi sakta hun Maharaj.....mujhe

dakshin ki prasad me rehna hain...apne peeta maata ke godh me.....hum waha pe

ek chhota sa rajya banane ki koshish karenge...aur waha ka Raja honge maharaj

Pradyumna. aur Rani banenge Maharani Deepshika......aur hum dono unhi logo ke

pyar aur sneh ke barsat me anand se din guzarenge....
Maharaj prafulla ho gaya...magar chandi pal ke andar woh phir se gabhir

chinta me dub gaye----kumar...to abhi tum to Kauvantipur me ja nehi sakte ho,

to pher?
Ek duut dhandora pitate huye ghoshana kiya----kauvantipur ka Maharaj

Pradyumnaaaaaaaa aur Maharani Deepshikaaaaaaaa padhar rahe hain.....
Sabha me upasteet sabhi jan chakeet ho gaya......Rajkumar Daya sabse adhik

vishmeet ho gaya---peetashree....matashree.....magar......
Susheelnagar ke Maharaj Dhneswar aur Yuvraj Abhijeet swayambar me pravesh

kiya....aur Yuvraj Abhijeet Rajkumar Daya ke samne akar use alingan kiya aur

kaha---ha mitra....main tumko mere ye gupt yoyana ke bareme abagat nehi

kiya.....tumhare peeta maata mere bhi peeta maata hain....main unlogo ko

bandi nehi dekh sakta tha mitra......aur ha....main tumhare chhote bhai

yuvraj uday ko bhi bandi kiya hain...
Rajkumar Daya: nehi mitra....nehi.....tum use...mukt kar do.....woh mera anuj

hain.....
Yuvraj Abhijeet: uttam, agar tum yehi chahte to to main abashya use mukt kar

dunga....magar phir se ek baar gale to milo mitra.....tumhare is khushi ki

ghari me ....Rajkumari ko hasil karke mujhe bhul mat jana mitra....
Rajkumar Daya: tum jaise mitra ko kaun bhul sakte hain ? janam janam me hum

aise mitra bankar hi janam lenge....
Maharaj Pradyumna Rajkumar Daya ko apne baho me bhar lekar kaha---kitna

khushi ka din hain aaj......aaj...aaj....main.....tumhe...kya kahu?
Rajkumar Daya ke akho se ansu behne laga.....aur thore der baad woh

kaha---chaliye peetashree, chaliye matashree...hum log dakshin ki prasad me

chale jaye......
Maharani Deepshika apne nayi bahu ko dekh rahi thi.....ab woh kehkar

uthi---abashya putra....magar pehle mere bahu ko to dekho tum........pichhle

dus salo se woh sirf tumhare rah hi dekh rahi thi.......jao putra tum mere

bahu ko lekar amrapallav baag me thora bihar karke aao, kyu sakhi?
Maharani Tejaswini jo ki Maharani Deepshika ke bachpan ka sakhi hain woh bhi

apne sakhi se sahmat huyi aur amra pallav baag me jane ke path prashath kar

diya........

[Amrapallav baag]

Rajkumar Daya aur Rajrani Tarika ek nauka me premajal hrad me bihar kar rahe

the......Rajrani Tarika ki khule huye lauto ko lekar Rajkumar Daya khel raha

tha.....aur Rajrani Tarika apne samagra hriday se unki chhuyon ko mehsus kar

rahe the.......kuchh samay baad woh kehkar uthi---priye.....jab se aye

ho.....mujhse ek bhi baat nehi kiya.....kya mujhse koyi bhul huyi hain

priye.....
Rajkumar Daya bari shararati se has raha tha aur Rajrani ko bechain karne ki

chesta kar raha tha.
Rajrani: wo priye...aise...na hasa karo......mere jaan nikal jati hain....
Rajkumar: kaha? pakar lunga use jab jab woh nikalne ka chesta bhi karega.....
apne baato ko pura karne ki baad phir se kumar hasta hain,
Rajrani apne andar khoyi huyi thi....sab bahar ki bato ko raheet ho kar...aur

rajkumar phir se use satane ki chesta ki
Rajkumar: kaise lag raha hai?
Rajrani ne aab rajkumar ke akho me jhanka aur kaha---achchha lag raha hain.
Rajkumar ke ankh ghane hote raha---kya?
rajrani sharma gayi..aur kahi---tumhe..
Rajkumar: main yaha ka prakritik soundarya ki bareme keh raha tha.....
Rajrani ne apne mugdha nayan se Rajkumar ko dekhte huye uttar diya---sundar

hain..
Rajkumar ne phir se muskuraya aur kaha--kya sundar hain?
Rajrani Rajkumar ke andar khoyi huyi thi.....woh waise hi kahi---tum.
Rajrani Tarika ki beetabi se rajkumar ko bari anand mil raha tha......
Rajrani Tarika nuaka ke andar se lehrata huya hrad ke paani se khel rahi

thi.....aur shararat se Rajkumar ke upar bhi kuchh chhirak rahi

thi...achanak........................................ woh apna santulan kho

baithi.......aur..........paani ki andar geer

gaye.........ahhhhhhhh...Rajkumar....bachaiye.......bachaiii yeeeeeeeeee......
aaaaaaaaaaaa....Tarika waked up with heart rending wail.....& then realised

it was a dream....the book was just beside her pillow & she was reading a

fairy tale last night....--oh God it's eight in the morning, kya ho gaya

mujhe.....itna gehra sapna dekh rahi thi..ke....neend tak nahi tuta....

office jana hain..chal Tarika ...jaldi kar.
She was rushing towards Forensic lab & just outside the door she was

just..... stumbled against........Daya!!!
Daya: Hi, Dr.Tarika, Good morning.
Tarika didn't answer but smiled mysteriously & then let out a belated

greet--- good morning to you too,
Daya was about to go but... he stopped as Tarika was speaking

---aiseeeeeee....jeet yuvraj uday ko nehi.......balki.rajkumar Daya ko hi

huya hain......
Daya was totally stupefied & nonplused & could only let out---jee???
Tarika again smiled mysteriously & turned back to go away..but Daya was

riveted there..as he couldn't understand not a single word of dr.Tarika...he

was thinking if Tarika made a joke in this lovely morning...& suddenly Tarika

came back...& this time just infront of him & again said---Rajkumari ko jo

jeet te hain........jeet usi ki hote hain....she glanced obliquely at him &

then turned back & went on to enter into forensic.
Daya gawped for a while & then shrugged & started to nodd his face to think about Tarika's sly comments to flirt with him......& went towards ACP's cabin with the forensic report

Okie...first of all I must say u have amazin hindi... 👏 I knw all these words bt yea ofcourse using them and actually in a story like this...is marvellous! 👏



Secondly...Daya in the pic (and also in reality) does luk alot like a character from the epics 😆


THirding...u are amazing...no word the I knw can actually do justice with the level of appreciation to your work!! Its simply out of imagination and thnks to u for sharing it with us 😊

😭 😭 😭 i cant understand hindi 😭 😭 😭

I dnt believe that Daisy...u cant understand Hindi or u cant understand this hindi??

oh i can understand the modern hindi alrite...but nah the traditional one...
i wish i cudddddd so i cud read ur story suchi as shruti mentioned..that it is totally mindblowing.... 😭 😭