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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Daisy!!

OMGGGGGGGGGGGG i luvvvedddd it!!!!!!!!!!11
Daya is such a swwetheart...luved the part when he met ACP..hes soooo cooolll
cant wait to read the next part!!!!
i m luving ur story from the bottom of mi heart...seriously, i mean it
i wish this story to neverrr end
Finally tarika's here yayyyyy

One again a Biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiig🤗to u friend, & this time honestly I wouldn't be late to post the next.............

with Loooooooooooooooooooooots of hug

suchi

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Daisy!!

OMGGGGGGGGGGGG i luvvvedddd it!!!!!!!!!!11
Daya is such a swwetheart...luved the part when he met ACP..hes soooo cooolll
cant wait to read the next part!!!!
i m luving ur story from the bottom of mi heart...seriously, i mean it
i wish this story to neverrr end
Finally tarika's here yayyyyy



I would say same thing Suchi😃 daisy ne mere mouh ki baat cheen li😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

PART XIII

Tarika was deeply gazing at Daya with unwinking eyes....with the eyes full of thirst,fervour, craving & yearnings,her mournful face was a tacit expression how she was spending her days...Daya......kitne ....dubla ho gaye ho tum.....kitna udasi hain tumhare akho me aaj,dhulna chahti thi tumhara zindegi ka sab dukh dard ko,magar.......ek pal ki khushi diya ke nehi.....lakho pal ka gham de diya tumhe.....aaj mere diya huya wohi dard ka saaya dekh rahi hu.... tumhare akho me......she muttered within herself.
Daya was totally bamboozled,his eyes were perturbed to see the woman who once came as a gusty zephyre in his reclused life,kindled a flame within him.....embraced his every sorrow & pain....and drenched him with the splattering love & care......Tarika........kitna thak gayi ho tum,itna bara tufan ko......tumhe.akele.....hotho me woh muskan na raha, akho me woh bijli..... sab ..chhin gaya...kaunsi zahar piya....woh....Daya naam ka zahar......kash mera zindegi tumse....aise.....jura...na...hota.......He eventually turned the face opposite her as got back in reality.Both were silent & though the situation needed an intense conversation between the two and even Tarika came to do that....but not a single word.....she could deliver.........but.....the nature......surely wouldn't bear the estarngement ...anymore.....
Daya traipsed towards the window.....the breeze was toting away very feeble tune of a corny song.......

Suna suna, lamha lamha,meri rahein tanha tanha
akar mujhe tum tham lo, manjil teri dekhe rasta
murke zara aab dekhlo, aisa milan phir ho na ho
sab kuchh mera tum hi to ho
bepanha pyar hain aaja, tera intezaar hain aaja
ooooooo bepanha pyar hain aaja.........
Tera intezaar hain Aaja.....


Tarika trudged towards Daya & very slowly kept her eyes on him, but Daya was looking at the sublime beauty of the nature,as he twigged Tarika's presence he was about to go....but.....Tarika clenched his hand unexpectedly and now both were standing face to face.....again there was no words which she could tell him......her lips were shuddering slightly..........no need to...speak out... when....
aaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaa, aaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaa
Bichhde bhi hum jo kabhi rasto me to sang sang rahungi sada
kadmo ki awaz sunke chalungi tumhe dhund lungi sada
Daya was about to go....but ....Tarika again snatched him by grasping his hand.....her eyes were still & deep....
Bhuli mohabbat ki ye khushbooye hain hawayo me phaili huyi
Chhukar mujhe aaj mehsus karlo, woh yaadein meri unchhuyi

Daya was watching Tarika with rapt attention, her strayed hairs,secluded & gloomy eyes and the the deep dark black streak under her eyes---kya yehi tanhai hai?....ya pher birha.......
aisa milan phir ho na ho, sab kuchh mera tum hi to ho
bepanha pyar hain aaja,tera intezar hain aaja.

Daya subdued his excitement & flinched away from Tarika towards the door to go away.....but....Tarika ran into the door and came again infront of Daya......to....lock the door shut. Daya was confounded totally & Tarika .....took again Daya's hand within her own and started to play with his fingers........
yaado ke dhago me hum tum bandhe hain,zara dor tum thamlo
Baho me phir se pighal jane do mujhko, phir se mera naam lo

Daya recoiled from her torrid emotion and again came beside the window pane....Tarika followed him & very slowly reposed herself on Daya.
Main woh shama hun jo roshan tumhe karke khud to pighal jaungi
subha ka suraj tumhare liye, main hu raat dhal jaungi
Daya closed his eyes,it seemed to him that his tranquil heart was rippling in Tarika's vehement, turbulent love.
aisa milan phir ho na ho, sab kuchh mera tumhi to ho
Bepanha pyar hain Aaja, tera intezaar hain aaja.
Tarika now came again infront of Daya & clung to him with her profound affliction & yearning, unconsiously her face swum with tears....Daya was about to keep his palm over her dishevelled,tangled hair...but..... he fended her off again....now Tarika couldn't remain silent anymore----itna....abhimaan huya hai tumhe........ke.....baat..tak....nehi......Daya now spunned to face Tarika & said very gently---ye mera abhimaan nehi hain Tarika.
---to pher kyu itni sata rahe ho mujhe? Tarika asked with a tremulous voice
Daya smiled dolorously & then he drifted into a deep reverie and mumbled-----bachpan...se...mujhe...Father...ke elaba....kisine bhi.....itna...pyar nehi ...diya...jitna tumne mujhe.....his voice was choking occassionally....main..bhi.....pyar....ka...bhukha.....ho... .gaya
...tha....lalaj.....agaya...tha.....mujhme..........sochke ..nehi..dekha..ke....mere....wajase....aur...koyi...dukhi..t o...nehi..ho...
jayega?....bacha liya ....tumne...mujhe...Tarika...barna....
---Kaunsi dukh ki baat kar rahe ho tum? Tarika was desperate
Daya was silent...he was cogitating something deeply.
Tarika came very closer to daya now and again snuggled up against him with every drop of affection within her.... her face twitched with pain....now Daya took her face within his palm & continued with a very rueful voice--Tarika....parents kya hain....ye samajhne..se.pehle hi...woh..log..chale..gaye....mujhe...khud to...unlogo ka....pyar....nehi..mila...kaise...chhinunga...main..tumko.. .tumhare...
parents....se....kaise...chinunga.....ek...ma...se....ek...b eti..ko?
Tears were spilt down over his cheeks..but..he was unware & continued---main...aisa..nehi...kar..sakta hu..Tarika.....mujhe maaf...
karo......
Tarika was crying profusely & saying---ye jhuth hai....Daya...kaise...batau...
Daya kept his one palm upon tarika's head & said---mujhse duriya...bardasht nehi hote hain....isliye...ab....tum...isko...jhut
--ha, nehi hota hain bardasht.Tarika shrieked out with unbearable pain---tumse duriya..bardasht nehi hota hain....her tears were glittering in excitement within her eyes----aur Daya, ye sirf tumhara nehi......balki....
hum dono ka....zindegi ka sawal hain.....koyi bhi faisla karne se pehle...
tumhe meri bato ko sun na parega...Daya was surprised & stared at Tarika with
mute astonishment. Tarika wiped her eyes out & restrained her emotions which took five to ten minutes.Then she once again clenched Daya's palm within her own & said-- mere sath chalo,.....aur sab kuchh sun ne baad tum jo bhi kahoge ......main man lungi.
---lekin kaha? Daya was astounded
Tarika was silent, she didn't answer Daya but was dragging him towards the office room. Daya was trying to disengage himself from Tarika but Tarika was .....obstinate, she took him infront of Father who was sitting there in the office with some files. Daya was embarrassed , but Tarika wasn't.....she was desperate---father, main Daya ko leke thora bahar jana chahti hun....please father , aap permission dijiye. she was pleading intensely
Father was smiling lightly & said-- yes, of course, why not?
--lekin father..Daya was very much abashed by the behaviour of Tarika at that moment.
Father nodded his head positively at Daya to make him understand that he should go with Tarika.
Tarika clenched his palm tightly and was dragging him out of the Mamta Foundation....she took an auto and then instructed---23, Malhar Rao Road.
Daya was really very much astonished & watching Tarika very minutely---kaha le ja rahe ho tum? he asked twice...but Tarika didn't answer. After nearly twenty minutes Tarika made the auto stopped & left the auto.Both got off the auto ..there was a bunglow just the opposite side of the road....Daya was watching everything with profound stupefaction in his eyes---kaha..le...ja..rahe..ho...Tarika opened the very tiny gate and then dragged him inside...they were nearly trippling along the long garden path...but ..suddenly....their faces were spalshed by water......Daya was embarrassed....& as he looked around he listened to a giggle of a child----hahahahhahahahaha..a nearly six years old girl was smiling her heart out & squirted them with water from her water-pistol.Tarika didn't say anything but emitted just a ray of reprimand through her eyes.
Daya went to the child & stooped down to ask something..but the child was smart enough--- tum rajkumar ho?
Daya frowned but couldn't answer her
---tumhare pas safed ghore hai? the baby was very much curious.
now Daya smiled and said---ha hain,
---us ghora ur sakta hain?pankha hain uska?
Daya: pankhe????
Baby: ha...buya jo kehti hain...ke tum use....pankhiraj ghore me urake...le jaoge???
Daya was surprised --buya????...he very slowly tossed his head towards Tarika & noticed that a flicker of smile within her face,Daya was totally flbbergasted---ye tumhara ghar hain?
Tarika again held the hand of Daya & dragged him towards the main door of the house
Daya was very much abashed & tried to spultter---suno,,tarika....main......but by then Tarika reached at the door with him and suddenly she squeaked with excitement---pa pa..she just ran inside the room & hugged her father.
Tarika's father was overwhelmed & said---arrey, tu??? aise achanak agayi?
Tarika was smiling like a child and to see her Daya was thinking that how the shades, the emotions,attitudes changed with different atmosphere, he couldn't compare this girl with that who worked in forensic.
Tarika: kyu main nehi asakti hu??there was a little huff in her voice.
Tarika's father: arrey nehi meri guriya...maine ye to nehi kaha?
Tarika now told her father to be a little shy--papa,Daya aya hain.
Papa: aur tu mujhe ab tak batayi nehi....arrey beta andar aao.
Daya came to Ex-Major C.R.Bhargava & tripped down to touch his feets
Bhargava: arrey nehi beta....baitho yaha pe.
Daya sat..but he was feeling very embarrassed & shy...he had no mindset actually to come to Tarika's home...and she....
--tiku..aapne ma ko bula kar la.
-ha papa.Tarika smiled & went inside.
Mr.Bhargava was smiling & said--pura do mahine baad ayi tiku...aur achchha huya isbaar tumhe lekar ayi hain.
Daya also smiled bashfully at Mr.Bhargava ....but million of questions were ambling along his mind---kya Tarika humare bareme sab kuchh bata diya aapne ghar me? kis hadh tak kaha...aur kya nehi batayi? kya unlogo ko ye maloom...
menawhile Mrs.Bhargava came with Tarika and smiled to see Daya.Daya got up and again tripped down to touch her feets.but she ---nehi beta, baitho.She was minutely watching him and Daya was feeling very squirm, after a few minutes Mr.Bhargava stated-- beta....Tiku se sab pata chala.....hume....as Daya looked at Tarika she turned her face away.
Mr.Bhargava continued---dekho beta....tum log...bare go gaye ho.....quite adult ho.......zindegi ki bareme jo bhi....faisla kiya.....zarur woh ...sahi hai.......
Tarika: papa tum log baat karo, main bhabi se milke ati hun. she flinched away from there.
now again Mr.Bhargava started--- beta...jab.....tum dono ne ek dusre ko..chun hi liya hain......to pher.....hum yehi chahte hain....ke tum dono jaldi settled ho jaao.
Daya was startled..he didn't expect it so early & with so much ease.
Mr.& Mrs.Bhargava frowned at each other and then Mrs.Bhargava asked--kya baat hain beta.....kya..tum..abhi...koyi problem hain..
Daya now came to the reality and answered with a bashful smile---nehi aunty, actually.....main..aap logo ko...mere.....bareme....kuchh kehna chahta hun.
Mrs.Bhagava was tensed & anxiety reflected through her face..but Mr.Bhargava asked---kya...bolona.....
Daya was silent for a few seconds & then told--- uncle.....actually....main ek .....anath hu.bachpan se ek anath ashram me hi pale bare......Daya cringed at the floor, he was a little anxious to see the expression on their faces......
--mamta foundation???? he just jolted to hear the name from Mr.bhargava & looked at him.
Mr.Bhargava continued--- tiku ne batayi thi....
The room was silent...because Daya was totally floundered to find out that they knew everything about him.... & they were silent because there was no words to console him....after a few minutes Mr.Bhargava said--- dekho beta....agar kahe to hum sab hi anath hain, akele ate hain, akele jate hain......he became a little ruminative & philosophic....aur agar kahe ....to hum....koyi bhi ...anath nehi....hain...kyuki ...hum....sab..uparwalo ka aulad hain...
--Jhut!!!!! all were startled by sudden inteference
---Daya ne jhut bola...main aur ACP saab rehte huye woh kaise anath ho sakte hain? Dr.salunkhe entered into the room with his famous smile.
--sorry to interfere with your converstaion....main Dr.Salunkhe aur ye ACP pradyuman.
Bhargava couple was overwhelmed---arrey....aap...log.... Tiku ne to kuchh nehi......kaha....
Salunkhe: arrey aap log itna byast kyu ho rahe hain....aise...hum..logo ko bhi kuchh baat karna tha aap logo se.
Mr.bhargava said with much curiosity & modesty---ha boliye na...
Now ACP spoke out---Bhargav saab, mere khayal se jaldi in bachcho ka haath pila kar dena chaiye...barna....aap to samajhte hain....ke....kab kaise...man..badal...jaye....
Mr.Bhargava: ha ACP saab, main to abhi abhi yehi baat keh raha tha Daya ko.
Daya cowered at the floor with embarrassment & bashfulness.He couldn't understand how he could cope with the atmosphere.......suddenly Tarika came with her sister-in-law Tiya & before anyone could react Tiya told--- ma, main Daya ko andar le jana chahungi
Salunkhe: zarur le jayenge, barna bachche bore ho jayega...hum sab buddhe ki baat sunne me kaise achchha...he was speaking with force untill got a reprimand from ACP---salunkhe!!!
Tiya winked at Daya and took him in the garden & told him with a bantering voice----hmmm, aapko dekhne ka bohot shuak tha...bohot dino se.....wake hi...hamari Tiku ki pasand bariya hain...
Daya was embarrassed again.
Tiya: maloom hain aapko aapne kya kiya hain?
Daya was surprised and asked--kya kiya?
Tiya:kaaaaaab se hum log try kar rahe hain Tiku ko patane ke liye....lekin...woh...... haske ura deti thi.
Daya was silent
Tiya: tab to woh college me parti thi.....kitna koshish kiya ...kisiko pasand nehi aya...aur jisdin aap ko dekhi....hmmm....usidin hi....main to samajh gayi thi....ke.....woh
now Tarika came with a smiling face and told tiya---chalo bhabi, bohot ho gaya.
Tiya goggled at Tarika ---haaaaa,to nikalna chahti hain tu mujhe yaha se?
Tarika was a bit shy & then again with a smile she told---ha wohi.
Daya turned opposite to hide his flush..
---hmmm, kyu Daya saab dekha?? kaise hume bhul gayi hain woh...aapko pakar???
Daya was smiling very lightly with a tint of shyness within his face.
--thik hain, chali jati hun...lekin dus minute baad phirse wapas ayungi...samjhi? she was chaffing with Tarika.
---achchha thik hain, aab to jao.
Tiya went on her way.........now Tarika came infront of Daya.Daya stared at her for a few moments...but then he twirled himself away......
Tarika now spunned again to face Daya and breathe out---itna abhimaan hain tumhe..... abhi bhi baat nehi karoge?
Daya was cowering,he flushed in crimson...& with a huffy tone he said--kyu jhuth kaha tha? now Tarika clenched one palm of Daya & came closer---maan jaona....mujhe manana nehi ata......
Daya was silent....now Tarika said being a little thoughtful---us waqt tumse dur rehna ......bohot....zaruri....tha Daya.
Now it was Daya's turn to twit with her---to thik hain,is waqt bhi dur raho, he was about to go ..but tarika tugged him at her...& he almost tumbled against Tarika.....the two again came closer & kept eyes upon each other & clung to each other....by intense, profound,exquisite love.....both lost into the reverie of each other for some moments....& finally Tarika crooned listening to the beats of Daya's heart---aur kabhi duriya ka baat bhi nehi karna...... samjhe? Daya couldn't answer but his eyes were wandering through Tarika's deep eyes,Tarika again cooed---bolona, kabhi dur nehi jaoge...
Daya took her face within his palm & answered with a sonorous voice---nehi jaunga....tiku.
Tarika was embarrassed to hear her pet name from Daya....and now she drizzling like a spilled cascade---badmash....I will kill you, she was pummelling his chest with her fist again & again &....... Daya burst into spattering smile......& crooned within himself
Tham ja zindegi,tham ja
yehi lamha hain..manzil meri
Tham ja...zindegi...tham ja

Now Tarika came closer.......very gently caressed on his lips......& whispered--janam janam se mere sath......hi....phera .....loge...bolona....Daya..
sanson ki garmi mein, hoton ki narmi mein
milne ki aas mein, chahat ki pyaas mein
aarjoo se ek machli hai
machli hui ik arjoo, arjoo mein tehra ek lamha
yahi lamha hai manzil meri &a mp;a mp;a mp;n bsp;
Tham Ja...zindegi...Tham ja

[To be continued]


Edited by suchi_dev2006 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
😆 well I neva imagine CID officers in love...specially with one another...so digesting this is really difficult...bt hey its awesome 😉 😉

u should write love novels 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: luna_lovegood

😆 well I neva imagine CID officers in love...specially with one another...so digesting this is really difficult...bt hey its awesome 😉 😉

u should write love novels 😆 😆

my dear friend shruti, firstly tooooons of thanks to u for commenting abt. the story, ........why couldn't u imagine CID officers in love??? specially when they have become sooooo much lovelorn😉😉.......they have few options🤢 ..🤢.& 24*7 they have to see their colleague's faces😆, & thus.......they might😊😊....once again I'm saying might fall for co😳lleagues...... that's fully my imagination yaar................ nothing serious......................as far as I could remember , Abhijeet's first crush was Asha, he used to raise his hands😛 😉whenever she climbed down....she used to shout loud whenever asha was in danger & the most suspicious & funny scene I could remember --- when Abhijeet ,Daya & asha were waiting for a gang to come out.... & suddenly Abhijeet told Daya to go out & see what they(the gang) were doing & he himself fetch food for Asha & told in an overwhelming voice---asha, kuchh khalo.❤️......zarur bhukh laga hai tumhe? asha , who was very rough & tough but she smiled shyly to get Abhijeet's attention.😳 😳couldn't u recall that?

pyar......kahi bhi kabhi bhi ho sakte hain mere dost.😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
Mar dala Suchi tune toh sach mein 😳 itna romantic and emotinoal part 😳 😳 😳 I simply loved it, totally..very beautiful 👏 👏 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey I admit pyaar kahin bhi kabhi bhi ho sakta hai...bt u see I seriously cant imagine all of it and I dnt recall the scene u told...bt now m really dying to see it 😛 😛 😛

Well all I got to say...if they get a love life..I will be really over whelmed...bas I dnt want CID to turn to a total love story..kinda like now where they had Shruti plot bt it was aside frm main story is done

bt yes your fanfic was gr8...atleast I thought abt them differently for a secong 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
To my all freinds here who go through the story, who have liked it, who hav'nt liked, whoever encouraged me whether silently or by commenting here,......I am grateful to all of you, cause..it's because all of you, I could complete the story......this is the concluding part I'm going to post here,,,, a little happy & a little sad for it,,, happy because of happy ending , & sad, cause in the past two months I was so much absorbed with the story......anyway...one must have an end.....once again freinds........it's because all of you I could even write & complete the story..
Take care buddies..... 😃
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Yadi dang hridayang taba
Tadi dang Hridayang mama

Today is the grand wedding of Tarika & Daya.The whole atmosphere exuded the fragrance of delight & affection.Rejoicing tune of the sacredness of marriage gladdened the whole atmosphere.Each & everyone's face suffused with pure bliss & glee, and the whole CID team was very busy as the mauharat was passing by.
Tarika draped herself with a fine embroidered black grey lehenga & choli.enfolded with sparkling gold jewelleries she was twinkling with delight & shyness.Daya dressed up with off white sherwani & a red turban on his head.
In the first hall bhangra was being played by Dr.Salunkhe who was nicely supported by Fredrick,Vivek,Muskan & innumerable kids of Mamta Foundation. They were all dancing like chirpy birds.
Devyana dressed up with indigo-sky sari & pearl jewellery set, she was with Tarika throughout the day & there Abhijeet was giving the finishing touch in Daya's turban. He himself was dressed with a chocolate coloured sherwani & indeed was looking like the best friend of the groom.
---Chalo Daya, aab to ghari aa hi gaya. Abhijeet said with a flicker of smile in his face.
--ha.Daya smiled bashfully & got up & suddenly he asked Abhijeet---Abhijeet, Muskan ayi haina?
Abhijeet's face became stern, he answered with sombre voice--ha ayi hain.
Daya was about to go...but Abhijeet snatched his hand---aaj ki din me uski baat kehke...ya sochke bhi..... waqt barbaad mat karo.
Daya turned towards Abhijeet with an appalled face & said--- ye kya keh rahe ho Abhijeet? Abhijeet was looking aggrieved..he told again with a bit excitement---bhala hi tumne use maaf kar diya...lekin..main.......
Daya sighed & slowly kept his two hands upon Abhijeet's shoulders & said---aaj mera shadi hain......ek naye zindegi ka shuruyat hain......kya...aaj..ki...din me kisike liye.....ranjish rakhna chaiye?...tum hi bolo...
Abhijeet was kindling inside & muttered within himself---Daya, usiki waja se hum tumhe khone wale the....but to see Daya's bounteous & magnanimous face his anger was appeased a bit & he told---ha daya, tum shayad thik keh rahe ho...tumhara man jo chahe, jaisa chahe..tum wohi karo. Daya was happy & suddenly ACP entered into the room--arrey, abhi tak yaha pe ho?...chalo chalo, Abhijeet maine socha ke...... udhar bhi kitna kaam baki hain..Bhargava saab bula rahe the.... Daya was awestrucked to see his respected sir....he was tensed like a father of groom.... he came infront of ACP pradyuman & said--- sir.... aap ko....aap...ko....main....kya bolu....he cowered at the floor.
ACP gave a mild reproof to Daya---hey Daya, main kya tumhara paraya hun?..he became a little thoughtful & said---kaun kehte hain ke.....main...mera beta nehi hain....woh..to..tumlogo me .....sama...huya..hain. His voice choked.
Daya was ashamed & mumbled--sir.... main aapko..dukh pauchana...nehi..
now ACP smiled & opened his chest to hug both Daya & Abhijeet.He embraced both of them & everyone got very much emotional...but awakened within a moment to hear the voice of Dr.Salunkhe----ACP saab, gale to baad me bhi laga sakte hain...lekin shadi ka mauharat nikal raha hai, chaliye.
They came to downstairs ....where the wedding ceremony would take place...but before going there...Daya asked---Muskan kaha hain? ACP was surprised but Abhijeet nodded his head at ACP & said--- woh shayad first hall me hain..chalo.
Meanwhile in the first hall everyone was dancing with utmost enthusiasm & energy...& Muskan? She was dancing her heart out there....
To see the groom, the kids went boisterous...vivek noticed Daya...& tapped Muskan.....& Muskan was just dumbfounded to find Daya infront of her.Daya went to a corner of the hall, Muskan followed him & came beside Daya. Daya was silent for some moment. With much hesitation & difficulty he sputtered--- Muskan...agar mere waja se tumhe koyi..... taqleef..
Muskan spoke out with tremulous voice--sir please, aap aise....baat karenge...... to main...ro parungi..aise...mat...kahiye sir.
Daya was disconcerted, confused & silent,now Muskan again muttered--sir,aapko yaad hain? Jisdin main CID me ayi...usidin hi mujhe ACP sir ka daat para tha..... main chup chap ek kone me baithi huyi thi...to aap akar mujhe kaha ke---ye daat khane ka taqleef nehi hoga to hum kaise kuchh sikh payenge Muskan?.....yaad hain aapko?
Daya smiled very lightly...Muskan continued--- sir, taqleef hume bohot kuchh sikhate hain..
---D a y a . Abhijeet yelled.
Muskan: jaiye sir,subh ghari nikal raha hain...aur pher hume bhi to nachne gane ka mauka dijiye....please sir.... jaiye.
Daya kept his hand upon Muskan's head & then headed towards the decorated mandap. Muskan felt tears were trying to squirt from her eyes...she stared on the way Daya was going towards the mandap....vivek came to her....& tried to console by helding her one hand...but she..didn't want to be consoled----arrey vivek....ye to mera ....khushi ka asoo hain.....she went ahead & lost within the dancing kids.
Here in mandap..Tarika reached with Devyana & Tiya...Daya accompanied by Abhijeet entered into the mandap & sat.....beside Tarika....both of their faces were gleaming in the holy fire ..Daya closed his eyes...& said within himself---hey agnidevta...aaj....is..subh ghari me man ki har andhera ko jalake.....tumhari roshni se hume pavitra kar do..........Punditji started the ceremony by evoking the presence of lord Ganesha...the lord who is the remover of all obstacles.........after that Daya & Tarika got up & stood face to face to exchange the garlands.....for the first time in the day they kept their eyes on each other.......both of their eyes were calm & tranquil......Daya put his garland into the neck of Tarika....Fredrick was screaming---Daya sir, aapne pair ko ucha kijiye....barna Tarika asani se.....gale me mala dal degi.....Daya smiled & stooped slightly...& Tarika put her garland into his neck.In this way , both accepted each other as life-long partners silently. Now Punditji asked Mr.Bhargava to come for Kanyadan.Mr.Bhargava came.. & by the holy hymns...he requested Daya to assist Tarika in the major aspects of life...& Daya pledged to do so.after completion of Kanyadaan...Tiya knotted Tarika's chunri with Daya's uttariya & both grasped their hands together....to recite the vedic hymns for happiness, long-life & a life long relationship.After that Tarika offered food to the nupital fire & pledged to act like that way which would give propsperity to husband & every near & dear ones of him.
Abhijeet brought the ring for Daya & Devyana for Tarika,both glanced at each other for a little while & then gave the respective rings to them.Tarika took Daya's ring-finger & as she was going to put it..Daya recoiled his hand off & smiled puckishly......everyone sighed....to see the slight banter between bride & groom...but Tinku screamed loudly-----buya..aaaaa..jaldi rajkumar ke hath me anguti pehna do. Tarika now clenched Daya's plam & put the ring into the finger with haste...now Daya took Tarika's ring-finger..but he was jolted to see it...her ring finger was strangulated by a thread tightly, probably she had given punishment to it.....Daya looked at Tarika ..& she averted her glance quickly...Daya undid the thread gently & then put the ring into her finger.
Meanwhile stentorium roars of the kids was wafted along from the first hall. The total atmosphere was pervaded with warmth & geniality.
Now Daya put sindoor in the parting of Tarika's hair & very next..he put the mangalsutra into her neck which indicates the union of blood...Tarika was feeling an abyss of bliss, she was totally beguiled by the incidents that were happening around her...invariablly her heart was crooning
Kitna janmo ka ye mel hain
Shaadi kismat ka ek khel hain
Aisi kismat na phoote
Na roothe mera raanjhna......
Chori chori chupke se.........
She awakened by the voice of Devyana...Tarika utho...sat phere jo lena hain.......She got up along with Daya...and now they started to take the pheras around the holy-fire which is the eternal witness of marriage and a protector against evil,punditji was reciting vedic chants & they were taking pheras very slowly and muttered within themselves the seven steps of life----aaj se humara hriday,humara bhavna, aur humara aatma ek ho jayega....aaj se hum ek dusre ka shakti honge, aur humara khushi aur gham ek hi sur me bajega.....hum har waqt anand se jiyenge aur humarai shadi ka raksha karenge.....hamara sapney ab hum ek sath pura karenge aur zindegi ki rah me anewale sare badhao ko hum ek sath par karenge.....hamari kartavya ab se ek hi hain, hum ek dusre se mann ka sari batein kahenge aur ek dusre ka sare batein sunenge aur hum ek dusro ko dil ki gehrai se shraddha karenge.....hum ek sath sare samajik daye aur kartavya ko pura karenge aur ek behter bhavishya ki taraf age barenge.....hum ek dusre ka adhyatik soch aur samajh ko dil ki gehrai se shraddha karenge.....during their pheras..everyone was strewing flowers at them to greet as a new couple.......Devyana..was strewing flowers at the new couple...& suddenly as she averted her face beside....she confounded to find Abhijeet there..he too was strewing flowers at the couple ..but was staring at Devyana......she was shy & about to go.....but her aanchal stucked with Abhi's uttariya...she slackened the tangle..but again.....her bracelet stucked with Abhijeet's uttariya.....Abhijeet was chuckling....& there was a glint of mischief in his eyes....and Devyana was being embarrassed, she blushed in crimson....& with haste she slackened the tangle and ran away from there.
After taking saat pheras...punditji blessed them on behalf of Gods & Goddesses & brought the ceremony to a close......Daya & Tarika took blessings from every elder who was present there......and then sat together....now Daya kept his eyes on Tarika's beaming & smiling face.......he was yet to realise that....Tarika was his ....wife....everything was being felt as dream...feverish.....hazy......the redolence....the holy hymns he recited.....sindoor....mangalsutra.....pheras.....Tarika's abashed..& gleeful smile.....a very soft.....tune...was...being tolled within his heart...
Thandi Hawaen, Sama Hai Suhana ,
Gazab Hai Ye Tera Nigahen Milana .
Tarika now looked at Daya.....& indeed kept her eyes on his...
Behki Fizaen, Hua Dil Deewana,
Mera Khud Ba Khud Ho Tere Paas Aana.
Jaadu Kaisa Dheere Dheere Dheere Chha Raha Naya Naya,
Priyeeee Bata Zara, Lage Kyun Sab Naya Naya. O Priya.


--Daya,dekho kaun aye hain. both startled to hear the voice of ACP sir & noticed that Father came with a nice smile. They tripped down to touch his feets and he blessed the new couple with his pure love & affection...now Tarika said--Father....hume aap se ek baat karna tha...
Father again smiled very nicely and told--yes my child, hum sare batein sunenge...jab man kare..tab Mamta Foundation me aajana..aur
Tarika interrupted him and told---sir,...woh to hum ayenge hi.....lekin sir.....main ye...kehna chahti..hu..ki....
ACP & Salunkhe frowned at each other & then Salunkhe asked---kya bolna chahti ho Tarika?
Tarika lowered her eyes and said---Father....hum ye faisla...kiya...hain....ke....hum...Jhumu ko godh lenge.
Father was very surprised initially but within a moment his face started to gleam with pure delight & peace.He couldn't understand what to tell...& a few moments later he sputtered--thik hain....jaise...tumlogo..ka ichchha hain...
Tarika again said with much cravings---Father....aap use..hamare liye rakh denge.....woh hamara beti hain......jald se jald hum use aapne pas le ayenge.....
Father again smiled and assured them---achchha thik hain...tumlogo ki beti bilkul sahi salamat rahegi....thik hain?
Meanwhile Bhargava couple came with much haste and asked--father aap abhi jayenge nehi....chaliye...bachche aapko bula rahe hain......
father went along with Bhargava couple & Dr.Salunkhe......ACP Pradyuman now came closer to the newly married couple..Daya lowered his eyes.....happiness & delight was gleaming on his face..but he slowly restrained it... and said--yehi ashirbaad karta hun...ke ..zindegi bhar ...aise khush aur salamat raho.They again trooped down to take his blessings...and ...now Devyana & Muskan came with roistering voice----sir....ab aap Tarika ko hamare pas chhor dijiye....please sir....
Daya shrugged to indicate that he was ready to leave Tarika....Tarika squinted once at Daya and then was about to go... but.......the knot of her chunri & Daya's Uttariya made her stopped....
Vivek & Fredricks came with smiling face and vivek said----sir,...soch lijiye..aap tarika ka chunri rakh denge ya pher...apna uttariya de denge..
Daya smiled and left his uttariya to let Tarika go.
Devyana tried to chaff with Daya--sir....ab...lambe intezaar kijiye.....boooooooohooooooooooot lamba intezaar.They went towards the first hall where all were celebrating the night .....& before they interact ..a child came to them & said to Muskan--Devyana aunty, ye tumhe Abhijeet uncle diya hain, he gave a small note to Muskan and ran away...Muskan was stunned and glanced at Devyana, Devyana was flushing in pink and Muskan gave it to her....Devyana flinched away from there....
Tarika smiled to smell the redolence of another romantic affair....& now she slowly held one hand of Muskan & said---Muskan...maine suna....ke..tum...yaha se....chali..ja rahi....ho? kyu?
Muskan smiled & said--mujhe yaha se jana hi hoga...Tarika.....
Tarika again asked after sometimes---humare waja se ja rahe ho?
Muskan: nehi Tarika.....apne waja se.....tum nehi jante ho...ke...pichhle kuchh dino me.............jo kuchh bhi....huya.....woh...mujhe...kitna kuchh sikhaye hain......kitna kuchh.....mehsus kiya maine.....aur......aur...kaise..batau main...tumhe...Tarika.....
Tarika was watching her minutely and then very slowly sputtered--Muskan...kya hum dost nehi ban sakte hain?
Muskan smiled lugubriously and answered--ha Tarika...hum dost hain...and suddenly she drifted into a chirpy mood and said-- aur agar tum mere ek sachche dost ho... to chalo...bachcho ke sath dance karte hain... meanwhile the kids were very happy to see the bride aunty...and engulfed Tarika by every side...Tarika was embarrassed...but .....she couldn't help it..........&.......


Mid-night came very quickly........the intensity of the energy & enthusiasm of the celebration was trailing away gradually......Father already had returned to Mamta Foundation with the kids...Bhargava couple,ACP Pradyuman,Dr.Salunkhe & other elders were busy to treat the other guests.
Tiya came to Tarika & said---Muskan, ab tum log ise chhordo...bechari...kabse....betaab..ho rahi hain...haina Tiku? Tarika was abashed but didn't sai anything.
Muskan was excited--haa Tarika...ab tum jao...chalo..chhor diya tumhe..
Tarika clenched Muskan's hand once again & asked---jane se pehle ....ekbar ayogi..na?
Muskan smiled & assured her---ha ha ayungi, lekin tum is raat ki aur ek pal ko bhi barbaad mat karo...ekbar hi ata haina zindegi me ye raat..kyu vivek?
Vivek twisted his face to think something deeply & then said---Muskan abhi sochke nehi dekha...baad me sochenge...everyone busrt into loud chortle..... & Tarika silently went away from the first hall to the Upstairs dolna room.She very slowly & gingerly entered into the room......but there was noone in the room.....Tarika was searching .......her newly married husband....& as she came to the terrace like balcony.....Daya was there....again that was a full moon night...again Daya was enraptured to feel the shower of beams....again they....got each other.....alone.....but..this time.....they weren't strangers.....but a couple......Tarika slowly ambled towards Daya....& ..stopped just beside him......& clutched him within her arms.....Daya twirled....& looked at her with deep gazing eyes.....both were imbued with intense love........both clammed up..cause...there was no word to define the ineffable, subtle beauty of the moment........tears were glided down the cheeks....but ...tears were of...exquiste pleasure this time....the two came closer....& closer.....&...closer.....blessings were showered upon them by the moon, emitting the ray of pure love,care & reverence.....rustling brisky breeze....... was humming in happiness
Aye Hairathe Ashiqi jaga maat
Pairon..se..zameen zameen laga maat
Daya took Tarika in his lap now & started to lull her with great care....Tarika closed her eyes....& it seemed to her as if she lost within a huge......&..deep.......ocean....very feebly....she could listen to......

[The end]

p.s:
Main ACP Pradyuman aur main Dr. Salunkhe

puri CID team ki taraf se aap logo se hum ye vinti karte hain ke aap log hamare bachcho ke liye duya kare...ta ki is duniya ki sara khushi ko woh log mehsus kar paye....aur pyar se , anand se ek naye zindegi ki taraf age bare..........hume ummid hain ke hamare char bete aur do beti ke liye age bhi aap log aise hi duya mangte rahenge aur pyar barsate rahenge.........

shukriya ante: ACP Pradyuman & Dr.Salunkhe...







Edited by suchi_dev2006 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMGGG i m speechlessssss
plz dun tell me ur story has ended...NOOOOO YAAARRRRR
😭
and u promised to make it a "never-ending" story rmr???
how can u forgetttt suchiii
i still cant believe it endeddddd
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i reele truly enjoyed reading the whole story from the bottom of my heart!!!i swearrrr..
everything wuz justtt perfect!!!!!...
now finally the wedding was totally mind blowing...i luvvedddd how daya-tarika,in ur story,first met in the moon-light, and ended hugging in the moon light too
luvv the connectionnn
it wuz soo good to see ACP caring for his officerz...
muskaan's moving wuz a lil sad...but thats OK
suchiiii ur sooo good hunnnn
get it published pleaseeeeee
i m willing to see it on the TV
plz plz atleast give it a try...
trust me...its just AMAZIng...everything has a certain point and ending
JUST PERFECTTTTTTTTTTT
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plz write another oneeeeeee
luv u luv u luv u
thank u sooo much for taking ur time n doing all this
i reele enjoyed it and the words r coming out straight frm the heart
Daisy!!

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