Beyond Investigation (Ep. Name : Behrupiya)...(New Story@page 48)

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23Diya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#261

Thanks Vis Di, Addi and Aidug.😳

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 9 years ago

#262

Actually in the end I am wondering what happened to the present case. 😆 Dil maange more!

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23Diya

@23Diya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: visrom
Actually in the end I am wondering what happened to the present case. 😆 Dil maange more!

This was my case when I read ur little Abhi-Niyati scene.😆😆

I think you can give an end to it. Who's better than you in investigative stuff. I'll love to read it...hai na acha idea.😉😈

Edited by 23Diya - 9 years ago

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visrom

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Posted: 9 years ago

#264

Arey no yaar...these days I am not getting the inspiration, thanks to some pathetic cases we see on TV.

And its not worth the effort because very few people read and comment. In my early days here, story threads used to be full of comments and feedbacks. Now...I have to beg and plead with people to read investigative stories.

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sherdilali

@sherdilali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#265

Wow nice Story
Keep it up

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Swathi

@swathi17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#266

Diya I too wish the same to continue with the present case. Vis di please don't get dejected. We are ready to read your story.

Diya I felt the story like a time travel. Abhijeet's portrayal was good as a teacher. Loved Daya as a calm person. Well done dude.👍🏼

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: visrom
Arey no yaar...these days I am not getting the inspiration, thanks to some pathetic cases we see on TV.

And thanks to these cases that I don't have to think of missing CID episodes and great moments while packing my stuff to move to a hostel. Should I say they've done something good for me🥱

And its not worth the effort because very few people read and comment. In my early days here, story threads used to be full of comments and feedbacks. Now...I have to beg and plead with people to read investigative stories.

Everybody has lost the interest because of the same reason but what to do...the people in the production house who are supposed to think of entertaining us are probably busy discussing how to disappoint us.😡

Where are the old members. I've seen old threads and it seems the forum used to be a lot of fun. I miss a lot of discussions and scene or story writing threads.

You can atleast write short scenes or something. People like me will have something to read too.

Can't we bring up the threads like funny scene or the make a scene out of a picture?😒

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: swathi17
Diya I too wish the same to continue with the present case. Vis di please don't get dejected. We are ready to read your story.
Diya I felt the story like a time travel. Abhijeet's portrayal was good as a teacher. Loved Daya as a calm person. Well done dude.👍🏼

Look Vis Di, there are more readers waiting.😉

Thanks Swathi.

Yup, from the early day till a few years ago, when Daya was still a normal human being and not a superhuman, Abhi-Daya relation somewhere had that essence that showed that I tried to show here. Infact in earlier days, Abhijeet used to clear his doubts, many times and when he spoke, Daya used to listen very carefully. It used to be lovely.😛

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23Diya

@23Diya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#269

Thanks a lot Misbah and SD di.🤗

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Rifah

@HIDEnSEEK06

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Posted: 9 years ago

#270

Wonderful story Diya.

Ur narration is very classical👏

The way u described Abhijeet was giving me the feeling of Aditya😆

A private person he's! See like Daya and others were curious to know Abhijeet's personal life...we all are curious to know how Aditya deals with his family..how's his wife, kids😆

Keep writing such classic stories 🤗

Again...Rony 😈