Beyond Investigation (Ep. Name : Behrupiya)...(New Story@page 48)

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Swathi

@swathi17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#241

Diya I really don't have words to say. TBH I didn't watch the stolen dynamite episode because I didn't want to see my Abhijeet suffering. But after reading this story I cried because you brought back the emotions of Abhijeet as portrayed in that episode. I have one more thing to say. Everything were realistic and no OTT elements.

The story was absolutely good. I loved ACP here. The name of the mother is also apt.

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MysticMorning

@MysticMorning

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Posted: 9 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: 23Diya

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Hellebore

@Minionite

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+ 48

Team Silver Trio

Posted: 9 years ago

#243

I love this story. It was so sweet and no OTTness at all. The ending was very nicely done as well. 👏 Do write more!

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#244

@Mistic, hmmm...of course u r an established writer there. I'm toh still in my struggling period...i struggle so much to get rid of my typing and grammatical mistakes but iss janam me mera struggle khatam nahi hoga shayad.😵

Parhayi!!!! Wo kya chiz hai🤣

I was talking about something else.

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: KS_Minion
I love this story. It was so sweet and no OTTness at all. The ending was very nicely done as well. 👏 Do write more!

Thanks Shreya🤗

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MysticMorning

@MysticMorning

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Posted: 9 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: 23Diya
@Mistic, hmmm...of course u r an established writer there. I'm toh still in my struggling period...i struggle so much to get rid of my typing and grammatical mistakes but iss janam me mera struggle khatam nahi hoga shayad.😵
Parhayi!!!! Wo kya chiz hai🤣
I was talking about something else.

am i an English graduate, do u think so😲
🤣
aaj tak ek sentence sayad hi sahi se likhi hoon main😛 in English or in Hindi😳
😆😆

ok ok. concentrate in ur something else😉

i PMed u in FF, just peep into that & gave me those info
i hv to work on ur order na😃
Machli is too much lazy u know to collect the essential data by her own😳

Edited by Mistic_Morning - 9 years ago

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sherdilali

@sherdilali

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#247

Nice
Keep it up
Waiting for next

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Shilpam56

@Shilpam56

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#248

Hey aacha likhi ho :)
Thora sa tweek ki original se,
But good...
😊

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Rifah

@HIDEnSEEK06

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: swathi17
Diya I really don't have words to say. TBH I didn't watch the stolen dynamite episode because I didn't want to see my Abhijeet suffering. But after reading this story I cried because you brought back the emotions of Abhijeet as portrayed in that episode. I have one more thing to say. Everything were realistic and no OTT elements.
The story was absolutely good. I loved ACP here. The name of the mother is also apt.

Swati di read Diya's You could have trusted me on PG 5 & 9!

U will surely love that😃