Beyond Investigation (Ep. Name : Behrupiya)...(New Story@page 48) - Page 29

Originally posted by: 23Diya

Ok no problem.

Well regarding the bike thing, it was shown in the episode that he had tried to follow but the bike didn't start. I've written the same in the story too.

And about the gun...well I think I'll ask him next time I meet him. I always have that complain with cid cops.😆

Sure...😉😉

Daya ho ya Diya...kitna farq h...BA's ek 'i' ka hi to difference h.😉😆

Originally posted by: misbah93

wow superb both part are written good manner especially the motive was so unpredictable

Originally posted by: KS_Minion

A nicely written story Diya!

No OTTness, a smooth narration, and a well written story that I could see play out in front of my eyes. Very nicely done. 👏

Originally posted by: dreamfanatic

Finally I completed a complete story...😎 "patting myself on back"😛

A pat from my side too...

It's one story i am waiting for so long now to read sometime...in one go...

@bold, mushkil hai tere case me...sachi bata...

either i really lost interest in reading long stuffs in past months...😭

But your story DIYA pulled me back softly...😳

Reviving that desperation to come and check both IF / FF for something so wonderful which gives new inspiration and either interest too...😃⭐️

kehte haina stories me vishwas jaga diya phir se...😉

Your soft smooth narration and wonderful yet somewhere different portrayals really hooked me up...👏

i read and read and read either getting irritated when house bell rings or my mob alike...and still when i am at 3rd last para feels why story ended now...😳

I wanted more n more of that growing relation i still admired most...😳

That father-son, senior-junior, mentor-student relation catches my eyes and smoothly embedded in my heart with your words and sentences and inner thoughts..😳

Although i felt a difference in character of Abhijeet sir in beginning but i knew it's first time i am reading something from his point of view in that scenario or after or before...😃

the whole building of that mother-son relation yet again giving loads of emotions..

i am sometimes feeling sad, some times happy or even teary when that relation started to float away again...😭

i found ABHI-DAYA part less but i liked it enough nonetheless...😳

you portrayed it as clasically as you always do...⭐️👏

i think it's first attempt where someone puts ABHI-ACP relation before more thoughtfully...😳. I really really appreciate it allot...😳😃

this one seems to be becoming my specialty.😆

i love writing this so much; more after each time FW tries to destroy it- Anti-FW Antibiotic.😆😛

I for one SPECIALLY enjoyed that last ride from ABHIJEET to SR.INSPECTOR abhijeet...🤗

That scene on stairs is still one of my most fav scenes and one of the most memorable ones...

mine too.😃😳

you spectacularly linked the show and your story...👏⭐️

Now i don't have any more words to appreciate your work and effort...😳

It's just spectacular and one of your best pieces till date!😃👏⭐️

and YES, entering in my FAV list too...😃😃

now this one , u say after every story...

copy paste to nhi karti...😉😆