Beyond Investigation (Ep. Name : Behrupiya)...(New Story@page 48)

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: Shilpam56
Hey aacha likhi ho :)
Thora sa tweek ki original se,
But good...
😊

@Bold, Kya matlab?😕

Thanks for reviewing.

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: swathi17
Done 👍🏼 Rifah.

Done Reading??😛

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Reshma

@Reshh16

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#253

@Diya. I happened to come by your thread. I'm planning to read your stories. I personally feel you can add something like contents in the first post along with the story title and the pg numbers. It'll be easy to find. :)

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Swathi

@swathi17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#254

Diya I meant that I will read it definitely. And I read it today. Once again you have done a great job. Keep writing more stories like this. Whenever I read about Abhijeet I used to enact the character. When Abhijeet become sad I too become sad. I love the way you narrate the emotions.

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#255

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: Potterhead.
@Diya. I happened to come by your thread. I'm planning to read your stories. I personally feel you can add something like contents in the first post along with the story title and the pg numbers. It'll be easy to find. :)

I've added a Story Index on the first page. I hope it helps.😊

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: swathi17
Diya I meant that I will read it definitely. And I read it today. Once again you have done a great job. Keep writing more stories like this. Whenever I read about Abhijeet I used to enact the character. When Abhijeet become sad I too become sad. I love the way you narrate the emotions.

Oh.😆

Thanks Swathi. Its good to know that you liked it.😳

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#258

Wow, thanks a lot Diya 🤗

Very well written... no OTT, no crying...😃

I could see it happening in front of me... enjoyed it a lot!!!

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MysticMorning

@MysticMorning

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#259

u make my day, my sis😊
this 16 hours an on-duty hectic schedule...i feel like draining out now-a-days😭😭
but this piece, even sleep was overpowering my mind and eyes when i opened this thread after looking ur PM😊
and i m feeling fresh after a long tiresome night shift 😳
and i m going to take a quick nap with a content mind😃
today no detailed revw
i m enjoying only ur classical presentation👏⭐️