BROKEN ARROW...! (Investigative Story submitted in FF Contest) - Page 5

Originally posted by: gadhadada

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<font color="#ff0000" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Story ki FB ki Replies mein hay...😉😆😆</font>

oh accha..
idhar sorry sorry chal raha tha to parii got choas

the story is awesome gd

Originally posted by: pappais

the story is awesome gd

the investigation was too gud

its great thing you brought sudhakar back none of us can forget him.

Ek baat puchu?
Aapke saath kabhi aisa hua tha jaise first scene mein not the crime

Originally posted by: pappais

Ek baat puchu?
Aapke saath kabhi aisa hua tha jaise first scene mein not the crime

The story is really a golden piece of work marked with 24 Ca..
Rather i must say platinum..👏
I loved the new TRIO..😳
main soch rahi thi ki dada ki story bina ACP-salunkhe and Bina DUO nok jhok ke kaise niklegi.. but i caught them hiding..😆😉
I really respect and appreciate your hard work..👏⭐️
you used so many pictures and descriptions...👏
new creative point of view and presentation..👏
freddy sir rocked the floor...😃
vivek was very sweet..😳
sudhakar...nice to see him again...😊

After long I read such an awesome and magnificent piece of work...👏⭐️⭐️

Absolutely Brilliant Investigative story dada..⭐️⭐️

I would have given it a 10 on 10...😉👏

Thank you so much for so much hard work...😳😳
But i am really very sorry..

Finally found time to read this story GD.

The explanation you gave for Sudhakar's vanishing from CID is really good. It'll be nice to see him back once. 😊 I always have a small bit of anger towards Sudhakar (you can guess why) if you or someone can write a short Abhi-Sudhakar scene clearing the misunderstanding it'll be nice. 😛


About the story...how did you create all those pics with the clues? They are awesome.👏 but sorry...aftera certain point the clues went over my head. So this story is not for relaxed casual reading. I stopped analysing the clues and just took whatever you wrote for granted. 😆 So I can't say if there are loopholes.

Nice idea to show another trio. Even with the actual trio in the background the story was good.

(As an epilogue or as a separate OS agar meri farmaish poori kar sakte hain toh achcha hoga)

can someone explain to me who is sudhakar and why is vis di upset with him?

Originally posted by: iMini

can someone explain to me who is sudhakar and why is vis di upset with him?

go thru this discussion.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1714231&TPN=86


I think it's called case of the deadly frame up.

Done with the story finally.. Its awesome..superbly written. The clues are really great.. I love this new trio and they rocked totally. Thank you so much for such an brilliant story. So sorry for late comment.