BROKEN ARROW...! (Investigative Story submitted in FF Contest) - Page 4

Originally posted by: rosepink.

kuku and baba- uff maza aagya..sach yaar, duo ki memory loss se related tum jo kuch b likhte ho na bada nirala or mazedar hota h..u remember mote sipahi..hehe..nd also since maine wo epi dekhi hu jisme abhi bachho jaisa bhave kr raha tha toh tumhari story me abhi ka role mai visualize kr payi..sach me maza aagya, again stress buster for me..do write more nd share..u r indeed a great writer..all d best for future..

Originally posted by: bluetides

Completed story !!!! 😃

Thank you...😳

GD...

BT...😉

Bahut Maza aaya tha story padhte mei...

Really...😛

I loved investigation part...

Trying to guess what that sign could be was real fun...

for Me too...😳😳

I loved your new TRIO 😉

The way they solved clues and the way they hid and then disclosed things to ACP sir was great...

awww, I remember Lately that I will make much more TRIO in CID...😉😉

So salunkhe sir is young boy 😉

Toh Mao is still not born 😛

Hahahaha... ye bhi Theek hay...😆😆😆

Your narration skills are excellent...👏

Thanks again...😃

Yaar, but what was the explanation for guy who is killed at airport. His reason for being with Sudhakar explicitly. You didn't clarify, so I assume it was accidental...

Basically yaar, I wanted to Start the case and thats the Start Point of Case but I accept that I cant Explain it Clearly...👎🏼😒

I m so Sorry Boss...

BTW party me DUO ko bulayenge na 😆

Shayed...😈

Originally posted by: KhotaSikaShreya

Absolutely and truly enjoyed this GD!

Thank you yaar...😳😃

Pehle toh title kafi interesting tha. Broken Arrow.

Cheat from an English Movie...😆😆

I liked this new trio. Kafi alag hain. 😉 Freddy sir especially was such a nice surprise.

Thank you again...😳

FREDDIE Sir kisi say Kum hain kya...😉😉

Research bhadiya kiya hai aur investigation bhadiya tha. Mujhe acha laga duo ko aise role main dekhne main. They were consoling Freddy sir.

Yes, Research nay Mujhy Pagal kr daala...😆😆

Aur ending first class thi. A lighter note and sweeter note.

Yup...😃

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Thank You so much for Reading, Liking and giving FB for this MAO...😳😳

Originally posted by: ...Parii...

Lo story me kahi sorry bhi hai kya..😕