BROKEN ARROW...! (Investigative Story submitted in FF Contest) - Page 6

Originally posted by: kkkloveu

The story is really a golden piece of work marked with 24 Ca..
Rather i must say platinum..👏
I loved the new TRIO..😳
main soch rahi thi ki dada ki story bina ACP-salunkhe and Bina DUO nok jhok ke kaise niklegi.. but i caught them hiding..😆😉
I really respect and appreciate your hard work..👏⭐️
you used so many pictures and descriptions...👏
new creative point of view and presentation..👏
freddy sir rocked the floor...😃
vivek was very sweet..😳
sudhakar...nice to see him again...😊

After long I read such an awesome and magnificent piece of work...👏⭐️⭐️

Absolutely Brilliant Investigative story dada..⭐️⭐️

I would have given it a 10 on 10...😉👏

Thank you so much for so much hard work...😳😳
But i am really very sorry..

Originally posted by: visrom

Finally found time to read this story GD.

The explanation you gave for Sudhakar's vanishing from CID is really good. It'll be nice to see him back once. 😊 I always have a small bit of anger towards Sudhakar (you can guess why) if you or someone can write a short Abhi-Sudhakar scene clearing the misunderstanding it'll be nice. 😛


About the story...how did you create all those pics with the clues? They are awesome.👏 but sorry...aftera certain point the clues went over my head. So this story is not for relaxed casual reading. I stopped analysing the clues and just took whatever you wrote for granted. 😆 So I can't say if there are loopholes.

Nice idea to show another trio. Even with the actual trio in the background the story was good.

(As an epilogue or as a separate OS agar meri farmaish poori kar sakte hain toh achcha hoga)

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

Done with the story finally.. Its awesome..superbly written. The clues are really great.. I love this new trio and they rocked totally. Thank you so much for such an brilliant story. So sorry for late comment.