BROKEN ARROW...! (Investigative Story submitted in FF Contest) - Page 3

Originally posted by: bluetides

Read till duo go to ACP sir home...

I was really wondering how GD will write a story where Abhi will not scold and tease daya...

I am absolutely right 😉

Popcorn coke 🤣

Now that trio must not be involved, initially I thought you would let ACP prashanth team lead story...

But now I got strong feeling that new trio wd be Freddy , Vivek and Sudhakar...😳

Let me see how it goes...

BTW, airport ko kisi friend ko receive karne keliye disguise me jaana koi bura idea nahi hai 🤔

Bina wajah daya ko dant padi ... *** Manao ab muse ***

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

Trio of Freddy, Vivek, Sudhakar! Great! I'll complete reading next week Dada..so sorry..busy with college stuffs..

Originally posted by: Veena..

Hello GD🤗

Hi VEENU...🤗

Kya khaal chaal hain han? 😉

Set...😉

Khana laye ho mere liye ya bas zero size popat ne kha lia sab 😆

KHANA... What an Idea Sir...😉😆

Ok ok about this investigative storry, first of all the title, I don't know but I found it attractive "Broken Arrow" may be bcz we have heared about broken heart and broken glass but not broken arrow 😆😆

its an English Movie title, Cast was My Fav 😳 JOHN TRAVOLTA and CRITIAN SLATER (not my fav 🤣)...

Chap hay Boss...😉😆😆

Hey its a different one I mean without our trio and with a different trio [:p] I liked the concept as well 👍🏼

PLOT based on it as DUO were Absent...😉😉

Mje pata tha na k iss me trio include nai hai is liye mje uper strting ka suspense pata chal gaya tha k yeh abhi ya daya sir nai ho sakte rote hoye 😆

wah bhae👏... Dimagh chal raha hay VEENU ka...😆😆

But freddy awe that was a good surprise 😉

Thanks...😳

Flash back scene was a good one with freddy and vivek and airport scene toh saye thriller tha itne tazi se sab hoa k pata hi nai chala even parthe hoye bi [:p] yar lakin mje yahan pe confussion hai jo tum ne end me bi nai clear ki mje 😔 wo yeh k kya waqaye hi banda change hoa tha marne wala? And wo sudhaker k sth hi zabardasti kyun betha kya wo sab coincidence tha? 😕

Basically yes, the Man was Same as the Poision created with His body cz Body had No Cloths na... 😊😊

awayein, He did not insists...😃

its Airline Crew Statement and the Person already Killed to verify the Statement...😉😉

might be He came there as He found someone who Keeps his eyes on Him na...😉

cz might be Killer coming with Him in the Same Aircraft...😈

Yes, its a Loophole...❓

I accepted it and Apologize Yaar...

Thank You for asking this Point...😳👏

Or me duo wala hi question kroon gi k kya kuch zada jaldi hi nai forces freddy k ghar tk ponch gaye? Or yeh kya batamezi thi han gandi forces bande😡

aisa hota hay yaar kyunkay Unhun nay bus FREDDIE Sir ka Ghar search kiya tha through Car number and in Terrorism Act investigations especilly those had done in these Exit and Entering Spot of Country coming in Much Strict Code now a days...😊😊

After that duo consoling freddy was really sweet and then what ACP sir did was really good 👍🏼

Thanks again...😉😉

Uff yeh disguise wala idea daya sir ka tha haye Allah kab sudheren ge yeh [:p] 😆 ander duo scene toh tha hi na 😉 unk begair bi bhala koi story ho sakti hai 😉

Yaar, aaj kal Sahab ka Dimagh kuch aur Cheezun ki taraf chala gaya hay...

Tehro tehro tehro zara me bi popcorn or coke le aoon mil k enjoy karen ge 😉

Really...😉😆

Yar investigation with freddy, vivek and sudhaker was awesome atleast I enjoyed that specially bcz of ur effort for pix yar seriously its awesome work, u were having the appropriate pix for what ever u want to describe us 👍🏼 it really shows ur best efforts and dedication for ur work really well done my dear baba🤗

awww Lovely Praise from My Lovely KUKKU...😳😳😳

Thank you so much...🤗

Acha kia jo duo ko mission pe bhej dia warna yeh teeno investigation kese kr pate 😉

Good decision by freddy they cannot hide things from ACP sir for long and yes offcorse they can make a good plan together 😉

Thanks again...😳😳

Hmm Nakash interesting research but yeh govt officals ka bi jhol ho ga ander andaza tha mje iska [:p] u know na 😉 😆

haan yaar, Gyan ki value kum hee ho gayii hay Dunya mein ab...

Their plan was good but yar tum ne sab itni tazi se kia k me pir confuse ho gaye u know na me popat jesi smart intelligent delligent nai hoon 😔 bari tazi se wo pakra gaya or kese ander aya is me bi mje confusion thi yar me bakioon ka toh pata nai shayd mje hi confusion ho gaye ho but yes story interesting thi 😃👏

VEENU, CID nay Plan hee ye banaya tha kay Usy ander aany diya jaye aur PROF tak pohanchnay diya jaye... dekho hr exit and entering pr Nakabandi thi... Aik ko chor kr... wo saaray points say Us point pr pohancha aur wahan say ander gaya... phir PROF tak Direct aana aur Un pr Attack krnay say wo Automatically Confirm ho gaya kay wo NAKASH hay...😊

At the end us proff ko bi do jhapper parne hi chaye the 😡

True...👍🏼

Hang Him too...😡

But I really like the step ACP sir took about revealing the real brain for all those scientific work 👏

Yes...😳

Last scene was in a lighter note and I liked it 👍🏼

Hamesha ki tarah u have done a great job GD 👏⭐️👏

Enjoyed the investigative part more 😳

Thank u baba for a superb investigative story 🤗

Or sorry for being so late dheko kaan pakre hain 😳

Thank You so very much VEENU...😳😳

I loved that U Read it and with Keen Interest...👏👏

I really Worked alot...😃😃

about the Speed ...

Yes True, Basically I lost My Interest when got that Enteries are Minimum...😭😭

Khair Chalo, InshaALLAH, keep in eye all these Loopholes in Future...👍🏼

again a Big Thank you Buddy...😳🤗

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Last time U complained about giving U RED MARKING😉😉... so this time My KUKKU deserved NO RED MARKING...😆😆

Originally posted by: Veena..

Awe baba don't cry and dont lose ur interest u r a superb writer and seriously I really enjoyed this one 😉

Wow u mean no red marking this time 😆