STORY : ABHIJEET AT RANSOM - POST 2,3, 4 ON PAGE1

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Benzaiten

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Team Silver Trio

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

I'll read it on the bus today. 😉

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ControlledChaos

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Read it in one go..
A really great story.. fast paced and fluently written.. i loved the flow in the scenes and really liked the plot.. Ab me flats me nahi jaya karunga.. khaas tor pr washrooms me 😆
Enjoyed an investigative story after a long time.. Btw just a simple query wo watchman so raha tha na to use kese pata chala ke Abhijeet entered inside at 1 o clock?? Maybe you cleared this point and I missed it.. kindly tell me 😳
Thank you for this lovely story. And I loved the concern you showed of Daya and Acp for Abhijeet.. Everything was perfectly described and that is what I enjoyed the most.

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visrom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Thanks for first 2 feedbacks. ok...utna bura nahi tha..At least you guys were hooked to it till the end.

Duo lover...simple. ...watchman wanted to cover up the fact that he was sleeping. he lied!

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Benzaiten

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Okay Visrom a super awesome story!!! You know usually my bus rides are boring and sleepy, but whenever I get a member story I get all hyper and this was a great one!

A nice investigative story with the perfect teamwork and emotions. The way Daya sir and ACP sir were so concerned for Abhijeet sir was so sweet. Something that I miss a lot in CID nowadays.

Thank you for such a great story!

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ControlledChaos

@ControlledChaos

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Aww itni si baat.. 😆
wo bhi jhoot bol raha tha.. booh
thank you for replying..😃

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..optimist..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Finally the story is here 😃

Will read after 16th Vis...

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visrom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: neha_dna

Finally the story is here 😃
Will read after 16th Vis...

no problem, but please don't forget to read. ..😛

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saba yaqoob

@duoa

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

really nice story

very good investigation

read it in one go👏👏

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..optimist..

@..optimist..

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: visrom

no problem, but please don't forget to read. ..😛

No no... I wont forget... 😆

You have my word 😉

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Soni.

@Soni.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

The promo was really good Visrom got everyone really excited for a masterpiece work by you. I read the story in one go. Your style of writing kept me hooked throughout. It was a really great story. Fast paced and fluently written. I really enjoyed the investigation scenes and Abhi KD's bonding. I also loved the concern you showed from Daya and ACP sir for Abhijeet.. Everything was perfectly described and i could imagine what was going and that is what I enjoyed the most. Thank you for such a lovely piece of work Visrom...

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