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nsapo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Yeah !! I finished reading

I must say close to perfection..technical yet simplified, lucid, clear use of language no OTT ness and perfect reactions...and yet again vis di , i beseech to you to try your luck and join FW😛

Bolti band ho gayi, sochna shuru

Kahaani padhkar yahi laga

Ki aap kahaaniyon ki guru😳

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visrom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Thanks a lot to those who sat thru this looonnggg story. Your reading it makes me feel it was worth it. Thank you. 🤗

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Debasree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Message to silent FW Members :
To know our Sr Ins Abhijeet, please read this story. DO NOT TURN HIM SADAKCHAP AASHIQUE.

Now come to story. 😳 After yesterday's disaster, I read this story today morning & feeling very refreshing after reading it. Thank you @vis for writing this story.
When i am reading i feel throughout that tension what i felt in Abhjeet in adalaat 2010 episode. You become successful to create that tension. 👏
Sudh hindi in adalaat dialogs sounds good. 😆
I like how u used technical things...u can use it as u have good knowledge of it 👏

Daya: Nahi...3 baar maine koshish ki aur teeno baar laptop hang hua. Diagnostic check kiya toh hard disk error dikhayi de raha hai. Kisi engineer ko dikhana padega.

Diagnostic check matlab ?? 😕

I like few things very much - How ACP sir & Daya sir doubt on odd behaviour of Abhijeet sir, Spy camera, How Daya sir detects that phone through Bluetooth.

KD scenes & dialogs are similar with original adalaat which i like again.

I like that dialog of Abhijeet sir - "main ghar pe coat nehin pehenta" 😆

Overall enjoyed a lot.

Good job boss ⭐️👏

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

I read Ur Story Kal and already discuss My Doubts with U DII...😵

but Yes, that MAC Part where DAYA Sir detect that Cell was Amazing...👏👏👏

Main nay pehli baar parha... kyunkay Mujhy malum hay kay Blue Tooth Range mein aatii device pakar sakta hay magar MAC kay through Address... WOW... WOW...⭐️⭐️⭐️

Its Really Shandaar👏👏... kyunkay CID mein is tarah dikhaya nahi jata...

I really enjoyed Coolness of ACP Sir and DAYA Sir...👏👏

about that DEBA Query, yes True, DIAGANOSTIC CHECK mean...???😕😕

Baaqi Very Very Nice Attempt...👏👏

Thank You so much...😳😳

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: debasree04
Message to silent FW Members :

r U sure DEBA kay yahan koi aisa Member hay...😕😕

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Debasree

@debasree04

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: gadhadada

r U sure DEBA kay yahan koi aisa Member hay...😕😕

I m not sure but probably yes 😛

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

ok when we switch on laptop before the windows screen comes press F2. it will take you to a diagnostic screen where it will check the hardware and tell you if hard disk is corrupted, memory chips are fine, processor is working normally etc. Try it on your laptop.

Thanks for reading Deba and GD.

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: visrom
ok when we switch on laptop before the windows screen comes press F2. it will take you to a diagnostic screen where it will check the hardware and tell you if hard disk is corrupted, memory chips are fine, processor is working normally etc. Try it on your laptop.

Thanks for reading Deba and GD.

ohhh, acha...👍🏼

Thank You Boss...😳

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Debasree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: visrom
ok when we switch on laptop before the windows screen comes press F2. it will take you to a diagnostic screen where it will check the hardware and tell you if hard disk is corrupted, memory chips are fine, processor is working normally etc. Try it on your laptop.
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Okay...i will surely check this 😛
But isse kuch delete to nehin hoga na...sorry for asking silly question 😳