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first of all sorry for the late reply. Today i read all 4 parts. Amazing dada and neemedidi. dayas new avtar was mindblowing. I loved seeing him this was. One question in the first part you show that daya raise his hand to slap abhijeet but didnt actually slap him. Is that because he still have some respect towards him or what?? Please post next part soon warna heart attack hojayega.

Originally posted by: duoa

ZOR KA JHTKAAA🤢

uff bank b loot liya😲

Neeme di and GD plot and execution is great as always👏👏👏 aap ki jitni b tareef ki jae kam hai u r just kamaal👏

Seriously m totally blank not a single guess that what is going to happen next😕

waiting for next part till than a big round of applause 👏

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

I dnt knw wht 2 say :-( its a big shook 2 see Daya sir like this :-( i m speechless, just waiting 4 next update.

Originally posted by: ...Nyx...

@GD & NEEME
OMG!! Yaar jhatkey pey jhatkaa...
Kya boloo? Ab toh kuch bol bhi nahi sakti "Total Centre Fresh ka ad" i mean boltii band...[:O]
Kya kamaal ka story hai really awesome and tum dono fantastic writers👏 Daya sir in this new "AVTAAR" amazing..
But but dukh toh hoga hi naa CID ke JAI VEERU ko aisey dekhkar. End mein sab theek hoga k nahi??
Yaar meri tooti footi dimaagu ney kaam karna band kar diya ke aagey kya hoga so tum log jaldi baaki parts bhi post karke meherbani kardo(i know har point clear karkey likhney mein time lagtay but...nahi toh main soch sochkey pagal ho jawungii😳)
aur story padhtey hi samjh aajatay ki kitni mehnat hai iskey peechey 👍🏼 hats off yaaro...

Thank You so much for liking this 😊 We are already done with story..But still we need time for some points..and Will post next part soon...

Woh bank key wooden counter model waley part read karkey Ankhein movie ka scene mind mein agaya..kuch bhi ho loot liya successfully Daya sir toh saarey villians ko peechey chod gaye ab CID mein wapsi kaisey I dunno...😕 arrey yaar kuch bhi karkey unhe wapas pehley jaisey laana plz..That was really my wish to show Daya's sharp mind like this...CID never shows that actually abt him..and I always feel that point is missing abt his Personality ... I really want to see his Sharp mind here..So that's why all that Robbery Plan..And GD really write it accordingly what I want..She really put her efforts to make it ACTION ONE 😉 She really described it well...

I'm waiting ...😳

Originally posted by: KS_Shreya

GD and Neeme this part was totally awesome!!!

Daya sir's new avatar was lovely and amazing!

I hope end main sab kuch thik ho jayega...

I liked how you described that bank model...

Jaldi next part post karo!

Originally posted by: Forfriend

Lovely Daya...

Hmmm yes I just loved it... Daya ka toh jawab nahi... upps I mean DADA or Nemee ka jawab nahi... what a plan...Thank You...Thank You 😳😳 If FW show him like this ..I will love It😉

You two use all positive and negative sides of every team member in plan...Thanks for feeling that... We really tries to show weak and strong points of team step by step...

Hats of to you guys...

when i completed last section I was in extra excitement about this robbery and today you just increase it...Aww 😳😳

want to know more and more...

please please please post next chapter soon...

so many hugs and claps for both or you 🤗👏Thank you 🤗

Note: Daya I think woh sab uss Bhatije ko pakadne ke liye kar raha hai... and ya whats about that Documents in Black Leather File... suspicious... Acha wakie ???😉😆😆 Wait wait...😉

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

Now I am really tired of praising both of you 😆.. A big round of applause for you 👏👏👏.. Fabulous, fantastic⭐️⭐️.. You rocked at the investigation part👏👏.. Giving bugs to bank stuff to providing securities team tried for maximum protection.. But ultimately Daya sir took the cake away⭐️⭐️⭐️..Yani tu hum chata tha😉 To show Daya's sharp mind I want to show that... Ab ko robbery pasand I 😆😆 Hum kush howa😈

Team was absolutely right..he knew all for 16 years..so keep everyone's working abilities, disabilities in mind👍🏼👍🏼😉.. Exactly 😉

Brilliant plan by Daya sir👏👏.. But the X-factor of his winning is not his plan but his cool and calm attitude ⭐️ ⭐️ 😎 Yap that is also new shade of him...First time we showed him as a very calm and cool person.. We want to show him as a winner in this robbery..For such kind of plan a calm and cool attitude is very necessary... A Great COP as a Criminal..what he can do... we want to show that as well in this story...

while on the other hand team failed just because of the lack of this cool brain.. I am totally loving his gradual transformation ❤️ 😎.Thank you 😳

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thinking only about profits, change in words use, slapping the stuff with smirk 😎 😎..these small variations are really praiseworthy 😈 😈 😈. DCP teasing 😈, DIG threat, Minister chaos all were perfect.. Loving this Deshmukh Rao 😉..This guy is really a jhol 😆 , just want to see him getting what he deserves 😉 😉.. So the team has been determined to stop Daya sir 😈 😉.. Acha hai..acha hai.. Let's wait and watch whether they can beat Daya sir even becoming 120 or not 😈 😈 😈..Yap thora sa wait aur😉😉

Loved the fact that still Abhi sir is in mental dillema atleast 0.01% ❤️ ❤️ ..absolutely natural reaction ⭐️ Yes ..That is Really a natural reaction... Applause for GD Thori si mera lye b 😆

and that's why I can say that Daya sir will make him loose the game again as well 😈 😈..Ayeee ...🤬😈

Because Devil wins the God many times in present before its defeat 😈 .. And the last phone conversation.. Bol Kameenay..and the following singing by Daya sir 😈 😈..execellent boss ⭐️ ⭐️.. Drawing by Misha and Aman..hearttouching ❤️ .. So now the real battle begins haan 😈 😈..waiting waiting..waiting. I am guessing about Daya sir's change and the end but let's see whether I am right or not 😆. Hats off to you too👏 👏 👏.. Bas kar do Thak jaio ge 😆😆 We have criminals mind.😈..we will never stop😆😆

Neeme di about storyline..yes as a plot maker your query is appropriate 😊👍🏼.. And your research and hard work are definitely winning Di⭐️⭐️. Research work credit goes to GD 👍🏼

Its the back bone of the story ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️.. If we are praising this not only because of Dada's writing but also we are loving the storyline ⭐️ ⭐️.. Arre Parise karo...Aur karo ...u don't know how much Hard work is there... I mostly karch my demag in making over all story.Scenes, Emotions and Character's role... As a Plot maker that is in my hand... Abt Investigation and research this is in GD's hand..Then Over discussions, changes And fights on everything..OH... these are too much... Har cheez main aik sath chalna is not an easy thing..In sab ka bad he we present it in front of u all... When u guys like it... So thora lagta hai we did something gud finally...😳😳

Aur waise bhi Dada aaj jo kuch bhi hai Aapki wajah se hai😉😉.. Am I right or Am I right Dada😉😉?Hahaha... Main na b rae tu App ka DADA jo kuch b hon ga wo meri he waja sa hon ga... 😉

One more little thing I am still confused 😕 with the DESHMUKH RAO name because DESHMUKH & RAO both are surname separately😊.It's a complete name..i heard in so many films...

I don't understand whether you use it as a full name or just addressing just by surname😊. And do Maharastrian use two surnames jointly 😊? Would be obliged if you clear this point 😳😳 .Aww... I heard DESHMUKH RAO as a complete name so many times...😲 Ur DADA will reply u abt this query...She used this name.. if this is not like that then it's not a big deal..its just name nothing else...but I heard it as a Complete name so many times wo b NATA JI ka he 😆😆

Till now atleast for me TRUTH BEHIND THE SCENE was your best piece of work ⭐️ 😳 😳..I personally like that very much... That was my first work...and I still remember GD ko bht muskol sa razi kyea tha main naa...and Dil bhar ka emotions add kyea tha.. And GD worked on it really like I want to see that master piece.. Still that is my FAV one...

But this MASTERPIECE surpasses even that ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️Thank You so much.. For now this is our last combine production..So Starting and ending is gud..then everything is gud 👍🏼 Thank You dear for such a long Feedback... and for liking our stuff... 🤗.

Originally posted by: start1234

MashALLAH chapter ek dum jhakas tha.👏 😃 loved it❤️ PLan,Love,Anger,Daya sir ki singing,Abhijeet sir ke emotions every thing was Marvellous👍🏼🤗 lekin tension bohot zyada hai pata nai aage kya hoga? I hope sub acha ho ga. Ab next part ka besabri se intazar hai. GOD BLESS YOU BOTH

Originally posted by: nickkr

oh my god!!

another part that made me speechless.👏

DAYA SIR DID THE ROBBERY TOO...AUR KYA KYA HONE WAALA HAI.😈 AND WHEN WILL THIS END ...

(AUR KITNA JULM DHAOGE AAPLOG HUMARE OOPER.😉) Are asa mat kaho..humara ander ka Criminal mind jag jata ha😆😆

BUT THE STORY IS GOING KHATARNAAK😈 AND TOOO GOOD.👍🏼 Thank You 😳😳

WAITING EAGERLY FOR THE NEXT PART(pehli baar kisi story ke liye itna excited hoon😊)

A BIG 🤗 TO BOTH OF YOU. Really 😛.. Hope yah excitement app ko acha result da... take care 🤗