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will read ur all pending story very soon dada😳😳😳😳😳😉😉😉😉

Originally posted by: gadhadada

OML..! What a Speechless Review...⭐️⭐️⭐️Honestly I take a Bow Baccha...👏👏👏[/I][/DIV]

I love each and Every Word of Urs...😳😳😳

But the Shocking Points are thisI eagerly want to mention about many other points but now health is not permitting any more..leaving it here..extremely sorry Dada and Neeme di

what Wrong with Ur Heath baccha...😕😕

ALLAH paak gives U and all Health Soon... Aameen...😳😳

Thank You so much...🤗

No no Dada, its my pleasure that you liked my review 😳.. Your work is speechless Dada and Neeme di ⭐️.. Actually that night after 7 hrs of study with no break.. That's why my eyes and head were so badly aching.. Again so sorry to both of you .

I dnt knw wht 2 say :-( its a big shook 2 see Daya sir like this :-( i m speechless, just waiting 4 next update.

@GD & NEEME
OMG!! Yaar jhatkey pey jhatkaa...
Kya boloo? Ab toh kuch bol bhi nahi sakti "Total Centre Fresh ka ad" i mean boltii band...[:O]
Kya kamaal ka story hai really awesome and tum dono fantastic writers👏 Daya sir in this new "AVTAAR" amazing..
But but dukh toh hoga hi naa CID ke JAI VEERU ko aisey dekhkar. End mein sab theek hoga k nahi??
Yaar meri tooti footi dimaagu ney kaam karna band kar diya ke aagey kya hoga so tum log jaldi baaki parts bhi post karke meherbani kardo(i know har point clear karkey likhney mein time lagtay but...nahi toh main soch sochkey pagal ho jawungii😳)
aur story padhtey hi samjh aajatay ki kitni mehnat hai iskey peechey 👍🏼 hats off yaaro...
Woh bank key wooden counter model waley part read karkey Ankhein movie ka scene mind mein agaya..kuch bhi ho loot liya successfully Daya sir toh saarey villians ko peechey chod gaye ab CID mein wapsi kaisey I dunno...😕 arrey yaar kuch bhi karkey unhe wapas pehley jaisey laana plz..
I'm waiting ...😳

Lovely Daya...

Now I am really tired of praising both of you 😆.. A big round of applause for you 👏👏👏.. Fabulous, fantastic⭐️⭐️.. You rocked at the investigation part👏👏.. Giving bugs to bank stuff to providing securities team tried for maximum protection.. But ultimately Daya sir took the cake away⭐️⭐️⭐️.. Team was absolutely right..he knew all for 16 years..so keep everyone's working abilities, disabilities in mind👍🏼👍🏼😉.. Brilliant plan by Daya sir👏👏.. But the X-factor of his winning is not his plan but his cool and calm attitude ⭐️ ⭐️ 😎 while on the other hand team failed just because of the lack of this cool brain.. I am totally loving his gradual transformation ❤️ 😎..thinking only about profits, change in words use, slapping the stuff with smirk 😎 😎..these small variations are really praiseworthy 😈 😈 😈. DCP teasing 😈, DIG threat, Minister chaos all were perfect.. Loving this Deshmukh Rao 😉..This guy is really a jhol 😆 , just want to see him getting what he deserves 😉 😉.. So the team has been determined to stop Daya sir 😈 😉.. Acha hai..acha hai.. Let's wait and watch whether they can beat Daya sir even becoming 120 or not 😈 😈 😈.. Loved the fact that still Abhi sir is in mental dillema atleast 0.01% ❤️ ❤️ ..absolutely natural reaction ⭐️ and that's why I can say that Daya sir will make him loose the game again as well 😈 😈.. Because Devil wins the God many times in present before its defeat 😈 .. And the last phone conversation.. Bol Kameenay..and the following singing by Daya sir 😈 😈..execellent boss ⭐️ ⭐️.. Drawing by Misha and Aman..hearttouching ❤️ .. So now the real battle begins haan 😈 😈..waiting waiting..waiting. I am guessing about Daya sir's change and the end but let's see whether I am right or not 😆. Hats off to you too👏 👏 👏.. Neeme di about storyline..yes as a plot maker your query is appropriate 😊👍🏼.. And your research and hard work are definitely winning Di⭐️⭐️. Its the back bone of the story ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️.. If we are praising this not only because of Dada's writing but also we are loving the storyline ⭐️ ⭐️.. Aur waise bhi Dada aaj jo kuch bhi hai Aapki wajah se hai😉😉.. Am I right or Am I right Dada😉😉? One more little thing I am still confused 😕 with the DESHMUKH RAO name because DESHMUKH & RAO both are surname separately😊. I don't understand whether you use it as a full name or just addressing just by surname😊. And do Maharastrian use two surnames jointly 😊? Would be obliged if you clear this point 😳😳 . Till now atleast for me TRUTH BEHIND THE SCENE was your best piece of work ⭐️ 😳 😳.. But this MASTERPIECE surpasses even that ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️.

MashALLAH chapter ek dum jhakas tha.👏 😃 loved it❤️ PLan,Love,Anger,Daya sir ki singing,Abhijeet sir ke emotions every thing was Marvellous👍🏼🤗 lekin tension bohot zyada hai pata nai aage kya hoga? I hope sub acha ho ga. Ab next part ka besabri se intazar hai. GOD BLESS YOU BOTH

oh my god!!

Awww...superb bhaijaan..
do one thing.. now make a new dictionary of praising words asap..
Because now I feel awkward while using same old words while reviewing..
This chapter was again mind blowing.. I really loved how you mingled both the scenes.. like at one time you showed Daya's planning and at the other time you showed the planning of the team.. really really impressive..
Loved the whole robbery session.. Wow.. Daya's super cool nature was really great..
And his call.. awww.. hahaha.. but Badey bhai is really hurt.. each and every talk of him with Rahul was really true.. they all are unable to forget Daya.. they are unable to throw him out from their hearts...
While Daya is having a fun time...!! that's really saddening.
Now please kb end hoga ye jhatka session.. stop grilling na.. bht ho gaya.. every part gives me new shocks..
Bhai's collision with Badey bhai.. I literally stopped and read that line twice.. at one moment I thought that maybe Bhai will stop there.. but nay.. seems like a Satan is into him...
Badey Bhai listening to that recording..!! that was truely hurting Bhaijaan..
@Neeme di kya di aap ko bhi kya ho jata h.. kb khatam krne ka irada h ise.. ya mujhe hi khatam krna h??
This is most shocking story of the combine production I have ever read..
Though every story was really good.. but this one is the most shocking, unique.. and what not..
Now Bhaijaan khatam karen ye zulm.. aur qatilana hamley..
chalen loads of hugs to you..
Update soon..!!
bht bada review hogaya na.. [:-P]