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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonali.

Sorry boss I hope I didn't hurt you


Ain,...😲
Obviously Not yaar...😳
kya ho gaya hay...😕
Plz Edit Ur Post...😭
Edited by gadhadada - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gadhadada


Ain,...😲
Obviously Not yaar...😳
kya ho gaya hay...😕
Plz Edit Ur Post...😭


Karr diya boss
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gadhadada



Shukriya Jee...😳
Jeeti rahyey aur Khush rahyey... hamesha...🤗

Edited by gadhadada - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really, really sorry GD. Its been a long time and haven't reviewed your story yet. Extremely sorry!

17520 hours

GD another superb masterpiece by you. Amazingly written. I am crying while writing this. Classic, Superb, Outstanding, marvelous and what not!!. GD do you seriously have magic in your hands. I would have definitely loved to see this in serial. What a beautiful way you wrote about what might have happen in those 2 years.. what all thoughts were running in Daya sir's mind... seeing his senior kidnapped infront of his eyes and how he couldn't do anything. I could seriouly feel his pain it was heart wentching. Freddy andSudhakar's talks about Daya sir being so emotional was lovely...I could visualise there talk. I seriouly loved the part where Acp sir tried to make him understand...all were concerned for both of the officers...!!!felt really bad seeing Daya sir in pain till the time Abhi sir was not found and with him. I am so glad that he could share his pain with a friend like Rahul. What a wonderful way to connect another story to yours.We finally found out the reason on how his 1/3rd of salary started landing in Abhi sir's account. They way he protrayed the beautiful journey was simply classic. Amazing way to refresh thier friendship once again. awesome!!! their scenes were truly heart touching and lovely...amazing..!! Overall another superb story. Innovative concept. I just loved this and also you GD!!!

Will read The Darkest hours soon GD
Sorry again for delay
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Posted: 11 years ago
kya dada aur neeme..kya bana dia hai aap ne Daya sir ko...Daya sir singing ...i really cant belive tht Daya sir can b such irrespective in case of any lady... 😡 is he really my Daya sir or any behrupiya???the story was awesome 👍🏼 i loved it ❤️ buht ho gya suspence yaar ab jaldi next dhamaka karo..
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Posted: 11 years ago
are haan yaar evn i m missing my FBs, but kya karu fursat hi nhi milti..sochti hu ab dungi, tab dungi bt possible hi nhi hota aaj kal..
aur apne purane style wala FB to ab purana hi reh gaya cz nw i jst dnt get a chance to do that..
nyways great masterpiece by both..👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

The Darkest Hours

PART 4
RAMAN Spread the Map of Final Plan and again Revised the Points infront of DAYA, JAGYA and all... JAGYA Can't Understand that why DAYA need to Revised that Final Plan... He expelled His Irritation as...

JAGYA: kya hay DAYA, Acha khasa Plan tou hay na...

DAYA (soft tone): Tum Nahi jaantay, Us Team mein Kaun kitna Pohancha hua Dimagh rakhta hay... (to RAMAN) Aik Kaam kr , yahan ki Poori Sewaradge Line ki Mujhy Jaankari day...

RAMAN (shock): magar Tum nay tou Pehlay kaha tha kay Hum Sewardage Line kay through Nahi jayein gay...

DAYA: Dunt Missed any Nook or Corners... yahan Muqabla Chatay Huay Badmasun ya Jahil Politicians say Nahi... CID say hay...

JAGYA Nodded in Yes after RAMAN Question Look and ask DAYA in Little Angry and Irritative tone...

JAGYA: Dekh, Zyada paisa hee nahi Humaray pass... wahan DHARAGI ko bhi Abhi Daboch kay rakkha hay... jo kuch karna hay... jaldi karna hay... aayii Samajh...

DAYA (checking map and pointing some Dots on it with): Pehlay Mujhy tou Samjha do...

JAGYA: dekh DAYA, Tu samjhta hay kay Main Tujh pr Aitabar Nahi karta (DAYA Amuze) (JAGYA added) haan aitabar nahi krta tha... Tu Khud soch... Teray Dhanday mein agar koi Dhanday ka Ulat aadmi ya Dushman Party ka Aadmi achanak Ghuss jayey... Tujhy Apna bananay ki Koshish karay, Hamdardi jatayey tou Kya Tu yaqeen karay ga... (DAYA nodded in No) (JAGYA again) tou Main nay bhi Wohi kiya... pr haan Ab Main apnay Jigar say kehta hun kay Tu Mera aadmi hay...

DAYA (laugh): Jisay Lurkhana Tera Kartawya hay... (JAGYA really Controlled on His emotions with Force) (DAYA added) Tujhy Pata hay, Mujhy Apni Team say nafrat kyun hay... Kyun Main un ko Chor aaya..?

JAGYA: kyunkay unhun nay Tujhy Pehchana Nahi...

DAYA: aur Tu bhi Yehi Ghalati kr raha hay... Aitabar karna Seekh warna Buht Buri Maut maray ga...

JAGYA (ignore and added): Humein Ammunations kay liyey Bank say Paisay...

DAYA: Pehlay DHARAGI... aur Sun ye dekh raha hay na... (signaling on His Head and add) Acha Khasa Chalta hay...

JAGYA: DHARAGI aur Main nay sath kaam kiya, Ek Ihem Cheez Ura lii... magar DHARAGI nay Meray Kameeny Bhateejay ko Apnay sath mila liya aurr Mujhy pakarwa diya...

DAYA: tou is Bank mein wo Raaz hay...

JAGYA: nahi, wo bus DHARAGI ko malum hay, jo Munh Nahi Khol raha...

DAYA: aur Tumhara Bhateeja..?

JAGYA Quiets and went Out... DAYA look at His Silent Exit and rashly Scream call as...

DAYA: aby RAMAN kya Mar gaya hay... (to RAVI) TONY ko bulao...

RAVI Left, DAYA still engaged in that Map and JAGYA Whole Conversation Revolving on His Mind which was a Complete waste for Him... He just thinking about Himself... How much He gain from this Robbery was a Main Query for Him right now...

SACHIN Spread a Map and started to tell the Information getting from Personal to Official bases... Before He Briefed about all... ACP asked the Query about DHARAGI Escape Plan which He Missed Yesternight...

ACP: Wesay Tum log DHARAGI ko Bhaga kr Mumbai kesay lay aayey... maltlab Raastay mein tou Check Posts thy na...?

ABHIJEET: Sir, RAHUL nay kaha tha kay Hum Direct Bangalore ki taraf hee Safar karein, Hum nay Thora aagy ja kr Gari Road pr dobara Daal di, phir RAHUL nay Ek Short Cut Turn liya aur Hum Bangalore kay aadhay rastay say Mumbai Wapis...

ACP (amaze): yani Na Tum logun ki Gari ki Check Naka pr Entry hui aur Na Exit...

ABHIJEET: jee Sir, Aap nay Buht Acha kiya jo RAHUL ko liya, warna yaqeenun Buht Mushkil hoti... Wesay Sir, Wahan say DHARAGI ki koi Report tou mili hogi...

ACP: Filhal Police waly Is Khaber ko Pait mein Daba kr bethy hain... Pooray Area ki Naka Bandi hay... Inspector YAADAV aur Constables ki Shamat aayii hui hay...

VINEET: Wesay Sir, agar hum log JOGGERS PARK kay Gate "C" pr Camera lagwa detay tou kum az kum ye Pata chal jata kay DHARAGI ko Lenay waly thy Kaun..?

ABHIJEET (rash): acha JAGYA kay baaray mein tou Humein pata hay kay Usy kaun lay gaya... kya Hum kuch kr payey... haan...

ACP knew the Mood Swingings of ABHIJEET so Snap Out that rash Scene and Ordered SACHIN to Brief all about His Information which He collected...

SACHIN: Sir KOTAK MAHINDRA BANK ek Indian Financial Service thi jo kay 1985 mein bani thi... February 2003 mein RBI yani Reverse Bank of India nay Isy Bank Business ka Licence day diya... is ki 363 Branches hain Pooray India mein aur 20, 000 Employees is mein Kaam kartay hain aur yearly Revenew is ka 10 Crores ka hay...

VIVEK (added) Sir, ANBANI CHOWK pr jo Branch hay KOTAK MAHINDRA BANK ki, wo Red Alert Zone mein aati hay... kyunkay Us Area mein Kafi Foreign Offices hain... Area ki Apni Security buht Tight hay aur Phir Bank ki tou aur Tight hay...

FREDDIE (more added): Sir Staff ki Tadad Kum hay, maltab Executive aur Local Staff mila kr Total 38 Log hain... phir 4 Guards bhi hain jin mein Do Front or Do Back Gate pr rehtay hain... Premises bhi 800 yard pr hee hay...

RAJAT (included): Hum nay Wahan kay saaray staff kay Biodata ki ek ek Copy mangwa li hay... Bina Humari Security Check kay wo Monday Morning...

ABHIJEET (interrupts): RAJAT, Monday kaha gaya hay... Sunday ki Raat 12 bajay kay baad say Monday start ho jayey ga... (RAJAT Shocked but Nodded as how He Missed that Point) (ABHIJEET asked) Ye batao wahan Rozana kum az kum kitnay Paisun ka Len den ho jata hoga..?

VINEET: Sir Exact Figure tou batana Mushkil hay, pr 50/ 60 Lakh tak ka Len den tou ho jee jata hoga... week ka Pehla din hoga tou Is say Zyada ki bhi Expectation kr saktay hain..

ACP: aur LOCKERS..?

SACHIN: Sir, Total 22 Lockers hain magar filhal 17 Lockers Engaged hain... baaqi Khali...

ACP: pata kiya kis kay Lockers hain..?

RAJAT: Jee Sir, Hum nay Saaray Lockers Owners ki bhi Information lay li hay Bank say... magar koi Owner JAGYA ya DHARAGI say koi Link Nahi rakhta...

ABHIJEET: aur DAYA..?

RAJAT look at Him and Nodded in NO... ACP exchange Glances with ABHIJEET and now they started to Finalize their Plan after Tightens the Knots of their Plan as...

ACP: Agar Hum nay Thora bhi Extra Security Forces ko Use kiya tou Panic Phail jayey ga... Pehlay hee Area Red Zone mein ataa hay...

ABHIJEET: Sir, is ka matlab kay wahan Roads pr tou Detectors hongay..?

ACP: haan, magar Road Detectors sirf Foreign Offices kay Samny hee hon gay... baaqi nahi... khair, (to RAJAT) RAJAT, sub say pehlay is baat ka poora khayal rakkho kay koi bhi Shaks bina Humaray Security Check kay Na Ander jayey ga aur na hee bahar aayey ga...

ABHIJEET (added): aur haan, Sewardge Lines ka Buht Buht Khayal rakhna... DAYA ye Option Use kr sakta hay...

ACP: Reserve Security Officers kay Kuch Jawan Ander aur bahar rahein gay ta kay kisi bhi Garbar ki Surat mein Backup mily...

ABHIJEET: Sir, DAYA, DHARAGI ya JAGYA aur Us kay Log Openly tou Saamny aayein gay Nhai... wahan Ander Dakhil honay kay sirf Do hee Options hain... ya tou Sewardge Lines ya phir AC Ducts...

ACP (Order): In Dono Raashtun ko Seal kr do...

RAJAT: Yes Sir...

ACP (to ABHIJEET): Reserve Security Officers kay Jawanun ko wahan Depute kr do... Apni Team ko Segment ki Shakal mein Rakhna... hr Department ki Heading Tum Log karo gay... koi Choot ya Chook na ho... CCTV Camera aur Bugs wahan hr jagah honi Chahyey yahan tak kay Hr Department kay Employee ko bhi Bug laga do...

ABHIJEET: jee Sir...

ABHIJEET moved with His Team and arranging Details about this Coming soon Robbery where He wanted a Result of Defeat for the Betrayer...

Here DAYA started His Prepartions, He Splits JAGYA Mens in 5 Segments and told their Role to them... After the Whole Reharsal which He tried to do either Creating Artificial Counters on that Den and then Revised the Plan...

GUDDU, RAVI, RAMAN, ALI, SAWANT and Others placing the Wooden Counters according to DAYA' s Order... JAGYA just entered while RATAN pasting some Chits on those Counters which JAGYA reads as...

JAGYA: Cash Counter, Payment Counter, Entrance, Manager Room, Locker Room, Front Desk, Main Gate, Back Gate (asked DAYA in Confusion) ye sub kya hay DAYA..?

DAYA: Shooting...

TONY came inside and giving DAYA a Big Paper, DAYA start to Read and a Big Smiles comes on His Lips... He Ordered to JAGYA...

DAYA: Kuch Fake ID's banany hain..?

JAGYA (to RAVI): isy Designing and Printing Section lay jao...

DAYA (with moving): Teray Bhateejay ka kya Naam tha ...

JAGRA: Pr... (suddenly) kyun, Tery ko kya...?

DAYA (wink with smile): Aik Us kay Naam ki bhi banwa letay... (laughing) Shagun...

RAVI move and DAYA Following Him... JAGYA boils in Anger but still Confuse about His Plan as DAYA changes so many things and still Changing it...

Sunday Morning creating Panic between the Employees and staff as Management Unexpectidely Called them at Bank on Bank Timmings... the Chaos created inside MAHINDRA KOTAK BANK and Quietness occurs after seeing ACP PRADYUMAN with His Team and Magaement Level People of Bank too... All exchange glances and have a Scare arise their minds that there must be any Threat coming... ACP Sir stand at prominent position with His Team and Management and started...

ACP: darasal ye ek Iham mamla hay... Humein aap kay Bank kay hawaly say ye News mili hay kay kal shayed yahan pr koi Bari Chori honay wali hay... (noise aroused) (ACP again) is liyey aaj Sunday kay din aap tamam logun ko Sawdhani kay Teht bulaya gaya hay... Ye Humari Team hay, yani Total 11 members, Mujhy mila kr... Hr Member ko dekh lijyey aur Achi tarah Pehchan lijyey...

Yahan aap kay hr Department mein ye Log aap ki Suraksha kay liyey hon gay... ye taman Log apnay kaam kay expert...

EMPLOYEE (cutting with tease): bus ye 11 Log...

ACP (with Sigh as He expected so many queries): Police aur Reserve Forces kay Jawan bhi is kay sath hee hon gay... (He feels the Relax shade on Faces) Hum Bank band Nahi kr saktay kyunkay KAIR kehlana kaun Pasand karay ga (He feels a Good Positive Shades on faces so added) Aap sub Logun ko in kay Orders follow karnay hongay... apnay Aankh, Kaan Khulay rakhyey ga... agar koi bhi garbar dikhay ya Mehsus ho... kisi bhi Customer pr chayey Wo Regular ho ya Nhai kisi qisam ka Shak ho... Turent is BUG (showing Bug) kay zaryey Apni jagah say bina hilay Hum tak khaber karyey ga aur Shant rahyey ga...

ABHIJEET (added): Ye Bugs abhi Aap Tamam logun ko day diyey jayein gay aur In kay Istamal ka Tareeqa bhi bata diya jayey ga... Kal aap sub nay Ye Bugs laga kr ander aana hay, Hr aadmi Apna I-CARD Apnay Galy mein Hr samy daaly rakkhy ga... Koi Emergency ki Call aayey tou Apny Control Room ki Lines pr Shift kr dijyey ga...

ACP: Pareshan mut hun, Hum sub In Desh kay Dushmanun ko Mil kr hee Hara saktay hain... bus aap ka Sath hr Pal rehna chahyey...

Team checked all Sealed Places again, Distributed the Bugs after telling the Use of it... Place Scanner Outside the Gate and after Recheck All, Leave the Premises after Placing Reserve Force Jawans on Specific Points...

DAYA hearing so Many Screams and Painful Voice from the day of DHARAGI entry in this Den as JAGYA tried a lot after giving Him so many Punishments but DHARAGI still on His Same Statement...

DHARAGI: Nahi malum... U bas***d... Tera wo Bhateeja Khud Mujhy bhi Cheat kr gaya... Ganda Khoon ganda hee nikla...

JAGYA (hit Him with Rod and asked): aur tu itna Shareef kay usy Dhonda Nhai... haan...

DHARAGI: aby Khangal daala... Mil jata tou saaly kp Beech Chowk pr Maarta... ahhh...

JAGYA Rod this time Completely Unconcious Him... He was coming back and told DAYA about the News as DAYA demanded to provide Him 3 Buses...

Here CID Team Preparations at its Peak, they really tried to Secure the Bank, CCTV Cameras, Bugs, Scanners, Detectors, for a Minute its looking like Any Army Force Headquarter...

ACP still Not Talking about this Challenge call from DAYA to HQ rather telling Only about the Threat thatwhy He engaged Police and Reserve Forces to Minimize the HQ Pressure as mostly He got these Tease Lines Frquently now as...

HQ: Kya kr liya CID nay, jo ab kr kay Ihsan karay gi...

Desh aur Department ka Munh Kaala kr kay rakh diya...

Aisay Ghaddarun ki saza tou sirf Maut honi chahyey...

Najnay ab bhi kitnay ander chupy bethy hongay...

He really Composed Himself after Tolerating these harsh Lines Burden on Himself and trying to Stay Away His Officers from that...

After that DHARAGI Demand Call ACP Shuts Bureau Footages and mostly there Previous Footages going on which Copy was silently gave to All Officers so they must Watch it Previous day and Wearing the Same Color Outfits wheather Coming to Bureau...

On ABHIJEET Suggestion Every Officers takes a Minimum 4 Hours Sleep in Segments and Takes some Healthy Foods before Coming to Battlefield...

DAYA Enjoyed with Music, A Loud Music Really Relaxes His Rash emotions... He does not know about CID preparations but He Knows about Their Minds... Reading Minds is a Nice Habit... He remembers this Line with a Smirky Smile...

He knew if He Lost this Battle, He lost His Future... His Future of Troubling CID, Challanging them, Playing with them after Turning a Big International Don... He humming...

DAYA (humming): Dushman jo Mera ho... rehta Nahi Dunya mein... (smirk) Buht he Khataknaak hun Main...

Two Big Vehicle stopped with Smooth Outside the Bank Premises... so many ppl in Civilian Outfits coming Out and moving to their Position with an Order of DO or DIE bases as CID already briefed about their Role and Ordered All Jawans, Police and His Own Officers as...

ACP: Ye larai, Humein her haal mein Jeetni hay... is Baat ko jaan lein kay Dushman (his heart pinch but voice Strong) Buht Shatir hay, Peechy say Waar nahi karnay wala tou Dimagh ko Hazir rakh kr Kaam krna hay... Giriftari Humara Pehla Kaam, magar agar haalat Haath say Nikltay mehsus hun tou Dushman pr Fire Khoolna hee Humein Shobha day ga... Result hr surat mein Humari Jeet honi chahyey... Wish U All The Best Officers...

OFFICERS: Yes Sir...

A Beep of 00:00 AM initiating at ACP Watch, He exchanged Look with His Right Hand, Both are at Control Room having so many CCTV Cameras Screen, with Huge Lines of Telephone either Internal Lines or External Lines...

The AC Ducts Exit Point Sealed after taking a Position by Reserve Force Jawans... Same with Sewaradge Line which Opening Point at the Parking Area of Bank... the UV Lights also gives Extreme Classy Result in Darkness as well...

The Time Passing with Snail Speed... Every Small Noise makes them all Alert, their Eye Movement raises, Hands Grip on Ammunation little Tight but still Nothing Happened... Here ACP and ABHIJEET discussing that matter as...

ABHIJEET: Sir, Mujhy Nahi lagta, DAYA aaj Khud aayey ga...?

ACP (raise eyebrow and ask): wo Kyun..?

ABHIJEET: Sir, itna Pagal tou Wo bhi Nhai hay, Shehr mein Security Tight wesay hee hay aur ye tou phir Red Zone Area hay... yahan tou Parinda...

ACP (cutting): aur Mujhy Yehi Cheez parershan kr rahi hay... Us nay Challenge ye saari Situation jaany kay baad di hogi ABHIJEET... TAREEKA kay milnay kay 6 Ghantay baad Us nay Call kiya tha...

ABHIJEET (whisper tone): Najany kyun Mera Dil...

His voice is Not above than Whisper, ACP Look at Him, He turned so much Dull, Weak and Restless... After TAREEKA Incident, ABHIJEET Rash Emotions and Hate against DAYA seen much Clear but still His Heart Cheating Him or might be ACP Heart too... Both taking Sips of Coffiee without More...

At 03:00 AM, DAYA laid over Bed , He was really Tired and Not Intrested to Wake up early Morning... He Untied His Watch, placed it on Side table... Closed His Lens Eyes as He was using Montly Lenses and Sleep with a Small Murmur...

DAYA (Sleepy Murmur): Miltay hain, Ek Chotay say Break kay baad...

The Church Clock Stuck as 05:00 AM and telling about the Morning Prayer... ACP feels the Dullness and Little Drowsiness over Officers Mind and Body movement as Waiting was really One of the Most Boring work of This World... He shares His Scare to ABHIJEET as...

ACP: kahein DAYA, Hum say Kheel tou nahi raha...

ABHIJEET: Sir, ye tou Monday kay Khatam honay kay baad hee Socha ya Kaha ja sakta hay...

ACP nodded in Yes... Both Seniors really in a Panic State as if it was Only a Fake Challenge, How they Justified that... ABHIJEET look at ACP Tense Face and changes His mind by asking...

ABHIJEET: Sir, DHARAGI ki koi Khaber Nahi, (confuse) kya Media tak koi Khaber Nahi gayii...?

ACP: ABHIJEET, Basically ye Police ka Lapse tha aur Phir jis tarah Hum logun nay Usy nikala hay, Tum logun ki Gari na Entry pr hay na Exit pr... is liyey koi Soch hee Nahi raha kay Wo MUMBAI mein hay... Police or CID Usy Bangalore mein hee Dhond rahi hay... haan JAGYA kay liyey Humaray Sar pr Pressure hay jisy DAYA...

ABHIJEET (added in anger): Ghatya Aadmi...

ACP (look at him and say): Tum Khud ko Takleef denay say Baaz Nahi aao gay...

ABHIJEET Look at Him, Down His Head and totally Focused on Door from where PEON entered with a Next Session of Coffie for Both...

The Cell Buzzed Continously and after Pressing so many time SNOOZE button, At last the Man Opened eyes and saw the Sun rays with so many thoughts...

At 07:00 AM, The Foreign Educational Institutions Vehicles roaming to Pick or Drop the Students to their Destination with Complete Responsibility...

At 09:00 AM, Bank timming started as ACP already Announced earlier to Come little early so the Staff coming from 08:00 AM so at this Time all Security Checking purpose was Done of All Staff...

He stretched His Arms, Legs and then Pulling His Body from Bed and moving to get Freshen Up and after 20 minutes, He was coming out, wearing a Local Cheap Trouser with a Deep Blue color half Sleeves shirt, Tann in Color with French Beard and Heisal Color Lenses and moving towards Dinning table...

At 10:00 AM, the Area started to wake Up with Opening Big Brands Shops, Some Snaks Bars, Floral Outlets and Foreign Offices too...

At 10: 30 AM, He went to His Specified Address with His Two Mens and after Showing the ID's, Vehicles License entered in a Big College Ground where Students excited after seeing 3 Big Buses coming inside the College ground...

Here at 11:00 PM, a Reserve Force jawan sending a Signal that He heard Some Noises inside the Sewardage Lines... SACHIN with PUNKAJ and NIKHIL move there to Seize them at that Point from the Entering Section as CID only Sealed the Exit Point to Trap them badly either through Sewardge Lines or through AC Ducts...

As these are the Peak Hours in Bank especially for taking Depositing Money, Clearing Checks before Lunch Hours so the Bank was much Fill, the Team Silently Interchange the Position and now SACHIN Position was headed by FREDDIE and VIVEK...

At 11: 30 AM, the Students sat on Buses and moving to their Journey either ANTAKSHIRI, KBC was roaming inside the Bus to Spend Travelling Time, They all are happy and Thrilled without knowing the Result they would deal when reaching at their Destination...

At 12:00 PM, the Lunch Time started and the Bank completely Evacuated and All at CAFETERIA section with so many Gossips around this Threat Preparations...

Here SACHIN came with 4/5 People who were wearing Municipal Corporations Uniform with a Letter where they are Working to Clear the Sewardge Lines which Verified by Municipal Corporation...

Obviously after this Verification CID Left them but ABHIJEET insisted to atleast stayed them here for further Inqueries so ACP send them on Police Jeep which was at Parking and without any LOGO...

Here the Resuming Hours started, Employees and Staff back to their Seats and started their Work, suddenly CID and Other Forces heard Some Voices with Shouts and Screams, the Rest One Segment move Outside to check the Situation...

At 01:00 PM, the 2/3 Police Vans with Extreme Protocol Section aroused inside the Area, ACP look at ABHIJEET and Both contacted RAJAT about the Recent One... He rushed out after placing VINEET His place...

SACHIN and Others entered inside and got that the Furniture Outlet which was beside the Bank Premises was wrapping in Fire due to Short Circuit, the Hustle Bustle arose and ppl coming out from it... SACHIN busying in Calling Ambulance and taking Out Rescurers...

The Police Van after seeing the Smoke and Fire stopped the Convayey as its Minister DESHMUKH RAO who was coming to visit to British Foreign Offiice...

RAJAT after seeing it went inside the Bank as Now Checking was Little Difficult as the Fire reaches the Sky and wrapping the Adjecent Building and People without Checking to Protect themselves moving and entering in any place...

RAJAT told ACP about Minister Convayey and it generates the Tension More to ACP and CID... He ordered RAJAT to move back but Suddenly a Big Blast Heard, All rushed Out and seeing a Transformer hit and Electrical Wires fell on 3 Big Buses which just Comes now...

The Students Screams, Shouts, Fire completely Confuses Everyone including ACP PRADYUMAN, the Bus Driver tried but hit with Minister Black Embassader so the Traffic was jammed badly...

Driver almost tried to Protect the Bus but Failed and Bus Turn on His Right path after hiting with the Pole in front of Bank which fell after Bending on Roof of Bank with Bang...

VINEET feels a Light voice on AC Duct section so on His Personal Order after did not get the Signal, Reserve Force jawan Opening the Seal and All heard a Big Sound and some Celling material fell on them... The Roof of bank was Cracked...

The panic of After Shocks of Recent Earthquick which had done Previous day comes inside the Bank and mostly ppl started Running to Move Out...

The Bank started to Evacuated while the Outsiders from the Fire trying to Move inside... jam Packed situation happened... Nobody Listening Anything or Anyone...

Here Diplomats coming Out... Minister Personal Security Staff just thinking about Minister Rescue while Officers First Priority was those Students Life... Ambulances, Fire Bragades really Alamaring the Area...

Officers Forgets Everything and tried to Save the Students, Civilians... They Completely comes in Panic state to handle so Many Natural Destructions in a Small amount of Time...

Here a Man sat on a Tunnel with Difficulty, After a Big Bang and feeling a hurt on His Head, smiled and after some minutes entered inside the Bank through AC Duct section...

The Bad Point was the Locker Room which was Opened as Some Locker Owners be there and after that EarthQuick After Shocks Scare, who remembers to Close the Vault either DAYA Sprinkle the DEODRANT and FOAM to Dead the Electro Megnatic Waves...

People Extreme Panic state either Jam Pack ways, Fire, Smoke, Blood, Screams, Cry Vanish the Whole... the Minister Bak bak to Scold Police Department, Allegations that its Opposition Saazish... Media Masala... Foreign Office Scare that it's a Threat from Some Specific Groups...

All these things really Helped in this Big Robbery where Robbers really Enjoyed their Skills either using some Specific Smirky Smiles at CCTV Cameras with Different Poses...

A Mob of Few people unexpectidely trying to re- enter for Protecting from Outer Exit due to Rush, They comes in Shock... can't get what was happening here as Some masked People trying to Pushing things on Sacks...

These Few people are really Trapped in a Net of Robbers... Totally Helpless either during turning Unconcious... Some already Lost their BUGS due to running, but a Man in Hurry trying to contact Outside for Help using His BUG giving by CID, but got by DAYA Eyes... He comes Near and asked...

DAYA (taking out BUG with): ahannn... aisay Nahi... (He crushed the Bug from His Foot and say) Aisay... (pat on His Cheek with) Chalo Aankhein Band karo...

Man closed Eyes and after a Second fell at Floor in Darkess from the Hit of a Hard Slap... Other Scared, completely Quiets after Trapping Badly as mostly Injurd either Lightly or Hardly in Unconcious mode...

After Finishing Everything, They all Rushed from the Sewardge Lines which were Not Sealed again after that First Attempt...

DAYA winked His Men who entered inside the Sewardge line and He mingled with CID and Police and Dispersing Mob, taking Injured into Ambulences... He easily Wipe the Three Drivers of College Buses after taking them inside His Own Ambulance just included at last moment which Irritated JAGYA a lot...

When at a Moment He Unexpectidely during Rescue Work hit with ABHIJEET, ABHIJEET feels Something... A Sign, Feel, Touch, Spark or What but in that Panic and Painful Scene... He really Wiped it all...

DAYA smiles and move to His way after Slapping the Specific Ambulence who rushed Away with Siren and He Escaped from the End Point after seeing the Man He hatred the Most...

The Rescue Work Prolonged either No bad Injury happened with any Student or Civilian... the Shops were Closed either Foreign Offices too... Reporters creating Dufficulties for Minister DESHMUKH RAO for asking so many Queries to Him so He thought to Better Leave the Spot...

The Electrical Department coming and started their Repairing Work... Debris from that Short Circuit was taking for Forensic... The Area was still Dipped in Smoke and Heisalness... The Bank also Burnt the Out Wall either the Basement Parking was Safe either it would be the Big Disaster...

When after 6 Hectic Hours of Rescue Work, Officers coming back to Bank and found a Big Big Shocking Jerk after seeing the Management and Rest Staff placing their Heads on Palms seeing the Empty and Opened Valuts either the Cash Counter were completely Vacant without any Penny...

Bank Management expelled their Anger over CID Team and Police Officers and there was a Small Conflict Arises as Security Forces trying to Clear it while Bank Management gives All Blame on CID especially...

Manager: ye Suraksha ki hay (signaling Open Vaults) (to ACP) ACP Sahab kya malum hay Aap ko Bank ko Crorun ka Nuqsan ho gaya hay... Hr Locker Insured tha... Hum kis kis kay Paisay bharein gay...

ABHIJEET (rash): tou aap dekh rahy thy na... Kheel tou Hum bhi Nhai rahy thay... aap kay Guards kidhar gayey...

Manager: OMG..! Yani Chori aur ooper say seena Zori...

ACP: Mind Ur Language Mr. PRABHAKER...

Mr. PRABHAKER: kya Mind haan... Mind kya bacha hoga... aur hay tou Wo aap Logun hee ka Aadmi na... TV pr roz Janam Kundli dikhai jaati hay Us Ghaddar ki aur...

ABHIJEET (grabs Collar with): nahi hay... nahi hay Wo Humara Aadmi...

ACP and RAJAT tried to Relax ABHIJEET... Manager at Peak of Anger... Here Media coming Up with Another Issue and Bank Robbery takes the Lime Light position Flashing on Screen...

A noise of CHEERS either through Glasses, Bottles or Voices really emerged the Happiness Aroma inside that Den... JAGYA was at Peak of Happiness Level... DAYA really did a Fabulous Job without Creating Fuss and now All Showering in 2 Croroes with some Jewellaries, Diamonds and Documents too...

Police and Reserve Force Jawans giving their Reports by saying that Robbers must Enter or Exit through ACP Duct section or Sewardge Lines or might be using Both as there was No Vehicle found or Entered inside the Area which was with Fake Number Plates...

ACP after Cooling the Heat and sending ABHIJEET outside with FREDDIE and RAJAT while Ordering VIVEK and SHERYA to ask about Minister DESHMUKH RAO Visit either its already Planned or just made in Peak Hours and Why...

He also engaged SACHIN and PURVI to get out Details about the College Bus as there Visit was Planned or just made Recent with Reason of that Journey either taking all CCTV Footages to Bureau...

while PUNKAJ and NIKHIL to move to Furniture Shop and taken out all Details about its Owner, Employees etc with a Common Order as He joins them at Bureau...

He look at Mr. PRABHAKER who was looking Restless and asking Him in Low shades as understand that they are Responsible for the whole as they all leave their Spot including Himself...

ACP: kitna Cash gaya hoga...?

Mr. PRABHAKER (rash): kyun kya ab Sarak pr bithanay ka Irada hay...

His Voice and Tone was so Pinching and Teasing... ACP really Composed Himself with Force not to create More in front of Media as now He had a Headache just thinking about How He would face HQ and all...

ACP (again): acha...

Mr. PRABHAKER (after a second): taqreebun 2 Crore... aaj sirf Recovery day tha aur Bank 2 bajay band bhi ho jata...

ACP Shocked, His Mouth was Opened, He can't believe the News as 2 Crores were Not a Small Amount and Lockers Jewellary, Documents are Separates from that... ABHIJEET who came inside just again comes in Feiry shade with...

ABHIJEET (feiry tone): tou pehlay Kyun aap nay Humein Nhai bataya kay aaj Recovery day tha... haan aur ye kay bank 2 bajay band ho jayey ga...

Mr. PRABHAKER: Humein laga kay aap ko malum hoga...

ABHIJEET (complete anger): kyun kya hum Paidaishi Banker hain... ain..

ACP (confuse shade): magar Mondy ko Recovery day aur bank Hours sirf 2 PM tak...?

Mr. PRABHAKER: aaj last Monday tha, Hr 3 months baad ka Last Monday yani teesray month ka Last Monday Hum Audit kartay hain, ta kay Apnay Final Audit ko Better maintain kr sakein...

ACP: kya ye State bank of India kay Rules hain...

Mr. PRABHAKER: Nahi Sir, magar Private Sector kay banks aksar Apni Achi karkardagi kay liyey Chotay motay apnay Rules follow kartay hain...

RAJAT: Wohi Main kahun kay Rush Hours Dophair 3 bajay kay baad honay chahyey aur hr koi aa kr Deposit hee kyun karwa raha hay aur Lockers ka bhi Yehi chakker ho ga tabhi Zyada Owners aaj aayey...

Mr. PRABHAKER (nodded in yes with): Jee haan.. is tarah Customers ka Account bhi maintain rehta hay aur ek dum Yearly Auditing mein Accounts Section pr Load Nahi parta...

ACP (low): acha.. Aap Humein Lockers ki jaankari kub tak dein gay...?

Mr. PRABHAKER: Kal tak... kyunkay itni jaldi batana namumkin hay kay kis Locker mein say kya Ghayeb hua hay... wesay Sub hee Lockers Open huay hain jo Khali bhi thy wo bhi...

ACP (nodded and to RAJAT): RAJAT, Reserve Forces kay jawanun ko Free kr do aur yahan Police ka Pehra lagwa do... (to Mr. PRABHAKER) bank filhaal Seal rahy ga, siwayey aap aur management Level kay Staff kay koi Employee ya Lower Staff aur Guards ander nahi ja saktay, kisi Cheez ko Chuyey ga nahi aur agar Yes tou Gloves kay sath...

Mr. PRABHAKER moved Head in Yes and now ACP leave from the bank from Empty hands and heart with ABHIJEET, FREDDIE and RAJAT...

Here CID team at Peak of Anger and Helplessness, The Journey ACP, ABHIJEET, FREDDIE and RAJAT travelled together was only dipped in Shame, Scare, Worry and Embarrassment...

ABHIJEET feels that His thought about Defeating that Betrayer was Hanged around His Neck and now thighting His Neck which Squeezing His Windpipe and He feels Troubling in Breathing...

He unintentionally starts Gasping and trying to gulp More Chilled Air inside INNOVA, ACP look at Him and His Gasping sound and spreading Palms over His Neck, ACP Shout...

ACP (shout): ABHIJEET... (touched him) Theek ho Tum...

ABHIJEET comes in Senses, He can't understand the Query or Words but the Touch played Well, here RAJAT also in Shame Shade that why they all turned to be Stupid...

They completely Forgets about the Robbery either it's their Duty to Cater that First although how many other Problems coming on their way...

ACP on the other side Quiets, He feels a Hard Pain inside His Heart, He tried to Relax His Emotions and gripped this Pain which Slowly Spreading inside His Body Main Organs...

They all reached at Bureau which sucks with Media ppl either ACP and ABHIJEET got some LOGO Tilt Glasses Big Vehicles meant, Some Officials also be there to Welcome them with Scolds, Shouts, Insult or Punishment... ACP wipes Sweat although this time He expected a Termination or Suspension Orders for Himself...

They move ahead after wiping the Rush, VIVEK joint inbetween and told about DCP CHITROLE presence as DIG after giving a Big Lecture to All those who presented there leave on an Urgent Call of Minister DESHMUKH RAO...

ACP takes a Sigh as Handling DCP is better than any Weird Order coming from DIG as in DIG Absence at least DCP did not take any Big Decision after that Past Experience where He demanded RESIGNATION from ACP PRADYUMAN which was turning a Wrong Decision from DCP and from that time, A New Circular after Rash Reaction coming from Different Cities Same Rank Officers, released from HQ that if there would be an Issue of Suspension/ Resignation/ Termination regarding any City ACP coming in future, it must be Handle Calmly and without Four Main Official Signature as ADC, DIG, Commissioner and DCP, No such Order should be Released or Demanded from the Person...

ACP, ABHIJEET, FREDDIE and RAJAT entered, look the Rest Officers Lined up and a Pinching Tone Welcome them with a Clap as...

DCP (with clap): Aao Aao... Chambal say ho aayey na... (tease) Kya Soch rahy thy DCP khush hoga... Shabashi day ga...

ACP moved down His Head while Others too to Hide their Smiles, DCP comes in More Anger as...

DCP (more anger): ACP PRADYUMAN, wo Kal Ka Larka... (tease) Tumharay hee haathun Pala Barha hay na...

ACP, ABHIJEET and RAJAT Shocked and Look at All in Question mode, SACHIN Headdown with Regret while DCP Shout...

DCP (shout): kya Apny Officers ko dekh rahy ho... Munh Band hee rakkha hay inhun nay... Wo tou Main hee Saheh Samy pr Pohanch gaya aur Bank ki Wo CCTV Footage dekh li... Dekho Dekho... Us Anath nay (ACP and ABHIJEET Heart still winced, they are really True Humans) (DCP added) kya Gul khilaya hay aur (to ACP) ye Khaber Ooper kyun Nahi ... Haaan...?!

ABHIJEET (protecting already tensed ACP with): Sir, Humein sirf Threat ki Information thi, Humein Nahi Malum tha Kay ye DAYA ya Us Ka Group karnay wala hay aur (little harsh) Aap nay TV Nahi dekha... Wahan kya kya hua hay...

DCP (rash Pinch): Tumharay Us Ladlay BHAI ki hee Karistani hay ye sub...

ABHIJEET (extreme rash): Nahi hay Wo Mera BHAI...

DCP look at Him and starting Laughing and exaggerated it minute after minute which raises the Rashness, Anger and Hurt inside ABHIJEET Heart, Before He comes Forward and Vanished that Teasing Laughing through clutching the source of that Exaggeration from His Both hands irrespective of further Result...

ACP Cell rang, He clutched ABHIJEET Wrist who comes in Pause and picked the Call Simultaneously...

DIG: PRADYUMAN...

ACP: Yes Sir...

His Tone, Respect shade told DCP and all that the Call from any official so DCP Laugh automatically lower down, ACP heard a Rash but Strong tone...

DIG (rash and strong): U have 72 hours ACP... Get and Bang that bas***d who did all that (ACP Relaxed as DIG did not know about the involvement of DAYA in it) (He heard DIG Angry Tone again) or Leave the Organization... hope U understand...

ACP (low tone): Yes Sir...

ACP put off Call and DCP Cell Buzzed, He got the Call and after say YES Leave the Bureau with giving Teasing Look to ABHIJEET and Whisper ACP when passing away from Him as...

DCP (teasing whisper): ACP, Jaany say Pehlay Apni Seat Kay Liyey Ek Naya Naam Soch Lena... Wesy Us Lollypop nay Mauqa ganwa diya... (low) hain na...

Before Exit, He picked a Writing Pad from RAJAT Desk and tearing a Plain Paper and tearing it More in Small Chits and Repeating a Same Dialogue with His Teasing tastebuds while looking at ABHIJEET with Smile as...

DCP (dialogue with tearing small chits of Plane paper): He is My Brother, He is not My Brother, He is My Brother, He is not My brother

just Tease and Hurt ABHIJEET with the Famous Dialogue of HE LOVES ME/HE LOVE ME NOT... ABHIJEET banged His Cell after His Exit and Kick the Chair which hit the Wall and makes a Big noise coming from Heart, Mouth or Soul..

SACHIN started to Work out and Playing the CCTV Footages before ACP Demand, they watched so many ppl in Mask or hopefully in Disguise... DAYA was there without much Changing on His Facial Look as already He was Seeing in French Beard and Heisal color lens so easily got by Everyone or said He did not bother about His Looking...

Team Anger, hatred Raises with the Teasing Movements as after Every Attempt like Opening Lockers, Pushing cash on sacks, Showing Jewellary, Beating Civilians, They comes First at CCTV camera Lense, Make a Pose with the MAAL and then back and the last WINK of DAYA Sprinkle the rashness more in Eveyone Hearts... PURVI started...

PURVI: Sir, NANDINI College ka Visit taqreebun 2 Haftay say Planned tha, Wo log kyunkay INTERNATINAL RELATIONS (IR) Subject ko as Subsidory parhtay hain tou Teachers nay Un Logun ko Foreign Affairs kay Kaam ko Achi tarah samjhnay kay liyey Foreign Office kay Visit ka Plan banaya tha...

SACHIN: Buses bhi 2 din Pehlay Hire kr li gayii theen.. yahan tak kay Drivers kay Id's aur Buses kay Licsence bhi Check huay thay, Trip say pehlay...

ACP Nodded in Yes and turn towards SHERYA and VIVEK who started their piece of Information as...

SHERYA: Sir, Minister DESHMUKH RAO ka Visit bhi per planned tha, matlab 2 din pehlay Unhun nay ye Visir Plan kiya tha...

ABHIJEET (still Quiet but ask in sad shade): kya Official Visit tha...?

SHERYA: nahi Sir, ye Personal Visit tha... British Foreign Office kay Diplomat MR. MICHEAL GARDER kay sath ek aam sii Mulaqat thi, kyunaky wo abhi 3 haftay pehlay appoint huay hain yahan...

VIVEK (added): Sir, Un ka Route Plan bhi Same hee tha, Us mein koi Change Nahi aaya tha...

ACP again nodded in Yes and now turn lastly towards NIKHIL and PUNKAJ while VINEET was at Hospital for Formulities or taking the Information about the Injured with their wareabouts...

PUNKAJ: Sir, Us Furniture Shop ka malik koi HUSSAIN VOHRA hay... Us ki Mumbai mein 8 Furniture ki Outlets hain...

NIKHIL: Sir, wesay Zyada Nuqsan nahi hua hay kyunkay Furniture Outlet Renovation pr Kaam kr raha tha aur wahan Saman wesay hee Kum tha...

VINEET entered in Hurry and gave the File at ABHIJEET hand with a List of All Injured and their wareabouts and their Current Health situation with their wards and all... RAJAT asked in Confuse tone...

RAJAT (in confusion): Tum jaldi aa gayey VINEET..?

VINEET (tense): Sir Media aur Public Dono CID say Buht Khafa hain (all Officers takes Sigh) (VINEET again) isi liyey Main jaldi nikla aaya (ACP nodded in Yes to Like His Decision) (VINEET added) Sir, Furniture Outlet mein Short Circuit say 3 Log Zakhmi huay hain, Zakham itnay Gehray nahi, Un ko Treatment kay baad Ghar bhej diya hay... Zyada Log Dhuwen aur EarthQuick kay Khauf kay karan zakhmi huay thy, Un mein say bhi aadhy Ghar bhej diyey gayey hain...

ABHIJEET: aur College Students.?

VINEET: Sir, College Bus kay Accident mein kuch Chotein lagi hain Students ko, Magar mamuli... Un ko bhi Free kr diya hay, magar haan bank kay Wo Emplyee aur Civilian bhi jo Ghalati say Bank kay ander panah lenay gayey thy aur DAYA Sii... (changes instantly) Matlab Churun kay hatthy carhy wo thora Zyada Zakhmi hain aur Abhi bhi Admit hain...

RAJAT: Foreign Office ka tou koi zakhmi Nahi hua na...?

VINEET: Nahi Sir, bus Minister DESHMUKH RAO ka Ek Security Guard zakhmi hua hay aur...

ABHIJEET (cutting in anger): Us nay Hospital Sar pr Utha liya hoga...

VINEET (irritative tone): Jee Sir...

ACP (after hearing all): aakhir Hum ye Bhool Kesay gayey kay Wo na sirf Humaray Dil kay qareeb hay, balkay Dimaghun kay bhi...

ABHIJEET (harsh): koi Qareeb wareeb Nahi hay Wo Sir... Wo bus is Qabil hay kay Us kay Dil ko Rond daala jayey... Humaray Pyar, Maan aur Wishwaas ko jis tarah Toura, Us ki Dhajjiyaan ura dein aur ab...

Bureau Landline Started Ringing... All Look at the Clock First showing 06:00 PM and then Phone Set... ABHIJEET moves and ON the SPEAKER with a Rash tone...

ABHIJEET (rash): Bol Kameenay... ab kya bolna hay...

DAYA (singing with High Nodes): Aagy nikl aayey Hum, TUM peechay reh gayey

Ooper chaly aayey Hum, TUM Neechy reh gayey

TUM Hum say Haar gayey

Hum Baazi Maar gayey...

TUM nay dekha Zara...

Kis mein kitna tha Dam

Jum kr rakhtay Qadam

Mery Saathiyaaa...

It's the moment where ABHIJEET Hurt His Heart and Tearing it in Layers with this Teasing and Pinching Tone Delibrately... The Song gives the shades of Happiness, Smile, Victory everything... ACP coming ahead and DISCONNECT the Line instantly...

ABHIJEET eye falls Some Tears which stayed at Desk and Phone Set as Drops of Pain and leave the Bureau in Seconds...

Here after dealing with Minister DESHMUKH RAO who created Fuss as His One Body Guard was Injured on that Incident, He call out a Press Conference and give all the Responsibility of it on CID and Police Force and said...

Minister DESHMUKH RAO: Ye sub Apposition ki Sazish hay aur CID nay bhi un Ka hee sath diya hay... Govt ko Apna Kaam Na karnay deny Kay Liyey Apposition aisay Plan Sarkari Karamchariyun ki Madad say banati hay...

SALUNKHY entered and Switched On the TV... All watching this Senseless Press Conference at Bureau and ABHIJEET expelled out His Anger...

ABHIJEET: sub sub... Us Kameenay (now He mostly used Abusive Words for DAYA) Kay Karan hua hay... Kitna Pyaar aur Samman diya, Usy is CID nay, Hum nay... arry Kaun Pehchanta Usy... agar CID Nahi hoti Us Kay sath... (extreme rash tone) DAYA Tu Soch Nahi Sakta, Tu Kitna Gir chuka hay...

SACHIN (slow tone): Sir, Hum nay Apni taraf say tou hr Point dekha tha...

ABHIJEET (shout): haan Andhun ki tarah na... Kesay Bhool gayey Hum wo waqt jub Yehi Kameena Humein Inspector SAMAR ban kr Pagal banata raha... Humaray Jazbun say Khelta raha...

FREDDIE (sad tone): aur Wo Drug Treatment, kya Nahi kiya Hum sub nay aur ABHIJEET Sir nay...

ACP (hate tone): is Qabil he Nahi tha Wo... Wo tou Hum hee Log Us Kay Pyar mein Andhy ho gayey thy...

FREDDIE (rash): tou kisi ko kya Malum tha Kay wo Pyar ki Aarh mein itna Bara Waar kr dein gay...

RAJAT (low): Hum nay itna Socha hee Nahi tha kay Wo Bahar Say itna Panic Create Karen gay Kay Hum Ander Ka Haal hee Bhool jayein gay...

VIVEK (straight tone): Achi Chaal chali hay...

SALUNKHY (praise): haan khair, Chaal tou Us nay Buht Achi chali hay... Kya Hum mein say koi kabhi Soch sakta tha kay DAYA, wo Masoom, Bacchun jesa, Naram Dil ka DAYA, yun KANS ban kr bhi Humein dikha sakta hay...

ABHIJEET: haan Sir, 16 Saal ky Career mein DAYA nay Buht Kum Plan Khud banayey (brief) aur jo bhi Banayey, Un mein Us ki Saheta kabhi Main nay, kabhi ACP Sir, kabhi Team, yahan tak kay kabhi IB tou kabhi CBI aur ATS nay ki... yahan tak kay kuch Jaghun pr Us nay RAHUL ki bhi Madad li... pr yahan...

ACP (giving output): Yahan Us nay Un 16 Saalun mein Jo Seekh Hum sub say lii... Usy Kaam mein lay liya...

ABHIJEET: haan aur Hum (angry on Himself) Bewakoofun ki tarah Usy wohi Pait mein Dimagh rakhnay wala DAYA samjhtay rahy...

SALUNKHY (sigh): Saheh Jagah laga liya hay DAYA nay Apna Dimagh Apnay Pait say Nikaal kay...

ACP (difficult tone): aur Ye bhi bata diya hay kay Wo Dimagh CID ko Buht Tough Fight day ga...

ABHIJEET (rash): Sir, Hum bhi Kum Nahi hain...

ACP (look at Him): Usy bhi Kum Mut samjho... (remembering NAKUL and say) jub koi Shakas Ghalat Raahun pe Aik baar Nikl jayey aur Usy hee Apni Manzil samjh lay... Wo Desh aur Dil (teary voice) Dono ki Dewarun ko Hila deta hay...

SALUNKHY: ab ACP, bhala Humein kya malum tha kay DAYA Aisa Waar karay ga... itna Ghinaouna Chehra Humaray saamny layey ga...

NIKHIL (complete hatred): aur kya Sir, Ab Hum logun nya tou Kabhi kisi Kay Peeth mein CHURA Ghunpa Nahi hay, bhala Humein kya Malum hoga...

PUNKAJ (added): aur Hum Anath bhi Nahi...

VINEET (harsh): Na Kisi Orphanage ki Paidawaar, Jahan shayed Bachpan say Mujrimana Zehniyet hoti hay...

SHERYA (hate): tabhi tou Dimagh Hr Aspect pr Daur raha hay aur Kaam kr raha hy...

PURVI (justified): pr Koshish tou thi na Humari...

ABHIJEET (deniying in loud tone): Na koi Koshish, Na Ihsaas... Us nay Sirf Humari Aadatun ko Samjha, Hum kis Situation mein kya React Karen gay... Sub...

RAJAT (adds): isi liyey shayed Buht Saaray Hadsaat ko Aik sath Plant kiya aur Open bhi...

ACP (composed but with hate): kyunkay Hum Bhool gayey Kay Wo Humaray Hee haathun Pala Barha hay... akhir Hum Bhool hee kesay gayey... (harsh) 16 Saal Us nay Humari Ik Ik Aadat pr Nazar rakkhi... Humaray Dilun mein Apnay Wishwaas Ka Aisa Beej Boya Kay Hum Jahan DAYA, wahein chal paray... Kuch Socha Nahi, Jana Nahi, dekha Nahi...

ABHIJEET (rash): Sir Hum Bhool Gayey Kay Muqabla Kisi (pressing teeth) Parayey say Nahi Buht Apnay say hay...

ACP (angry): haan ABHIJEET, buht Apny say... Jo Na sirf Humein pehchanta hay, balkay Humein jaanta bhi hay... yahan baat Ghundun aur Police ki Nahi, CID Vs CID ki hay..

ABHIJEET: aur Ye Jung Dimagh say Nahi Balkay DIL aur Jazby say Jeeti Ja sakti hay...

FREDDIE: wo Kesy Sir..?

ABHIJEET (smily tone as He imagined DAYA Irritation): FREDDIE, Aik Akela kehty hain 11 kay Barabar hota hay tou Hum 12 log kya 120 Kay Barabar Nahi... (challaenge) Ab dekhtay hain, Aik Dimagh aur DIL ko jub 12 Dimagh aur DIL mil kr Kuchaltay hain tou kesa lagay ga DAYA ko... (look at all with unknown strength) Acha tou Nhai lagay ga na...

He forward His Palm and 10 More Palms makes it 11 which He completed after placing His another Palm regarding RAHUL Ones...

DAYA Surprised that JAGYA mostly Divided the Money to His Mens which was really a Shocking matter but What matter as DAYA got His Share which was 25 Lacs, Not a Small Money for DAYA without Much Effort...

He remembered the Amount He got from CID per Month after giving Life in Danger is 205000 Less so Who cares... He was really Happy either JAGYA only got the Diamonds and a Document in a Black Leather File which was Sealed...

CID sharp their Brains and Knot their Hearts and the Focusing point was only One, DEFEAT DAYA at any Cost by Every Chance...

Here ACP ordered to move to their Houses and take a Rest as from Tomorrow Morning they will Not have a Break of Sigh as Minimum Hours left in 72 Hours...

All understands so just expelling Anger Themselves, feeling Rash and Helpless condition after Reminding the Morning till Afternoon Session move to their Houses...

RAHUL obviously knew Everything except that the Robbery was done by DAYA and His Group as Bank Team, DCP and CID Hide this Main Point after finding Extreme Rash and Panic in the City...

Media was little Tightens to Lower Down the Incident as after Students Injury, People Anger was More than anything else...

RAHUL heard DAYA Rash Voice, Calling ACP Sir with His Name, the MANSIC ROGI term which always pinch His Heart too which DAYA used for ABHIJEET, so entered, snatched the Cell from ABHIJEET hands and say after throwing it on Bed in Switch Off mode with...

RAHUL (harsh): Kyun khud ko Takleef detay ho... Haan... Kyun... Hr baar hr baar... Kya Suntay ho... Kya Lafz Badal jayein gay... Kya baar baar chalny say Nafrat Muhabbat ka Roop Badal lay gi...

ABHIJEET (Teary tone): Main Khud ko Himmat dilata Hun... Hr baar ye Dekh aur Sun kr Kay agar Kal DAYA Meray Saamny aa jayey tou Usy Shoot kartay huay Meray Hath Na Kaanpy... (more tears) Jesy ACP Sir Kay Nahi Kaanpy thy NAKUL ko Maartay huay...

Main Khud ko Josh dilata Hun Kay Kal Meray liyey bhi Desh ihmiyet rakkhy, DAYA Nahi... Pr hr baar... Hr Baar ... Wo Juri Himmat Najany... (RAHUL Half Hugged Him after sitting on Bed and ABHIJEET added in tears) kahan Kho jati hay RAHUL...

Aaj bhi Hr Baar Usy Gali detay... Kosty... Bura Bhala kehty... Yahan tak Kay Sub Kay Munh say Us Kay Liyey ANATH, GHADDAR jesay Lafz Suntay... Mujhy Utna hee Dard hota hay... Utni hee Cubhan hoti hay... DIL Karta hay kehnay Waly Ka Munh tour dun...

Yaar Main buht Koshish Karta Hun... Pr... Pr ... Mujhy Us say Nafrat Nahi hoti ... (helpless cry) Mujhy Wo Aaj bhi Yaad aata hay... Buht... Aaj bhi Meray DIL mein Us Kay Liyey Dhairun Muhabbatein hain...

RAHUL just Rubbing His Palm on ABHIJEET arm, He also has the Same Feelings either after TAREEKA Incident, He really wanted to give DAYA a Big Punishment but Somehow after the Passage of Time, the Anger automatically Lower down, Minimum it's Peak... Why...!

ABHIJEET (again): Pata Nahi yaar (He standup and say in tears) Main kis say Ghaddari kr raha hun, Apni Duty say, Desh say, Un Masoom logun say, Apni Team say, Apnay Head say ya shayed (moving out in whisper) Apnay DIL say...

RAHUL sat Standstill... He does not have a Courage to move behind Him, Relaxses Him, try to Denied His Every Word... He remembers Last Night..

He came inside, AMAN already Released and now at Home but He was so Quiet, just doing His Work... RAHUL found Him in Sleeping so arranged His Books which were Spreading over Bed and found Some Small but Special Surprises for the Man who Forgets all Pure Love and Affection...

He found a Drawing having A Boy at the left with title BHAYA, He knew MISHA called BHAYA to AMAN, and a Small Kid in Frock at Left with Title MISHO as AMAN calling Her MISHO rather MISHA and in Middle a Gentle Giant with His Lovely Smile with a Title as DAYA BHAYYA/BARAY WALY UNCLE...

Might be MISHA trying to express the Emotion that It's the Combine Effort of Both as AMAN and MISHA with a Big Heading as WE MISS YOU...

He really don't know what to say, He never talked about that issue to AMAN as He knew AMAN is Not a Small Kid, He is a College going Student who Familiarize with Media and all either in touch with Social Media too...

He also knew that MISHA is Not much know about this, VIVEK only told Her that DUO on Some Training Session, that's why She was Not Coming to Bureau too...

She was too Excited for their Arrival as She has a Big Surprise to Share with them especially with Her Baray Waly Uncle as She joint a School for Special Kids...

RAHUL does not know what to say to these Small Angels and their Strong Thoughts either now He is thinking Does He have Something to say after hearing ABHIJEET comments...

Next Morning started with a New Energy as All Flushes Out All the Lovely Tears from that Man and now the Man named DAYA does not any Relation with Him either Not in Present or Future... they tried to Faded Out their Past to Some extent which gives a Better Result...

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Hope u guys like this part... Give ur precious feedback 😊.. we both are eager to know abt this... Defiantly I will say something abt this...😆😆 here we tries to write/Plan really something different then we done before😳...In this story a very different DAYA we presented...A really different try...it was mine wish only to present him like this...And GD says Yes to me...Thanks to her ...😃 And Thanks to All of u too that u are like our combine production...😊😊😊
One request plz read this story after leaving ur comfort zone😉 warna huma mat kahna pehla nae bola😉😆😆 its creation of both..but defiantly mostly Situations and scenes are decided by me so if u don't like those things so its not related to GD only... and abt story line guys we worked a lot on it...Plz say something abt that as well😳😳😳 not work only, so many fights as well😛😉 u know ur Dada is very😉😉😉... ...🤬🤣
Chlu jaldi jaldi paro...And Tareef ka Pul bando😛😆😆
Edited by neeme - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rosepink.

are haan yaar evn i m missing my FBs, but kya karu fursat hi nhi milti..sochti hu ab dungi, tab dungi bt possible hi nhi hota aaj kal..
aur apne purane style wala FB to ab purana hi reh gaya cz nw i jst dnt get a chance to do that..
nyways great masterpiece by both..👏

Dada ka tou pata nahi 😉😉 but I miss your old style FB so much Rosy di ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sonali di actually reading Dada's reply on your review I just wanted to say the things you told..thought after checking other pages to post..but found you already explained the matter to Dada 😆.
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Posted: 11 years ago
ZOR KA JHTKAAA🤢
uff bank b loot liya😲


Neeme di and GD plot and execution is great as always👏👏👏 aap ki jitni b tareef ki jae kam hai u r just kamaal👏

Seriously m totally blank not a single guess that what is going to happen next😕
waiting for next part till than a big round of applause 👏


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