Hr Zulm...!(New Experimental VM @PG 139) - Page 52

Originally posted by: DUOlover123

Awww...superb bhaijaan..
do one thing.. now make a new dictionary of praising words asap..
Because now I feel awkward while using same old words while reviewing..
This chapter was again mind blowing.. I really loved how you mingled both the scenes.. like at one time you showed Daya's planning and at the other time you showed the planning of the team.. really really impressive..
Loved the whole robbery session.. Wow.. Daya's super cool nature was really great..
And his call.. awww.. hahaha.. but Badey bhai is really hurt.. each and every talk of him with Rahul was really true.. they all are unable to forget Daya.. they are unable to throw him out from their hearts...
While Daya is having a fun time...!! that's really saddening.
Now please kb end hoga ye jhatka session.. stop grilling na.. bht ho gaya.. every part gives me new shocks..
Bhai's collision with Badey bhai.. I literally stopped and read that line twice.. at one moment I thought that maybe Bhai will stop there.. but nay.. seems like a Satan is into him...
Badey Bhai listening to that recording..!! that was truely hurting Bhaijaan..
@Neeme di kya di aap ko bhi kya ho jata h.. kb khatam krne ka irada h ise.. ya mujhe hi khatam krna h??
This is most shocking story of the combine production I have ever read..
Though every story was really good.. but this one is the most shocking, unique.. and what not..
Now Bhaijaan khatam karen ye zulm.. aur qatilana hamley..
chalen loads of hugs to you..
Update soon..!!
bht bada review hogaya na.. [:-P]

Originally posted by: anjaan_anjaani

first of all sorry for the late reply. Today i read all 4 parts. Amazing dada and neemedidi. dayas new avtar was mindblowing. I loved seeing him this was. One question in the first part you show that daya raise his hand to slap abhijeet but didnt actually slap him. Is that because he still have some respect towards him or what?? Please post next part soon warna heart attack hojayega.

thank you soo much for your effort and work...a big 🤗 for both of you

Originally posted by: .Nishi.

Amazing dada and neeme ⭐️😃
Daya's new avtar was just mindblowing. Waiting 4 happy ending.

Originally posted by: neeme

When I start reading this FB I was like 🥺🥺Mera name he nae... Scene tu mera he tha... 😭But later I read my name so pata laga nae mera zinkar b ha😆😆Jald he irada han dear Khtam karna ka... Let's see... And Thank You so muchfor liking it... 🤗

Originally posted by: Soni.

Really, really sorry GD. Its been a long time and haven't reviewed your story yet. Extremely sorry!

17520 hours

GD another superb masterpiece by you. Amazingly written. I am crying while writing this. Classic, Superb, Outstanding, marvelous and what not!!. GD do you seriously have magic in your hands. I would have definitely loved to see this in serial. What a beautiful way you wrote about what might have happen in those 2 years.. what all thoughts were running in Daya sir's mind... seeing his senior kidnapped infront of his eyes and how he couldn't do anything. I could seriouly feel his pain it was heart wentching. Freddy andSudhakar's talks about Daya sir being so emotional was lovely...I could visualise there talk. I seriouly loved the part where Acp sir tried to make him understand...all were concerned for both of the officers...!!!felt really bad seeing Daya sir in pain till the time Abhi sir was not found and with him. I am so glad that he could share his pain with a friend like Rahul. What a wonderful way to connect another story to yours.We finally found out the reason on how his 1/3rd of salary started landing in Abhi sir's account. They way he protrayed the beautiful journey was simply classic. Amazing way to refresh thier friendship once again. awesome!!! their scenes were truly heart touching and lovely...amazing..!! Overall another superb story. Innovative concept. I just loved this and also you GD!!!

Will read The Darkest hours soon GD
Sorry again for delay

Originally posted by: pinky118

kya dada aur neeme..kya bana dia hai aap ne Daya sir ko...Daya sir singing ...i really cant belive tht Daya sir can b such irrespective in case of any lady... 😡 is he really my Daya sir or any behrupiya???the story was awesome 👍🏼 i loved it ❤️ buht ho gya suspence yaar ab jaldi next dhamaka karo..

Originally posted by: neeme

Yani tu hum chata tha😉To show Daya's sharp mind I want to show that... Ab ko robbery pasand Hum kush howa😈 Thank you thank youExactly 😉Yap that is also new shade of him...First time we showed him as a very calm and cool person.. We want to show him as a winner in this robbery..For such kind of plan a calm and cool attitude is very necessary... A Great COP as a Criminal..what he can do... we want to show that as well in this story... That's the best thing everYap thora sa wait aur😉😉 44000 V ka jhatka 😈..mujhe nahi lagne wala. I am Angel na 😉Yes ..That is Really a natural reaction... Applause for GD👏👏Thori si mera lye b 👏😆 Bilkul bilkul 👏Ayeee ...🤬😈 Main samjhi nahi.. Aap naraz ho gaye di yaa phir happy like a devil 😉

Bas kar do Thak jaio ge 😆😆We have criminals mind.😈..we will never stop😆😆 Me too have the same 😈. Don't worry😆. I pray to almighty you never stop.Research work credit goes to GD 👍🏼Arre Parise karo...Aur karo ...u don't know how much Hard work is there... I mostly karch my demag in making over all story.Scenes, Emotions and Character's role... As a Plot maker that is in my hand... Abt Investigation and research this is in GD's hand..Then Over discussions, changes And fights on everything..OH... these are too much... Har cheez main aik sath chalna is not an easy thing..In sab ka bad he we present it in front of u all... When u guys like it... So thora lagta hai we did something gud finally...😳😳 Yes di, I understand.. Its not only good, its MASTERPIECE ⭐️.. How much we praise that's nothing compared to ur hard work.. Such love and dedication is unmatchable.. Writing singlly is one thing and joint execution is other, about giving long feedback.. Its a very small thing..if you can entertain us with such masterpiece can't I do so little? Nothing can match ur hard work.
[DIV]Hahaha... Main na b rae tu App ka DADA jo kuch b hon ga wo meri he waja sa hon ga... 😉

[DIV]It's a complete name..i heard in so many films... I really don't know about it.. Khair, important is minister not his name 😉. Btw, Aur kitna intezaar karna baki hai😉? Intehaan ho gayi intezar ki 😈.

Originally posted by: DUOlover123

Areyyy awww.. Scene aapka h to tareef bhi to ki h na.. Aap indirect way me shamil hn bhayii... kamal kiya aap ne..😆
chalen bht bht shukriya scene ke liye.. i know the whole plot is planned by you.. Bechare bhaijaan ne to sirf likkha h... bsss..😉
Especial thanks to you..
Ye raha mera hug.. 🤗
Ab dil ko jod leeje fevicol se..

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES