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rosepink

@rosepink.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

y daxa dint accept d baby?
i didnt lyk d climax
it was hurting
rest was mindblowng
tmhara fb mujh pe udhar h
il try to pay off..soon😊

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: KS_Shreya
Downloaded it. Will read it tomorrow on the bus. 😉

awww dekho kahein parhnay mein apna Stop na Miss kr dena...😆

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-SNEHAL-

@-SNEHAL-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

I am in dilemma should i read it now or day after tomorrow.. Will it made me cry GD?

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Parul

@..Candy..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

I am short of words dada...
LAJAWAB...bas yhi keh skti hu iss story ke liye..
Such a awesum combo of emotions..LOVVED it truely..❤️❤️
My heads off to u dada...

Thanks fr posting Such a wonderful story..
Lovvve you so so so vry much🤗🤗
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🤗🤗
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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: DUOlover123
WHAT IS THISSS...!! 😲
Dada am unable to write what I felt after reading this part. Your stories are getting more emotional and mentally more torturous with the passage of time.
I cried after every memory..
This is not a last part of the story... this is definately a new beggining.. you flash backed every DUO moment in front of our eyes..
Everything was perfect. The way you started this part I felt at one point that Daya will be alright..
But then when that parcel brought the resignation letter and all that was really shocking.. I literally read that part for two times to understand what just happened.
The ACP-Daya talk was really mind blasting. At one hand he cleared all the points and doubts and on the other hand he told Daya, the mental state of Abhijeet.
Then the life of this story begins... I whole heartedly loved and appriciated how you showed us all the things.. at one place Daya and at the other place Abhijeet.. both lost in their pasts.. This is really unique.. i can watch it in front of my eyes.
and then how Abhijeet was relaxed after seeing the face he wanted to see.. and his sentance while opening this door.. all this was just wow..
The epilogue was quite amazing.. but I cried after seeing 2015 .. don't know why..
You are seriously an amazing author Dada.. May God grant you loads of success..
Just a little confsion. ...
That mother threw the baby into the garbage but why she wanted him back afterwards. Or if the father was not agreeing to keep thr baby at first then why in the later future he agreed to take him... As why the mother threw him into the garbage at the first place..
And after throwing him why she wanted to take him back wo bhi itne months baad.
Maybe you told it in the story and i missed that part. but can you please clarify this to me.

Am done with my rview... and again a big one..
Is me mera koi qusoor nahi h dada...😆The story is mind blowing.

A Bundles of Thank you BHALOO for such a Long and Lovely Feedback which obviously increases my Blood Volume with Happiness...🤗

Yes I really enjoyed that PAST RIDE either I did not include all Episode but some which are Memoriable and where DUO were Together and had any emotional Connection...😳😳

Yes, I wanted that Epilogue and 2015 Era either I included it at last moment, dunt know why...😕

About Ur Confusion, 😕

I just point out that Sometime we took Decision Drastically, in Hurry and in Tension... the Parent spend sometime but without thinking about the Further Consequences and after knowing about it, the basic thinking how they face society, their families will bear so much, how much this effect on them, their jobs, Circle, Family and Society and bla bla...😭😭

if they have the Guts so its their Responsibility to Tackle the Situation with Courage and Boss why they make such Relations in that way which always be giving such Difficulties either they will make it in Proper way...😊

About that Mother, they backed as Mother have some Complications and She knew that they will not get a baby in Future so thatswhy they backed, She threw it and thats my point why She threw it on that Site, Sorry baccha, the Incident based on Real so I cannot know Why She did that so Leave that Section as it really painful to Justified it...😭😭

I already Cleared it and I think U missed it in Part One where ACP Sir and ABHIJEET Sir told DAYA Sir about NAKUL Parents arrival and Demand...😊

Thank you One again Bhaloo Baccha...🤗

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: snehal.
I am in dilemma should i read it now or day after tomorrow.. Will it made me cry GD?

Boss, Main tou Buht Roya hun😭 ... aap agar thoray Mazboot ho tou shayed Bardasht kr lo...😊

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Awesome Story !!!

Tons of Thank You...🤗

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-SNEHAL-

@-SNEHAL-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Boss, Main tou Buht Roya hun😭 ... aap agar thoray Mazboot ho tou shayed Bardasht kr lo...😊

kal raksha bandhan hai naa toh rakhi bandhne ke baad majboot hoti hun aur phir padhungi.. Promise 😃

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: rosepink.
y daxa dint accept d baby?
i didnt lyk d climax
it was hurting
rest was mindblowng
tmhara fb mujh pe udhar h
il try to pay off..soon😊

According to IPC Section-317...

Section 317 of the Indian Penal Code provides that ''Exposure and abandonment of child under twelve years, by parent or person having care of it:- Whoever being the father or mother of a child under the age of twelve years, or having the care of such child, shall expose or leave such child in any place with the intention of wholly abandoning such child, shall be punished with imprisonment of either description for a term which may extend to seven years, or with fine, or with both.

Generally the father is the natural guardian of the child and the mother's status is only after that of the father.

Here I already put that Point after SHREELA Raise (Thank you KD) that Court Fined the parents and the Parents were Outside on Bail and the Parents wanted to accept Him with Will and they have in Good State to Bring their Kid with Ease so DAYA Sir automatically moved out, here I did not tell that there was No Grand Family of NAKUL, might be they presented themselves to take care till the Parent Back after their Trail or Suspension of that Bail...

I am extremelly Sorry that the Climax was Not upto the Mark according to U but Yaar its Reality na, I know its Hurt but its Truth also...😭

Thank you so much GUY for Ur Feedback...🤗