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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: ..Candy..
I am short of words dada...
LAJAWAB...bas yhi keh skti hu iss story ke liye..
Such a awesum combo of emotions..LOVVED it truely..❤️❤️
My heads off to u dada...

Thanks fr posting Such a wonderful story..
Lovvve you so so so vry much🤗🤗
🤗🤗
🤗🤗
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Awww Meray Chotay Gudday ko itna Acha laga Parh kr...😳😳

I feel Ur Hugs, they are Smooth, Soft, Tight and with Lods of Love and Care...🤗

Thank You Baccha...🤗

I tried to Point Out a Sensitive Issue and just Hope that any Person take a Small Message from it and Propagate too...😳😊

Thank You so much Chota Gudda...🤗

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ControlledChaos

@ControlledChaos

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Thanks Dada for removing the confusion.. Yeah I think I missed that part..
Anyways thanx for tthe story..😊

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Reshma

@Reshh16

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

What yar GD...!!!

Kitna dard..!!! 😭... The ACP-DAYA talk was heart wrenching but mindblowing...!!! The trauma of both DAYA AND ABHIJEET was traumatizing for me...😭😭...

The best part of the story was the diary and articles...All the moments.. those lovely moments flashed past my eyes as i was reading it...👏👏.. The pain at seeing few incidents was so painful.... It is seriously your choice of words that inflicts this pain...😭the way he cries out to DAYA after seeing everything was most painful for me...😭 That is the part that afflicted me most...😭

The climax... Yaar... Kitni khushi... my tears were uncontrollable now...😭(khushi ki re)..The hug which was a mixture of happiness, pain, hurt and love was OUT OF THE WORLD yaar...👏.. I became out of countrol..😭OMG.. The sentence that ABHI utters to DAYA...👏👏.. The happiness with which he bounces up earlier on hearing the doorbell...👏👏👏

The 2015 part was emotional, touching and superb...!! 👏👏👏

The writer aspect is touching and whatever you said is cent percent true...!!! 👏

My heart is heavy after reading this.. And HATS OFF TO YOU for giving us such a wonderful, touching and a true-life story to reflect on...!!1 🤗 🤗🤗 🤗

YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER...!!! 👏👏

So here ends my short review...😉😊

Edited by Raaz_sweet - 12 years ago

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@ANGELICEYES

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

So sorry Dada..exam is going to start.. I will be off for more than a week.. So read the last part in hurry.. Can't give a detailed review.. Many biggy tight huggies to you🤗🤗🤗... Hope ur shoulders absorbs my tears 😭 😭.. Mine has absorbed yours too..The story is simply OUTSTANDING⭐️⭐️⭐️.. God bless you🤗🤗🤗.

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saba yaqoob

@duoa

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

wow simply awesome dada

m speechless

just amazing very emotional😭😭

Edited by duoa - 12 years ago

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pinky118

@pinky118

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Awesome Dada...Hats off to u👏

so emotional story😭

the all scenes of DUO was in front of my eyes...

By the way Dada the dec 2012 part was from which episode???

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@.KupKakes

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

wowieee awesome story GD

srsly luv it

how well u write!👏👏

N I was crying reading d story...😭😭

but wowie GD⭐️⭐️👏👏

M SPEECHLESS!!!

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Forfriend

@Forfriend

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

BH

Iss bar sach me aapne kamal kar diya...

dard dard ka aahaisas bhaiyo ka pyaar fir pachatawa... sab kuch bohot hi khubi se likha

or her story ki tarah end me sab kuch fin nahi kiya yeh bhi sarahniy bat kar di...

acha laga ki Daya ke dil me woh dard aapne rakh diya... per uss dard ke sath hi daya ki wapas karwadi...

her bar her ek gum ko uhh dil se nikal na possible nahi hota...

kayi bar koi bat dil me aaise chubati hai ki ussaka asar puri jindgi reh jata hai

daya ne sambhal ke raki hue chije or Abhijeet ki diary

OMG sab purane ache lamho ki yaad dila di

thank you BH 🤗

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: Raaz_sweet
What yar GD...!!!

Kitna dard..!!! 😭... The ACP-DAYA talk was heart wrenching but mindblowing...!!! The trauma of both DAYA AND ABHIJEET was traumatizing for me...😭😭...
The best part of the story was the diary and articles...All the moments.. those lovely moments flashed past my eyes as i was reading it...👏👏.. The pain at seeing few incidents was so painful.... It is seriously your choice of words that inflicts this pain...😭the way he cries out to DAYA after seeing everything was most painful for me...😭 That is the part that afflicted me most...😭
The climax... Yaar... Kitni khushi... my tears were uncontrollable now...😭(khushi ki re)..The hug which was a mixture of happiness, pain, hurt and love was OUT OF THE WORLD yaar...👏.. I became out of countrol..😭OMG.. The sentence that ABHI utters to DAYA...👏👏.. The happiness with which he bounces up earlier on hearing the doorbell...👏👏👏
The 2015 part was emotional, touching and superb...!! 👏👏👏
The writer aspect is touching and whatever you said is cent percent true...!!! 👏
My heart is heavy after reading this.. And HATS OFF TO YOU for giving us such a wonderful, touching and a true-life story to reflect on...!!1 🤗 🤗🤗 🤗

YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER...!!! 👏👏

So here ends my short review...😉😊

😆 Everyone Not so Chaper Chaper like Me na...😉

Yes RAAZ Baccha, after Long time, My Heart Brutally Hurted and after little Soothing to get the Courage😳, I started to Write and u can't Believe that I wrote 53 Pages in just Few Hours as I just wanted to Expel My pain, Anger, Hurt, Helplessness and Wrenching...😭😭😭

It was One of the Story Which Cried Me alot...😭😭😭

Its Every Word engulfed in My Tear...😭😭

Thank you so much that U like it, U feel it and Expressed it...👏😳👏

I really feel Myself JAWAN after Reading Ur's and Other Feedback...🤗

Thank you so much RAAZ Baccha...🤗

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES
So sorry Dada..exam is going to start.. I will be off for more than a week.. So read the last part in hurry.. Can't give a detailed review.. Many biggy tight huggies to you🤗🤗🤗... Hope ur shoulders absorbs my tears 😭 😭.. Mine has absorbed yours too..The story is simply OUTSTANDING⭐️⭐️⭐️.. God bless you🤗🤗🤗.

OML! Baccha Story kahein Bhagi ja rahi thi Kya...😲

Pehlay Story, Later Story...😃

Theek hay...👍🏼

Yes I placed a Big Towel on my Shoulder which Absorb Ur Precious Tears😳😳😳 while I Sqeeze My Nose on it...😉😆

U know about POPAT Naak na...😈

Thank You so much ANGEL EYES Baccha...🤗