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Originally posted by: shreela

Interesting plot and very well-written GD.😊 but there are two things, I did not understand.

1st thing is, if Nakul is an unwanted child, then who are the people claiming to be his parents? I mean, I understand about the mother, but what about her husband? if he is not the biological father, and that's why did not accept the kid, then why now? actually it would be nice if you give a bit details of their story.

second thing is, whatever they did, is a criminal offence, no matter under what circumstances. if they did not want the baby, they could put him up for adoption. but abandonment of a 10 day's old baby in garbage, would surely cause his death, if Daya did not rescue him. According to sec- 317 of Indian Penal Code, whoever being the father or mother of a child under the age of twelve years, or having the care of such child, shall expose or leave such child in any place with the intention of wholly abandoning such child, shall be punished with imprisonment of either description for a term which may extend to seven years, or fine, or with both.

so, being the part of police force, it's the duty of CID to arrest the parents as soon as possible. and no police officer has the right or power to take the decision of giving the child to them, it entirely depends on the decision of Court.

GD, u are a talented writer, and now u are writing about a dark a dirty side of society. a little more homework is expected from you. waiting for the next part.👍🏼

Am here only to reply to the bold lines. Well is it what you think of India, that the laws which were laid at the time of constitution making are now being implemented?
Am astonised that you still qoute down the laws when we all quite clearly know that the laws are no more than a paper work. How many times they made the law that states free education for girl child but still majority is uneducated.
So there is no need to quote the same for this case. Because these types of things happends frequently and no one is UNaware of this.
And if you think that all this is not happening in India then it is happening all around the world.

Originally posted by: gadhadada

@BHALOO, plz Baccha... dunt Let this Issue as KD (SHREELA) was absolutely Correct and after Her Comments, I again Review My Story...

i gave all answers after the last part... ok...😊

plz be Relax...😊

Dada I was replying to Shreela di for only those bold lines...and as for the rest of the comments I left for you to answer her..
Actually this is what a bitter truth is... we can't stop quoting the laws.

Originally posted by: gadhadada

I wanted to Experience that What a Reader feel in Hanging Position...😉

Awestruch Mode...😳

Heartwrenching...😳

so many Big Big Words/Feel...😳😃

these are My Assets that U all feel during Reading what I feel during Writing...👏

Thank You so much...😳👏😳

you really need that Dada to understand what we feel when you left us with anxiety for next parts😆.. Words are really very short for the emotions in the story😳😳..

Actually, untill the story series is over..many doubts remain unclear. Every thing depends on how it progresses.. If I consider this part only asusual Dada's writing is fabulous..but the whole story about a very sensitive issue needs clarification for many aspects.. That's why I decide to wait till end..But I also think that Team should investigate or order local police to investigate about the parents of the baby.

Wow i mean really ow GD. The concept of your DNA story was so mind blowing that i am speechless. At first i thought you are writing about Neha but when i found out the real reason i was like awww. You wrote the first part of the story in a realistic way that made our heartbeats run faster. Seriously my heart beats increased really fast at the starting of this story. The way Daya found the baby in the jungle was heart breaking. I cried a lot at the scene and i am still crying while typing. Never expected a story like this. I liked how Abhijeet looked after Daya when he was asking for the baby even though he was in pain himself. Just loved it when the team got happy when they found out that DUO could adopt the baby. The name selection ceremony was just wow. I was to shocked just like the rest of the team members plus ACP sir when Daya said Nakul achanank se . It was really impressive. And then the bonding between all of them was so cute. Just like every parent Daya was also happy when Nakul could start crawling and then walking. My favorite part of the whole story was Baba and Papa awww. And the the ending part was just mind blasting. How can a mother just leave the child near the jungle and accept it back also. From my heart i am thinking just like Daya sir about not giving Nakul away and finding Abhijeet wrong but if i think from the brain then Abhijeet is right no matter how much love you give to a child you cannot replace their mother.The nervous breakdown scene and after coming out of coma the speech that he gave indirectly to Abhijeet was heart wrenching. I couldn't stop crying. Jaldi update karo GD and next part mein itna na rulana nahi please.

Originally posted by: .Nishi.

Wow amazing dada. ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏
wonderful 👏
a painful story.
Hope all is well at last.
Post the next part soon.

Originally posted by: awesum_life

Read half of it... half left...the way u started the story is mindblowing.. why does FW miss such scenes... it cud make cid classy.. appoint urself as a story writer.. dono behan bhai mil kar stories likhna aur issi bahane shreya ko DS se dur rakhna...

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

Actually, untill the story series is over..many doubts remain unclear. Every thing depends on how it progresses.. If I consider this part only asusual Dada's writing is fabulous..but the whole story about a very sensitive issue needs clarification for many aspects.. That's why I decide to wait till end..But I also think that Team should investigate or order local police to investigate about the parents of the baby.

Originally posted by: Soni.

Wow i mean really ow GD. The concept of your DNA story was so mind blowing that i am speechless. At first i thought you are writing about Neha but when i found out the real reason i was like awww. You wrote the first part of the story in a realistic way that made our heartbeats run faster. Seriously my heart beats increased really fast at the starting of this story. The way Daya found the baby in the jungle was heart breaking. I cried a lot at the scene and i am still crying while typing. Never expected a story like this. I liked how Abhijeet looked after Daya when he was asking for the baby even though he was in pain himself. Just loved it when the team got happy when they found out that DUO could adopt the baby. The name selection ceremony was just wow. I was to shocked just like the rest of the team members plus ACP sir when Daya said Nakul achanank se . It was really impressive. And then the bonding between all of them was so cute. Just like every parent Daya was also happy when Nakul could start crawling and then walking. My favorite part of the whole story was Baba and Papa awww. And the the ending part was just mind blasting. How can a mother just leave the child near the jungle and accept it back also. From my heart i am thinking just like Daya sir about not giving Nakul away and finding Abhijeet wrong but if i think from the brain then Abhijeet is right no matter how much love you give to a child you cannot replace their mother.The nervous breakdown scene and after coming out of coma the speech that he gave indirectly to Abhijeet was heart wrenching. I couldn't stop crying. Jaldi update karo GD and next part mein itna na rulana nahi please.