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Originally posted by: duoa

wow simply awesome dada

m speechless

just amazing very emotional😭😭

Originally posted by: pinky118

Awesome Dada...Hats off to u👏

so emotional story😭

the all scenes of DUO was in front of my eyes...

By the way Dada the dec 2012 part was from which episode???

Originally posted by: medha99

wowieee awesome story GD

srsly luv it

how well u write!👏👏

N I was crying reading d story...😭😭

but wowie GD👏

M SPEECHLESS!!!

Originally posted by: Forfriend

BH

Iss bar sach me aapne kamal kar diya...

dard dard ka aahaisas bhaiyo ka pyaar fir pachatawa... sab kuch bohot hi khubi se likha

or her story ki tarah end me sab kuch fin nahi kiya yeh bhi sarahniy bat kar di...

acha laga ki Daya ke dil me woh dard aapne rakh diya... per uss dard ke sath hi daya ki wapas karwadi...

her bar her ek gum ko uhh dil se nikal na possible nahi hota...

kayi bar koi bat dil me aaise chubati hai ki ussaka asar puri jindgi reh jata hai

daya ne sambhal ke raki hue chije or Abhijeet ki diary

OMG sab purane ache lamho ki yaad dila di

thank you BH 🤗

Abhi tak first part hi padha hai. Will post my review after reading part 2.

I am so proud of u GD! 😃 u did a great job in this part.👏👏

Great story Dada !! Hats off to you !!
Loved everything since the beginning. Points raised by Shreela di were noticed by me hence I don't feel like repeating them.
Part 2 was par excellence and there's nothing to point out in it. It was pure, emotional and I felt the golden era flashbacks flashing everywhere. Those dialogues were echoing through my head. Loved the concept of recollecting old memories.
CID team made a superb plan to get hold of Daya sir. He doubted them as I had guessed earlier but the plan didn't fail 😆
Overall, a great story once again.

Ok.. So finally braced myself and read the story and again cried. Not as much as in first part but cried. You promised me you will make me accept Daya was right and Abhijeet was wrong and give strong reasons for that. The reasons said by Daya are his personal ones. Family of kid by whatever reasons abondoned him and only came again when they got to know they can't have kids again shows how selfish they were. But still they cared and now will continue to do so i guess after knowing entire CID is with him!

Originally posted by: gadhadada

😆 Everyone Not so Chaper Chaper like Me na...😉

Yes RAAZ Baccha, after Long time, My Heart Brutally Hurted and after little Soothing to get the Courage😳, I started to Write and u can't Believe that I wrote 53 Pages in just Few Hours as I just wanted to Expel My pain, Anger, Hurt, Helplessness and Wrenching...😭😭😭

It was One of the Story Which Cried Me alot...😭😭😭

Its Every Word engulfed in My Tear...😭😭

Thank you so much that U like it, U feel it and Expressed it...👏😳👏

I really feel Myself JAWAN after Reading Ur's and Other Feedback...🤗

Thank you so much RAAZ Baccha...🤗