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Originally posted by: duoa

kamaal dhamaal story GD g

loved every twist

great ,awesome ,paisa wasool story😆

Originally posted by: ..Candy..

Sorrry again fr late reply:-P

btw hey bhagwan!!!
What a khatarnak bday plan...
Esa toh sirf aur sirf Daya sir hi kar skte hay..!!!😉😆

Padhte padhte sacchi mujhey GAME OVER series yaad aa gyi...ufff...dar gyi me toh..😛

Kya likhte ho dada..kha se aaya ye dimag..sacchi khatarnak hay..

Keep wrtng more n more..
Take care..
Happy friendship day!!!

Originally posted by: misha.as

Sorry for late GD. 😔

Again a very Lovely story... ⭐️ 👏
Bday suprise ko intna shocking suprise bana diya... Bechare abhi sir...
Like it..😊
Well written...[=D]

Thank u...

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ A classy masterpiece is the story Dada⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️. Fast paced, very well written.. I really liked how you incorporated caps with the scenes👍🏼👍🏼.. Specially the title cap was so scary😆.. Kya mast birthday gift di hai Daya sir ne Abhi sir ko 😎 😉 . 20 saal toh kya, Abhi sir jindagi bhar yaad rakhenge aisa gift 😛 . Initially I thought Daya sir is really kidnapped but after the 1st clue got that its his plan 😛. Involvement of Acp sir as voice of master mind is also a nice, warm touch🤗.. Loved Abhi sir's comment with naughtiness after knowing Daya sir's fullproof plan : agar bukh, pyass se mar jata toh😛😛?? Haan, Daya sir ki itni mehnat waste ho jati😆... You describe each and every scene so well Dada that I can see all in mind's eye⭐️⭐️. Just a small correction😳.. It will be 3 and 5 am on 21st july after 12 am instead of 3 and 5 pm😳. In a word, MARVELLOUS 😳😳 bday gift for Abhi sir and also for us.. A big round of applause to you Dada👏👏👏 and a biggy huggy 🤗🤗🤗 as return gift for Duo and you🤗🤗.
Are we going to get a cute popat story next😉😉😛??

Originally posted by: devildiva21

hey so sorry for the late comment gd...!!😳

again a super duper hit story...!!!😉

wow abhi sir was so excited for his birthday and wanted to solve the case before 21 so that he could enjoy hsi birthday...!!!

he wanted a memorable birthday and daya sir ne kya plan diya...!!😆 by god... abhi sir was so scared...!!

waise kya fultu plan tha by god... sab mile hue acp sir se leke tarika tak...!!!😆

abhi sir was so shocked seeing everyone's participation...!!! love the way he tried and identify everyone...!!!

lol wai pe daya sir ko marna chalu😆 ab kaam hi aisa kiya hai... baal katwa liye?? to isliye aaya ye idea kya?😆

and everyone else was enjoying these scoldings😆

abhi sir's talk to daya sir at the end was very heart touching and lovely...!!! iss plan ne bht kuch sikha diya unhe... awww <3 <3 <3

aur end mai phir se cell and titan watch😆

that scene was very cute...!!!

loved the story...!!

👏 ⭐️

waiting for the next story😉

oh mujhe lga hi tha ki its related to movie ...can u plz tell me the name of Movie😳...nd its nt at all a boring story Gd...actualy its interesting to read...or waise bhi mera Rahul apni Kalm se kuch likhe or Anjali bore ho jaye...chance hi nhi h boss😃

Originally posted by: anjali_mahajan

oh mujhe lga hi tha ki its related to movie ...can u plz tell me the name of Movie😳...nd its nt at all a boring story Gd...actualy its interesting to read...or waise bhi mera Rahul apni Kalm se kuch likhe or Anjali bore ho jaye...chance hi nhi h boss😃

Really really sorry GD. Maine socha meinee Canada jaine se phela Yummy Mistake story ka review dediya hai lekin sahyed jaldi jaldi mein bhool gaye. Extremely sorry GD to keep you waiting. Acha ab deti ho story ka review. Mein kya kaho GD tum to already janti ho ke tumare har story ek masterpiece hoti hai. It was cute and sweet story GD just like you. Kuch parts mein to has hss ke pait dard karne laga tha. Really enjoyed reading it. A total mast wali story. Abhii sir ke Birthday ke chakkar mein bechaare mera Daya sir ko do do thappad khaane pade. So sad lol lekin GD is story se apna dil khush kardeta. Itna acha acha moments jo likhe jo sirf aphi ke stories mein milta hai. Acha gift diya apne Adi sir ko. Aise he first class stories likti rahi aur hume khush karte raho.

Originally posted by: gadhadada

arry Itna acha Plan tha n U said its faltu Plan...😲

baal Kaat dun ga DEVIL cz I m EVIL with D silent...😉🤣

Haan Ganjy bacchy ko Buht Maar, Khoonum Khoon kr diya...😛

Thank you so much DEVIL DEVA...😳