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Lovely and shocking story dada ⭐️ 👏
abhi sir ke to halat kharab kar di 😛
what a bday plan dada. Abhi sir ko hamesa yaad rehega. 😆
At last abhi sir knowm that Daya sir is allright, the best gift of him.
⭐️
very very well write. 👏

Was waiting for a story. Will read soon and post my feedback.

And, I'll miss you 🤗

for me Its all like dreamy nd scary story Gd
wt a well proofed plan 👏
lgta h baal ktwane ke baad bhai ka dimaag kuch jada chlne lga h 😆
Abhi bhai ke sath sacch bohot bura hua...kitna drr gye the wo
bhai ke liye kya kya nhi kiya n jb pta chla to its all planned...to boss marna to bnta tha
bechare Abhi bhai chale the apna b'day remembrable bnane n ye to lifetime tk yaadgaar rhega...😃

i like the first part wn abhi sir said "muje phr se cell or titan watch nhi chahiye"
n "is baar kuch aisa chahiye ki muje hmesha yaad rhe" or bhai ka deemag dekho fully remembrable bna diya...hehe 😃

its realy well planned nd i like the disguise scenes alott
every moment wn daya bhai describe the plan to abhi bhai 😃

nd daya bhai ne pehli baar itna jada deemag lgaya n unhe mila kya punches, slaps 😃
bt yes this time he deserve ...kitna preshan kiya bade bhai ko bt bhai ke lips n eye corner se blood nikl gya punches se...thats litle hurt
nd i like last part too...wt abhi bhai said was gud n quite true...nd bhai give him watch again...hehe 😃

so Gd well done boss 👍🏼 u write nicely 👏 nd its totaly hatke story nd filmy too coz itne planning ke liye bohot paisa chahiye hota h boss n fw wale to h hi kangaal 😉...budget concious 😃 ...wo itne paise to dete nhi ki itna sb planning ka khrcha bhai utha ske😉...even puri team mil kr bhi nhi...😆😃😆

Anyways do write boss nd m nt miss u coz miss unhe krte h jo pass na ho bt tum to mere pass hmesha mere dil mein rehte ho na...😉😊 Rahul 😊

Such a long story but finding it interesting.. will read it soon!

why so serious gd?

Sorry for late reviewing.. anyways now coming to the story..
It's really great. But at the starting I was quite sure that Daya had plan all this for Abhi's birthday.. and somewhere in the middle I was thinking ke is baar Bhaijaan Bade Bhai ko maarne ka plan to nahi bana rahe.. 😆
I really cracked up at Ganjey part.. 😆
and lovely starting of the story.. so you dedicated two stories to Bade bhai on his birthday..
I think he will not only remember this birthday but he will get nightmares of all the adventure he did..
Keep rocking boss.. Keep bringing more good stories...
and loved the part where ACP revealed his part..

That was a lovely story GD... Just loved every bit of it.. Kamaal kar diya aap ne..!! The mastermind plan was superb..!!👏

kamaal dhamaal story GD g

Sorrry again fr late reply:-P

btw hey bhagwan!!!
What a khatarnak bday plan...
Esa toh sirf aur sirf Daya sir hi kar skte hay..!!!😉😆

Padhte padhte sacchi mujhey GAME OVER series yaad aa gyi...ufff...dar gyi me toh..😛

Kya likhte ho dada..kha se aaya ye dimag..sacchi khatarnak hay..

Keep wrtng more n more..
Take care..
Happy friendship day!!!

Sorry for late GD. 😔

Again a very Lovely story... ⭐️ 👏
Bday suprise ko intna shocking suprise bana diya... Bechare abhi sir...
Like it..😊
Well written...[=D]

Thank u...