Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147) - Page 27

Originally posted by: Mansi.

Nice story thank god there was actually daraar😆 i wanted this from FW but u did it...well done👏

Originally posted by: maggi.masala

I am late...vry vry sry
But was delighted to read ur story dada...
It was intersting as always...thrilling action packed suspence...almst evrythng..
Initially i thought Abhi name will stand for Abhijeet sir...but u came with the twist as it was for daya sir... Hmm...was bit confused in middle but it was all cleared till the end...
Now this is called a real daraar...👏
Maza aa gya as usual... Thnx for writing the alternate version of Fw's daraar... 😎
I can really imagine the firey eyes of abhi sir... 😈 😳
Thanx a lot...

Originally posted by: Chints09

@ DADA...

FABULOUS STORY and PLOT...👏

Narration of STORY also MIND BLOWING...👍🏼

This is QUIET GOOD from FW'S DARAAR...
But due to MIX UP of IB and CBI.. your INVESTIGATION PARTS was not CLEAR and also LOOP HOLES in that..
INVESTIGATION PART is 2 LOW in this DARAR...👎🏼😔

Over all everything was AWESOME...👍🏼👏
CONGRATULATION on another SUCCESS of STORY..🥳

Originally posted by: Forfriends

Well done DADA

first Congo

As a writer its your victory that you able to twist readers mind as you want 👏👏

now about your story

Main part of Daaraar wow You done full Justis to plot as well as title 👏

and side story of Scams Very nice 👏

last explanation and end of daarar just too good 👏

and Yeh kya Ab toh tumne ACP sir ko resigning ki bimari laga di 😆

Originally posted by: neeme

uff.itni sari investigation mera tu sar k uper sa guzar gae Kye karon adat nae na Rae CID dakh dakh ka..GD learn From CID 😆😆

Chlu Now Abt Story.. as a Story it was really gud.. You always Tries to Present somthng different in ur story..Ur hardwork clearly shows in Ur story..👏👏 either u asked abt itt from ur frends or used Google..But behind all this Its all Ur Mind.. Many time it was confusing for me.. may be i was So so Tired when i read that story..and i was like to read itt in hurry..Bcz i was Quite excited for this Story..But its not ur mistake.. Ur plot was Not confusing..

Chlu tareef bht ho gae nOw abt Darrer.. bcz u knw i always Compare Series or any cop centric Episode with the title😉.. Darrer was there but not like that wise i was expecting..Sorry GD but it was not according to my expectation.. Abhijeet can ask abt the whole story behind that case file in one go..why one time fight between duo then a long Investiagtion case and then in the end Everythng cleared Between Duo all of sudden.they can solve itt when theydiscussed it first time.it was not big deal between them. i was expeting the whole story on Darrer... Even the investigation on Darrer.. like ur initial Stories... i don't remember the exact name of ur those stories but ur whole story was based on DUO..somtimes without investigation part.. but when Investigation part is there it was also based on DUO... i was expecting somthng like that...

Ur story, Plot and everythng was very Gud..But I was Expecting somthng else naa...

Originally posted by: PARO..16

Firstly..i am so sorry for being late..
I hope Chasmah ji forgives this little baccha😳

Now about Story..
It was as awesome as usual..😃
Inni saari investigation ke mera DImaag hi ghum gaya..but fir CID Daraar dekhi to sab normal ho gaya😉😆
The part where Daya sir is confincing Abhijeet that he is not criminal was really very emotional😭😭
Duo parts were Great as usual..
Daya sir was sooo cute through out😳
Again a awesome story..LOOVVVED it
for u..🤗🤗🤗