Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147)

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: khota_sikka_sri

Jooten koi aur maarega. Mere ko toh bahut achi lagi aapki story. 👏

WOW😃... wou Apna tou kuch aisa hee hay Boss... 😉😉

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Mehak

@maggi.masala

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Posted: 13 years ago

#252

I am late...vry vry sry
But was delighted to read ur story dada...
It was intersting as always...thrilling action packed suspence...almst evrythng..
Initially i thought Abhi name will stand for Abhijeet sir...but u came with the twist as it was for daya sir... Hmm...was bit confused in middle but it was all cleared till the end...
Now this is called a real daraar...👏
Maza aa gya as usual... Thnx for writing the alternate version of Fw's daraar... 😎
I can really imagine the firey eyes of abhi sir... 😈 😳
Thanx a lot...

Edited by maggi.masala - 13 years ago

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nidhi

@abhijeet.bhai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#253

GD nay chak die pathe nice story jaar😆

and thanx for the pm next time pahla pm mujhe kerna😈

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605921

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Posted: 13 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: abhijeet.bhai
GD nay chak die pathe nice story jaar😆
and thanx for the pm next time pahla pm mujhe kerna😈

😡 mere copy nhe kia kar 😡

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Chintan

@ArRoGaNT-CHINTs

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#255

@ DADA...

FABULOUS STORY and PLOT...👏

Narration of STORY also MIND BLOWING...👍🏼

This is QUIET GOOD from FW'S DARAAR...
But due to MIX UP of IB and CBI.. your INVESTIGATION PARTS was not CLEAR and also LOOP HOLES in that..
INVESTIGATION PART is 2 LOW in this DARAR...👎🏼😔

Over all everything was AWESOME...👍🏼👏
CONGRATULATION on another SUCCESS of STORY..🥳

Edited by Chints09 - 13 years ago

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GIRL_SHERLOCK

@GIRL_SHERLOCK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Nice Feedback GS...😃
i really like Ur DP as well...😳
THANK U...😳😳

Thank - you very much gadhadada !! 😃
And you're welcome !! 😃

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neeme

@neeme

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#257

uff.itni sari investigation mera tu sar k uper sa guzar gae Kye karon adat nae na Rae CID dakh dakh ka..GD learn From CID 😆😆

Chlu Now Abt Story.. as a Story it was really gud.. You always Tries to Present somthng different in ur story..Ur hardwork clearly shows in Ur story..👏👏 either u asked abt itt from ur frends or used Google..But behind all this Its all Ur Mind.. Many time it was confusing for me.. may be i was So so Tired when i read that story..and i was like to read itt in hurry..Bcz i was Quite excited for this Story..But its not ur mistake.. Ur plot was Not confusing..

Chlu tareef bht ho gae nOw abt Darrer.. bcz u knw i always Compare Series or any cop centric Episode with the title😉.. Darrer was there but not like that wise i was expecting..Sorry GD but it was not according to my expectation.. Abhijeet can ask abt the whole story behind that case file in one go..why one time fight between duo then a long Investiagtion case and then in the end Everythng cleared Between Duo all of sudden.they can solve itt when theydiscussed it first time.it was not big deal between them. i was expeting the whole story on Darrer... Even the investigation on Darrer.. like ur initial Stories... i don't remember the exact name of ur those stories but ur whole story was based on DUO..somtimes without investigation part.. but when Investigation part is there it was also based on DUO... i was expecting somthng like that...

Ur story, Plot and everythng was very Gud..But I was Expecting somthng else naa...