Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147)

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.ACHU.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#281

thanks for ur clarifications...(ek complete nhi hai)

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gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: .ACHU.
thanks for ur clarifications...(ek complete nhi hai)

Sorry kaun sa Complete nahi hay except that Case File... 😕

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.ACHU.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#283

case file ki hi baat kr rhi thi. Its okay..aaraam se de dijiega.

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gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: .ACHU.
case file ki hi baat kr rhi thi. Its okay..aaraam se de dijiega.

yes i asked this to BHAI n BARAY BHAI or KD then Reply U... 😃

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gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: vermamegha
very nice story🤗🥳

ohhh LOVELY😳... THANK U so much...😳😳

Originally posted by: vermamegha
hiii i m new member...

and Well Come in IF and CID Forum😳... its really a Pleasure that U open Ur Posts account after Posting Urs First Post on My Story😳... hope U will be activate Here VERMA... 👏

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Posted: 13 years ago

#286

Ist of all m sorry
hr var ki tarah is var v late lateef in feedback
congo dada
fabulous plot bt hv confusion in detetcion
uff kitna ghooma dia detection time mera to dimag ghoom gya
bt bad main smjh aa gya kisne kisko giraya or kya giraya...hehehe
joking apart
overall fantastic
bt yar darar part smjh nhi aya
mujhe excitment thi ki last main daya sir bht bdha dhamaka krenge apni gawahi ki asliyat btakr
bt vaisa kuch nhi hua
abhi sir bina sch jane bht hyper ho gye
mujhe ye bilkul v acha nhi lga
aainda se apne chashme ko boldo mere duo ke beech darar nhi pdhni chahie
end is two senti especialy hsptl scene
thanku dada
keep it up
rulate rho n hasate rho
gud luck

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gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: AmanDeep24
Ist of all m sorry
hr var ki tarah is var v late lateef in feedback
congo dada
fabulous plot bt hv confusion in detetcion
uff kitna ghooma dia detection time mera to dimag ghoom gya
bt bad main smjh aa gya kisne kisko giraya or kya giraya...hehehe
joking apart
overall fantastic
bt yar darar part smjh nhi aya
mujhe excitment thi ki last main daya sir bht bdha dhamaka krenge apni gawahi ki asliyat btakr
bt vaisa kuch nhi hua
abhi sir bina sch jane bht hyper ho gye
mujhe ye bilkul v acha nhi lga
aainda se apne chashme ko boldo mere duo ke beech darar nhi pdhni chahie
end is two senti especialy hsptl scene
thanku dada
keep it up
rulate rho n hasate rho
gud luck

its OK DEEP...😊

about UR some Queries...❓

hmmm DHAMAKA... wat kind of Dhamaka U expected...😆

dekho yaar as a Character u knew that DAYA Sir is an Honest person😳... tou agar koi Ghalat kaam kiya hota tou CID pehlay hee Chor detay😊... ab koi UnUsual Dhamaka main ker deta tou obviously CID say un ki Chutti ho jati aur Tum logun say JOOTY alug partay😆... khair wat U expect abt that Dhamaka...??!!!😉

abt ABHI Sir, yup He really got Hyper because initially He casulaly Talk to DAYA Sir and thought that DAYA Sir told Him the all as after seeing DAYA Sir Tension, His Doubt was Correct that Somthing is there which is Fishy😕... then He asked Him but DAYA Sir mishandledd the Scene and when He said that Main Tumhein Her Baat ka Jawab Dena Zaruri Nahi samjhta😭... ABHI Sir Hurts alot and if I show any thing from ABHI Sir past ... its quite Difficult for Me to Handle it...🤢

but Thank U so much for ur Support and Encouragement as U are always on My Back...🤗

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megha verma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#288

very nice story ... thank you

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halfbloodprince

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Posted: 13 years ago

#289

Now this is something which really stands out and does complete justice to the famous title. Loved this story just like every story of yours. All the scenes were carried out in an impressive manner and ofcourse it's better than the original 'Daraar'.

Great story Dada! My words get lesser day by day to describe your work.

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gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: -Shruti
Now this is something which really stands out and does complete justice to the famous title. Loved this story just like every story of yours. All the scenes were carried out in an impressive manner and ofcourse it's better than the original 'Daraar'.

Great story Dada! My words get lesser day by day to describe your work.

Speechless Baccha..!!!🤗🤗🤗