Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147)

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Trouble_king

@Trouble_king

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Posted: 13 years ago

#271

good story. This flower is for you.
But my small brain is so confused. But its ok.

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: Sona.l

good story. This flower is for you.
But my small brain is so confused. But its ok.

ohhh... THANK U so much for UR Lovely Flower SONA Bccha...😳

and So Sorry to Ur Munna Brain...😉

chalo just Read the Last patch... hope UR Brain did not find any Confusion...😆

skip the Start n Middle...😊

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Shruti Chatterjee

@shreela

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Posted: 13 years ago

#273

Wow wow wow!! this is my GD! simply awesome!🤗 love u and ur story.👏😃

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Chashmish

@VevaH

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#274

Superb Story Dada

Mind Blowing Narration

Nyc Concept of Daraar 👏

apne tuo FW ki Daraar Series ko bhi takkar maar di thatz wht i wana saw ON SCREEN 😍

i wz imagining the Scenarioz where DUO showz their Brothery affectionz 4 each other,luvly momentz 😳

the Pain full Situationz n Emotionz btweeen My DUO ,makez me a bit 😒

I jst Luved ur writting Style,the way u mould all situationz,A big hand of Applause👏

i wish i could Eat ur Earz 4 Writting such Sada Bahaar Storties alwayz :)

(Oops jst in Hugging sense only,nothing else,hope U cn Understand my Feelingz😉

(sry if my feedback iz a bit naughty,but plz do adjst)😆

may U alwayz get Sucesss wth Flying Colorz,all the best 4 upcoming Projects 😳

Edited by vevah - 13 years ago

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: shreela
Wow wow wow!! this is my GD! simply awesome!🤗 love u and ur story.👏😃

ain😲... No Loop Holes😉... No Criticism...😉

yaar KD ye kiya...

here I M prepare with All Sabut... 😈

aur aap nay ITNI TIGHT HUG day ker Case khulnay say pehlay hee Band ker diya...😆

THANK U yaar...😳

U are also the Most Important part of this Story...😊

without UR FREE😉 Help its almost Impossible to complete it...😃

so a BIG Appaluase for U 👏👏

with a Big Beary THANK U Hug... 🤗

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: vevah
Superb Story Dada
Mind Blowing Narration
Nyc Concept of Daraar 👏
apne tuo FW ki Daraar Series ko bhi takkar maar di thatz wht i wana saw ON SCREEN 😍
i wz imagining the Scenarioz where DUO showz their Brothery affectionz 4 each other,luvly momentz 😳
the Pain full Situationz n Emotionz btweeen My DUO ,makez me a bit 😒
I jst Luved ur writting Style,the way u mould all situationz,A big hand of Applause👏
i wish i could Eat ur Earz 4 Writting such Sada Bahaar Storties alwayz :)
(Oops jst in Hugging sense only,nothing else,hope U cn Understand my Feelingz😉
(sry if my feedback iz a bit naughty,but plz do adjst)😆

may U alwayz get Sucesss wth Flying Colorz,all the best 4 upcoming Projects 😳

the so Pretty and Beautiful KAAN KHANA FEEDBACK...😆

larki Tum nay kya samjha hua hay Mujhy...😡

FREE mein Kaan kha rahi ho...😉

chalo Paisay Nikalo... foran... 😈

yaar I m so Shocked that How Could Readers imagine My Story...😲😲

THANK U for understanding all Jestures, Postures, Anger, Tears, Smiles with the Help of UR Heart/Bheja...😳😳

chalo baccha JEETI raho😳... Khush raho...😳

Hamesha...🤗

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Soniya..Shapath

@Soniya..Shapath

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#277

I know am too late in posting but the story was really awsome the thoughts emotions and investigation you created is really wonderful honestly I said that when I seen the title I think its similar to serial so i read it in starting as a boring mind but when Abhijeet got the mamta foundation file its realy become intresting plz do not think to beat me at last I only says that😳

😳YOUR

STORY

😆 AWSOME AT BILLION TIME😉

👏

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.ACHU.

@.ACHU.

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#278

GD a big sorry main late ho gayi.
Again a very good story 👏 . FW ki story se 1000 times better. Thanks alot.
Kuch swal puchna hai aapse :
* AKASH-AKSHARA CASE sirf Abhijeet sir ko Pune phunchane keliye tha na?
* Duo convo ke baad beauro aakar kaun se pose mein khade the ki Acp sir ne bhi notice ki?
* Daya sir Abhijeet sir se chupkr kise call kr rhe the?
* Abhijeet sir ko case file se pta nhi chala Daya sir ne ilzam apne uper liye the?
* Abhijeet sir aur Daya sir ek dusare ko pehchane kyun nhi?(shayad DARAAR ke wajah se)[JUMBLE PLANNING]
GD swal zyada ho gaye na woh main budhu hun samajh mein nhi aayi toh puch liya.
Woh shopping mall wale act se mujhe ek movie ki yaad aa gayi.(Anil Kapoor's Khel). And what a dialogue "khaany kay waanday thay zameer kay nahi".
Aapne confusion create krne ki koshish kiye hai. ABHI ko Ajay Mehta ke personal staff mein enter karwane ke baad suddenly Abhijeet sir se Acp sir ko phone karwa diye.
Password ka idea very nice.
And woh Hathi dialogue..bechare Daya sir. Aapne phir se Daya sir ko hospital phucha diya.
Aur Acp sir ko kb se resignation ka bhoot swar ho gaye?

Aapki story humesha ki tarah AWESOME hai. Thank you.

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: Soniya..Shapath
I know am too late in posting but the story was really awsome the thoughts emotions and investigation you created is really wonderful honestly I said that when I seen the title I think its similar to serial so i read it in starting as a boring mind but when Abhijeet got the mamta foundation file its realy become intresting plz do not think to beat me at last I only says that😳
😳YOUR
STORY
IS
😆 AWSOME AT BILLION TIME😉
👏

ain😲 its quite Surprise that How did U think I repeat the Similer PITA HUA SCRIPT of FW😆... haan TITLE similer tha ye bhi bus samjho Majbori thi😉... khair its really a pleasent to have Sincere and Honest Fans in My List😳... THANK U.😳.. and THANK U for Billion times as well... 😳

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#280

Originally posted by: .ACHU.
GD a big sorry main late ho gayi.
Again a very good story 👏 . FW ki story se 1000 times better. Thanks alot.
Kuch swal puchna hai aapse :
* AKASH-AKSHARA CASE sirf Abhijeet sir ko Pune phunchane keliye tha na?
* Duo convo ke baad beauro aakar kaun se pose mein khade the ki Acp sir ne bhi notice ki?
* Daya sir Abhijeet sir se chupkr kise call kr rhe the?
* Abhijeet sir ko case file se pta nhi chala Daya sir ne ilzam apne uper liye the?
* Abhijeet sir aur Daya sir ek dusare ko pehchane kyun nhi?(shayad DARAAR ke wajah se)[JUMBLE PLANNING]
GD swal zyada ho gaye na woh main budhu hun samajh mein nhi aayi toh puch liya.
Woh shopping mall wale act se mujhe ek movie ki yaad aa gayi.(Anil Kapoor's Khel). And what a dialogue "khaany kay waanday thay zameer kay nahi".
Aapne confusion create krne ki koshish kiye hai. ABHI ko Ajay Mehta ke personal staff mein enter karwane ke baad suddenly Abhijeet sir se Acp sir ko phone karwa diye.
Password ka idea very nice.
And woh Hathi dialogue..bechare Daya sir. Aapne phir se Daya sir ko hospital phucha diya.
Aur Acp sir ko kb se resignation ka bhoot swar ho gaye?

Aapki story humesha ki tarah AWESOME hai. Thank you.

hmmm... nahi yaar main ye saaray Queries Expect ker raha tha khas ker TWO of them... ok let me clear one by one...

* AKASH-AKSHARA CASE sirf Abhijeet sir ko Pune phunchane keliye tha na?

haan yaar... koi Solid reason tou dena tha na PUNE jany ka...

* Duo convo ke baad beauro aakar kaun se pose mein khade the ki Acp sir ne bhi notice ki?
Very Quiet even they did not Focus as well take intrest in that Case discussion...

* Daya sir Abhijeet sir se chupkr kise call kr rhe the?
He tried to call to his Khabri's at PUNE either ABHIJEET got anything from any of His Mishandeling, even He did not think for a minute for this case, he thought that He did sum wrong in General and ABHIJEET got it...

* Abhijeet sir ko case file se pta nhi chala Daya sir ne ilzam apne uper liye the?
No the Police did not keep the record of whole Case after Case moving to Court (but yaar ye mujhy saheh malum nahi ye mera idea hay... hope ghalt hee hoga but i must tell U after confirming it)...

* Abhijeet sir aur Daya sir ek dusare ko pehchane kyun nhi?(shayad DARAAR ke wajah se)[JUMBLE PLANNING]

coz of xtra Ordinary Good Makeover... 👏

Baaqi yaar THANK U so much😳 n Yes I got that scene from KHEL movie... Good Notice👏... and Sorry yaar about HAATHI dialogue per abhi tou aur aany hain.😉.. nahi ACP Sir per Bhoot nahi tha... He knew how to Handle His Both Deary Officers...👍🏼

THANKS for liking Dialogues, Passward idea, Confusion...😳

the Readers like U are Writers ASSETS😳... i think now I m also kept my All Assets under Passward Protection...😈🤣

thank U...🤗

Edited by gadhadada - 13 years ago