STORY - Khooni Building(completed) - Page 7

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sneh.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Ohhk Visrom I might be the last one to comment, Sorry dear. Your story was had only 1 lash if I am not wrong not pathetic lab scenes, Abhi Daya together all the time Trio magic there, Sachin used very less and more importantly had a logical reasons for murders so no ways it is a NK SS style story.

As usual story was beautifully woven involvement of Ravi in the story was superb, story was simple yet has an element of surprise. I liked it good work buddy 😃

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DJ_Apurva

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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice Story Visrom Di..👏. N really Sorry for late Reply.....😭

-Apurva

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visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

Cid_hd, there's a full length story on pg 1 of this thread.
Thanks to everyone who has liked/disliked and given feedbk.

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yasha

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Posted: 14 years ago

oh so it's complete...love ur story

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