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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Nice way to get things done from yourself. Let me also try and see if I can push myself.

Edited by sunnyp1414 - 15 years ago

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Last night I just imagined a scene about Abhijeet's coat. Read on......

Scene : Qualis

Night 11PM. Daya was driving back home from bureau with Abhijeet, Freddie and Vivek. It was raining heavily, so Freddie and Vivek left their bikes in the bureau and Daya offered to drop them off at their houses.

Freddie and Vivek were whispering something to each other.

Vivek(in a low voice): Freddie sir, aap Abhijeet sir se darte kyon hai? Woh kuch nahin kahenge...pooch lijiye.

Freddie(low voice): Tu humesha mujhe aisi salah deta hai, aur mujhe Abhijeet sir se daant padti hai.

Abhijeet: Freddie, Vivek, kya phus phus kar rahe ho?

Freddie : Kuch nahi sir.

Abhijeet: Nahin, nahin....maine suna tum dono mere bare mein kuch keh rahe the.

Vivek : Sir, Freddie sir aapse kuch poochna chahte hain.

Abhijeet : Kya?

Freddie: Woh...sir Tasha aur Kajal keh rahe the ki aap aaj smart dikh rahe hain.

Daya: Hahaha...kyon Freddie, aaj se pehle Abhijeet smart nahin dikh raha tha kya?

Freddie: Nahin sir...Abhijeet sir bina coat ke zyada smart dikhte hain.

(To Abhijeet) sir, aapne coat pehenna chod diya hai kya?

Abhijeet: Nahin Freddie...aaj subah baarish ho rahi thi, toh raincoat pehenna pada. Coat ke oopar raincoat comfortable nahin tha. Toh maine coat nikaal diya.

By then they reached Vivek's house, so Vivek got off. Then they reached Freddie's house and Freddie got off. Abhijeet and Daya were proceeding to Abhijeet's house.

Daya: BTW Abhijeet...is coat ka kya chakkar hai? Tum pehle coat nahin pehente the...achanak 2 saal pehle coat pehenna shuru kyon kiya?

Abhijeet: DIG Shamsher ne order kiya.

Daya: Kya? DIG Shamsher ne? (Big grin)

Abhijeet: Haan yaar...ek din ACP sir ne mujhe DIG Shamsher ke saath ek meeting ke liye bulaya. Unhone kaha ki senior officer ke saath meeting hai, isliye coat pehenkar aao. DIG sir impress ho gaye aur kaha ki main har roz coat pehenkar hi bureau mein aaon.

Daya: To aaj apna coat kyon chod diya?

Abhijeet: Main bhi bore ho gaya hoon coat pehenkar. Aur waise bhi DIG sir ko pata kaise chalega? Woh toh aaj-kal bureau mein aate hi nahin.

Daya: Haan...saal mein ek ya do baar aate hain. Woh bhi jab koi important case ho – tab.

And Daya drives on....

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Too good visrom. 🤣. Was just leaving, just came here and wow. Aj din achha jayega.
Very good. either no coat or bring back DIG Shamsher. It would be good If Abhijeet starts disobeying him till he returns.

Edited by sunnyp1414 - 15 years ago

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shaama

@shaama

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

this is a really good idea visrom..than god we have some thing to laugh about after a disappointing episode..and guess we know the secret of abhijeet sir's coat now 😉